Doomsday: Beginning and the School Beauty Are Trapped in a Rental House

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 would have fired six times Must die. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. In short, The plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the character descriptions are spot-on!

The writing is good, but the protagonist can develop a little faster. Another very important point is, Your Name is Build a Home on Xuanwu's Back. Most readers are attracted by Xuanwu. After reading it, they feel that Xuanwu has no sense of existence. I suggest writing more scenes about Xuanwu, such as the scenes where Xuanwu fights with other superpowers or monsters, or the scenes where he shows his holiness in front of people.

I still hope that the author can strengthen himself, Xuanwu and the heroine. Don't have a fight where the heroine will be kidnapped and used as a hostage. I hope the author will consider adding a pet Xuanwu as a sea and land unit, and a sky unit later.

This book is still very good. At least it's much better than the various community God of War content. The protagonist is also relatively smart. Not like those. It is much better to do nothing and just think about women or grabbing resources one by one. The protagonist quickly develops himself in a relatively short period of time. Then he will use the kind of founding power to harvest resources for himself. It's not that kind of nanny story. However, this book still has some limitations. The protagonist, where I am looking now, is equivalent to being the number one in national strength in the entire country. And it's the kind that breaks. At this time, you should find a way to obtain a strong claim. Let yourself be able to legitimately control the name of this country. Just this name is enough. Even without actually being in charge. After that, he took his giant turtle with him. After all, this giant turtle has now mastered the ability of earth escape. You can take your pets to various cities directly in the name of collecting taxes. Ask for half of their crystal core resources. Presumably with the protagonist's current strength, as long as he doesn't go too far. And clean up some monsters and the like along the way. Most of those forces will teach you resources. After that, he used huge resources to quickly build himself up to level nine in a short period of time. Wouldn't it be equivalent to being invincible after that? At least it's invincible on Earth. As for dealing with enemies outside the starry sky, that will be a matter for later. I regret it, I thought it was an invincible article. Unexpectedly, even though there is a system, the protagonist is still frustrated repeatedly. I tolerated it when we met. After all, there are some things that are really unbelievable in the early stage and can be compared with the system. I don't want to talk about it later. Breaking through level 8 and level 9 requires sacred objects, but the system cannot provide them, I understand. But it really goes too far later. The protagonist has cheats and hasn't even broken through to level nine. Something breaks through early. Then the Dragon Kingdom is the weakest. All forces have basically mastered the method of breaking through the ninth level. As a result, there is no Dragon Kingdom. So disappointed.

Come on, follow your own ideas, but don't get into trouble, especially cuckolds.

It has surpassed 98% of Tomato novels. There are basically no poisonous points in the whole text (at least I can't see it). However, I feel that the combat power system is not well done (the combat power is inflated a bit too much). I hope the author can come back to it later, otherwise this book will be very difficult later (the combat power is not well done and the value is too large). Not much to say, I'm giving you five stars and I hope the author will update it quickly. It's not enough. Also, I feel that the system is a bit stretched, and there is not much difference between those with system upgrades and those without system upgrades (I feel like the author should want to write more plots, otherwise the protagonist is so many levels higher than others, and is always being crushed, which is nothing to watch). I feel that the biggest role of the system is superpowers, and it also upgrades others (but I don't know that because of this reason, the combat power of the people around the protagonist is a bit stretched, and they need to be promoted by the protagonist to improve their combat power. The gap with the subordinates of those who do not have the system is a bit big)

It seems to be stable. When I saw the low rating, I thought the author would cut it at the end. I clicked on the author's homepage and found that all the novels written by the previous author were finished [Like]

The author listened to the advice [Thinking] The protagonist was level 2 and the other characters were level 4. Around chapter 60, the protagonist and Xuanwu were both level 4 and the others were at level 5. The gap was much narrower and it was no longer considered a poisonous point. Remember to upgrade Xuanwu more often. Xuanwu can be one level higher than the protagonist, so the combat power will increase directly. The author can read more suggestions from book friends. I have the advantage of over 60 chapters and 600 chapters [laughing]

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666, Other people's level 4 protagonists are still level 2 in four or five days. It's okay to upgrade without giving the attribute value of 666. [Smile] I mentioned earlier that digestion is slow, but our protagonist can transform directly and exchange food for crystals without even a courier boy being quick [smile] [smile] [smile]

It's beautiful. Don't worry, there are not many people reading it now. The author holds on, keep writing, and pay more attention to the data to make sure you don't make mistakes. There will definitely be people reading it later.

It's pretty good for someone like me who pays attention to the plot and will automatically ignore any behavior that is not extremely unnatural. Moreover, it is common in many novels for the villain to succeed in causing trouble. In this book, the villain did not succeed, so it is not an eyesore or a dissuade.

After killing like this, will there still be 10,000 people left in the end?

Durian pizza was mixed with cement and gunpowder to make apple-flavored ice cream. The tardigrade ate it and told the elephant that eagle meat was delicious. The giraffe heard this and grabbed the whale and stuffed it into the rabbit's mouth. The ants set up a fire nearby to boil water. The mosquito invited the buffalo to brush the beef hot pot. The penguin was so scared that he flew into the sky carrying the polar bear. The owl stared at it.

The overall plot is okay, but the fighting scenes are a bit boring. I hope it is richer. The book is indeed a good book, but I feel that this kind of evolutionary rhythm will be a bit boring in the later stages.

Family members, these are the top 3 doomsday novels I have read. The protagonists are decisive in killing. They are not like the Madonna or the Stallion. They are logical. No other novel starts by turning in your brain first🧠 It is recommended for doomsday beast-controlling evolution.

To be honest, it's really not bad, those who say it's less powerful. Others can fight beyond the level, but your skills are supermodel and you pretend not to see them. Is it necessary to have strong combat power, and then be forced to accumulate world views and finally cultivate immortality? And the reason why the protagonist develops slowly is just because he still has humanity and is not a virgin at the same time. To be honest, it's hard to find a humane protagonist in apocalyptic novels on Rotten Tomatoes. Five stars presented.

This title delayed the performance of this book. The world view is grand and the writing is okay. Except for the roommate who appeared at the beginning, he never appeared again. Why did you get such a name? Does the author have a school beauty roommate in real life?

There are very few poisonous points, and the writing is quite good.

Not bad, not bad. Everyone has different opinions before chapter 60. It's a little bit poisonous. After a few chapters, you become invincible. As expected, you still need to build a base to level up quickly in numerical text.

This is much better-looking than those neighborhood gods of war, and it doesn't have those messy dog-licking starts where you have to fight with the strongest king, the uncle, and the aunt, to have a battle of wits and courage.

Pretty good, semi-invincible style, no brainlessness, Xiaodu can accept it and take a look

The early development did not snowball, which may result in a certain degree of lagging behind. Now it may be relatively late to establish power, allowing some people to take the lead. Readability b, content a, plot fluency a, overall look and feel b+ [eating melon]

I feel very good. After reading this novel, I think it's okay. It's not too toxic. The quality is very good. It's fast, but it's a little lacking. I'll support it.

It's very beautiful, and the apocalyptic writing is very good.

The author has had enough to eat and drink, a few cups of coffee and tea, rested for half an hour, and then continued to write. The process from being a street person to becoming a great master inevitably involves loneliness and persistent efforts.

Based on the author's sentence "Congratulations to the Bridegroom", I think five stars are reasonable

It's okay, the writing style needs to be improved

Very good, it's the kind of article I like to read

It's quite exciting, but I feel like the protagonist is not that strong.