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The novel was written by real people. However, it is very uncomfortable to describe a certain thing many times, and the protagonist takes some things for granted. For example, the protagonist thinks of something and then does it for a few days. People around him feel that it is right, even if it has been a habit for thousands of years. There are many small problems, but overall it is still worth reading. The author can continue to work hard for the four-star review.

The author is a newcomer, he has great potential, and his literary talent is beyond words! Please politely ask for an update!!

The writing style is very good, the narrative is smooth, the characters are vivid and arc-shaped, and the reading experience is comfortable. It is worth a try.

The scene switching is smooth and the interaction between different characters is very beautiful.

In fact, you may think that the chapters are very short, only a few dozen chapters, but in fact it is already 200,000 words, which is enough for you to read for a long time. My second volume is about to be finished. It is expected to be about 600,000 words. To be honest, the author did not expect that he could persist for so long. Fortunately, someone finally read it. From dozens of people every day to more than 200 people now, I am very grateful to several book friends for their continuous support. If it were not for them, I might have stopped writing. Now because of the need to prepare for exams, I can only type out more than 2,000 words of chapters every day, and I deeply apologize for this. In addition, I have been reading your book reviews, and I have also carefully read the valuable opinions of book friends. So far, I have not received a one-star evaluation. Even those who don't like my book will give me four stars. Thank you again for your readers. Because I am a new author, I was actually very confused at one time. I wanted to write the story well but my writing skills were not good enough. Many people said that my character portrayal was not good enough. I will try my best to make up for it in the third volume and strive to increase the interaction between the characters. Create a better character. Regarding the third volume of the continuous war, I am still very confused. Although the outline has been written, I don't know how to narrate it. It is written in a chronological style. The initial idea is still around the main line Chen Mo, the four auxiliary lines, Xiliang, Cao Cao, Liu Bei, Yuan Shao, interspersed with small characters to witness its rise and fall. If readers have any better suggestions, please let me know!

It's not easy to write about this subject. The author does a good job. Please work hard.

Personally, I feel it's okay. It's pretty good. Come on.

Well, I felt so disappointed. I had this feeling before when I first started reading. Then I got used to it after reading it. I didn't expect this long-lost feeling to appear again!

The writing is quite good. Anyway, just read whatever suits your taste. It is really not easy to find a book that suits your taste in the vast sea of ​​books!

The writing is very good and fluent, and the character descriptions are delicate and vivid.

It's beautiful and beautiful. The writing is really good. The writing style is exquisite, the plot is exciting, and the rhythm is first-rate. It's a rare good article.

The plot of the story is very good, the overall outline is good, and the writing is also very good. I like it very much!

I was attracted by the cover. It's so beautiful that I couldn't stop watching it. The characters are very good and each has its own characteristics. It's just a bit lacking. Can you please write more?

The opening chapter is very interesting, it captured my heart, I loved it so much

It is a thin book, the author has put in his hard work, the data is not good, and he insists on updating it. Good reviews help.

It's a good read, I like it so much, cheers up

Very interesting article, I enjoyed reading it

The writing is very good and very interesting [like] [like] [like], but Tomato is suitable for refreshing articles.

There is no doubt that this is the most enjoyable book on my bookshelf, with clear logic, well-organized and compact plot! The key is not hydrology!

After reading this article, I was pleasantly surprised. The conflict design of the plot is reasonable, not embarrassing, not contradictory, and wonderful.

Te Te Te Te Te Te Te It is a very good book, there is no one like it, and I will not accept any refutation! I hope you will continue to work hard and reach new heights!

The content is very exciting and interesting, and I also like the style of the book. It's not like other books that are watery and boring!

The writing is smooth and easy to read.

Wow wow wow, it's so exciting, I've already recommended it to my friends.

It's so beautiful and exciting. This book is so amazing to read. I want to read it every day.

A book worth reading for special decompression

I haven't read such a wonderful article in a long time. I read dozens of chapters in one go and I'm still not satisfied.

Good book good book good book

I wrote the words that I wanted to say but couldn't, and the emotions that I wanted to express but lacked the ability to express.

Come on, author, I am optimistic about you. I like the subject matter of the book. The angle is good and the writing is good. They should have checked the information. Worth recommending, remember to be careful