After the sun rose that day, there was just a strange layer of rust. People didn't take it seriously at first, but it wasn't until the evil ghosts became rampant that they realized it was the end of the world... The survivors survived in the cracks, the city fell, and the ghost master tried his best to protect the city. When people were happy with the strange retreat, he looked at the rusty sun and felt unprecedented trembling... The real terror has just begun.
Reader comments
Come on, there is room for improvement [Like]
It was okay, but the plot was similar to a mystery.
Imitate mystery but also have your own setting to win readers.
It's not bad, but some sentences feel a bit deliberately emphasized and feel a bit stiff. The other plot aspects are strangely good.
Nice. I don't know how to evaluate it. Anyway, it looks good. The psychology of the characters is quite delicate.
Come on, there is room for improvement [Like]
It was okay, but the plot was similar to a mystery. Imitate mystery but also have your own setting to win readers.
It's not bad, but some sentences feel a bit deliberately emphasized and feel a bit stiff. The other plot aspects are strangely good.
Nice. I don't know how to evaluate it. Anyway, it looks good. The psychology of the characters is quite delicate.