HP: Heartthrob Plays Bai Yueguang in Shura Field

It's pretty good to watch, I'm a bit looking forward to it. The scene in the back where the heroine falls out after maxing out her love points. I think it's interesting that all the members are black [smile][smile] @

Great work, I have only read 30 chapters. I am still serializing it and want to save some articles [Sending my heart] The heroine is a heartthrob. It is suitable for both men and women. She is not motivated and is purely a guide. The heroine is a refined egoist who will do whatever it takes to achieve her goals. She will hold all the vicious dogs in her hands. She will also let the vicious dogs take the initiative to pass the rope to the heroine from the perspective of the prey. The heroine is not brainless [Sending my heart] Slytherin. From time to time, she will come to Shura Field. The heroine will formulate reasonable strategy directions for each different strategy target. It makes me happy to read Otome novels where everyone revolves around the heroine. This article shouldn't have such a low score. You can buy shares [send your heart][send your heart][send your heart]

The writing is very good! Everyone's story in the guide is very interesting, and some inconspicuous little characters are also included! Theodore is really paranoid, and the way he attacks Tom is also very touching. Blaise sees the same kind, and he says he hates it but actually loves it. Hermione is blooming, and her cousin is really suitable to be the main palace. And Harry and Draco are so useless. Harry is indeed the face control, and Draco is still so funny... (I feel like I can say a lot) Looking forward to the next story of Tom and Avis! Come on come on!

Five stars exploded! HP fandom's treasured divine text, the heart-throb + Shura Field + White Moonlight setting directly hits the point! The heroine is not a brainless Mary Sue. She plays Bai Yueguang with a sense of proportion - gentle but not a virgin, sober and a little cunning, and every interaction is full of tension. There is no embarrassing OOC, and each character's preferences are sweet but not greasy. The writing is smooth and healing, and the characters are vivid. I couldn't stop staying up late to catch up on it. I'm still recalling various famous scenes after reading it. The author will speed up the update!

Blessed are those who like to watch All ❗❗❗ The writing style is very good, the words are vivid and emotional, and the characters are vividly created. I personally like Avis and Blaise 💯💯💯Who knows! They are so good at it! Especially the chapter about throwing paper airplanes at each other! ! ! 💋💋💋 (Actually, it would be more appropriate to change the name of this book to "Teaching You How to Seductive"⊙▽⊙) I like the character of the heroine very much. She is a kind of materialistic and egoistic. She does not fall in love when getting along with the boys. She is very clear-headed and has clear goals and pursuits. She will fight for it desperately if she cannot get it. This kind of character is so cool! 👅I love to eat. That's enough, Veer, I want to be your dog too >3< PS: The author's writing is really good. Don't feel inferior and be more confident in your writing! 👍👍👍

It's very nice. This book is totally to my liking. I really like the scene in it where they are fighting each other's hair over Aweisi. Hehe (aunt laughs) You can all try to read this book. I guarantee you won't suffer. To be honest, I rarely comment on it.

The writing is really good, the plot is vivid, the characters are vivid and interesting, and the image of the heroine Avis is well designed, neither humble nor overbearing I only live for myself in my heart, and always believe in loving myself, and I have also laid a lot of foreshadowings. No matter which role it is, it is all well-shaped. I really regret not seeing the teacher's work earlier. If I could have come earlier and become the first batch of people to support the teacher, I would not have left so many It's a pity. It's a pity that the flowers have already fallen by the time I arrived. The teacher's writing style is very good. I have been reading the whole article carefully. It is an article that I like very much. Although the final ending is like this, no matter what, this is the teacher's decision. No one can change it and no one can blame it. I still hope that the teacher will recover soon and live a healthy life. He can complete the things he likes. With the teacher's writing style, if he writes an original world view, the income will be more. I hope the teacher will have a smooth future life and recover soon. Even if it is only more than 2,000 pages, it will leave a deep impression on me. When I read the ending, I will have such a strong withdrawal reaction. You are really awesome. I hope your next book will be a hit! You will get better and better.

The character of the heroine Avis in this book really struck a chord with me. She focuses on personal interests, is very clear-headed, knows what she needs, and is ambitious. There are both male and female protagonists in it, and they are very popular, and there are also a certain number of Shura fields. I like the interaction between the heroine and Theodore and Blaise the most. The heroine belongs to the whole brain online

This is one of the most beautiful HP fan fictions I have read. I like the character of the heroine very much. It is different from many popular characters. She is a very unique character. The plot does not revolve around Harry and the others. She has her own creativity. At the same time, the characters described in this article are very delicate. Each character is unique and lovable. She is truly a group favorite. , Instead of being inexplicably favored by the group like many novels, the heroine has her own charm, attracting everyone, and everyone likes her very naturally, not awkward, so cool [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] [Blowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]

It's very beautiful. The heroine is the most beautiful in the world. She is a heartthrob. She is really loved by everyone. The system loves the heroine very much and hopes it can continue like this. It's just not enough. The moment I saw the shitty yellow button, I was really heartbroken for no reason hh. The author is so good (=^‥^=) If you haven't seen it, you must read it! Great Amway.

It's really good-looking. I like Theo the most. He has a strong sense of a male ghost and a crazy vicious dog. I like it very much. But in fact, the other characters are also very three-dimensional, and can the author not abuse anyone? Please🥹🙏🙏🙏 Can you write orange light? The author's writing is really touching. I can't even imagine how good this work would be in Orange Light. If not, it doesn't matter. I will still like it and read it. 😘😘

Very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, and very beautiful piece of writing.

The author's writing is very good. I have read many HP fanfics, and I feel that many of them are written in a rather immature way. Seeing that the author's message was maliciously reported as a negative review, we can only do our best. ... But I want to say that there will still be fans who like this book and the author and will support you. They also know that the author is sick and needs treatment, but I still hope that the author will not make himself anxious because of the malicious intentions of some people! The original intention of writing a book is because I like it, because I want to satisfy my own xp/In short, I will look forward to the author's continued updates! At the same time, I also hope that the author will not be too anxious! Mood is also important! I also hope that the author will slowly recover and be happy every day!

Super pretty! ! Very good! It's rare to see such beautiful works! ! The heroine's baby is adorable! !

The author's writing is very beautiful. The heroine is a delicate egoist who is popular with both men and women. The otome is all-round. There are many saviors with red lips and white teeth, arrogant little dragons, dank and ghostly Xiao Duo, nice Mr. Seid, Tom Riddle, Gemini... (And many more). Hermione and Ginny also like the heroine. In short, this book is very well written. It is considered a good HP novel. The author is still serializing it. I look forward to it [Sending Hearts]

I just like the crazy, yandere character of Theodore. Blaise is also super touching. On the surface, he is a passionate playboy, but in reality, he is alienated, cold and profit-oriented. He is really similar to Avis's pull.

It's very interesting. It's much better than many romance versions of Harry Potter fan fiction on the market. I just don't know why it's always restricted and data is stuck. The plot and character design are also pretty good. Good luck to the author! We support you

The fried chicken looks so good! The author's writing style is very good [adoration][adoration] It's getting better and better~

The author's writing is really, really, really, really good. I'm just an ordinary person, let me say that first. But the plot written by the author is really good. I highly recommend you all to read it. If possible, I hope everyone will reward the author more. On behalf of the author, I would like to express my gratitude to everyone. Finally, I wish the author happiness every day, good health, and get well soon. It's not your fault, you don't need to say sorry, we don't blame you

Very beautiful! ! ! It's been a long time since I've encountered a story with such an appetite. There are many Shura fields. The heroine is also very smart and cute. I like to read Single Arrow. Heartthrob is the most fragrant. . It's a pity that the author has stopped updating it a lot. Totally not enough. .

Lovely [Send Heart] I like the setting of this book. Harry Draco is still so cute, and Theodore Brace is a character that is not described much in the original book. The author's settings for these two characters are different from the common characters in Orange Light. They have their own ideas and the characters are not homogeneous.

It's a very interesting novel, because the heroine's character is a bit similar to mine. It's very beautiful, very beautiful, please don't let the author cut it off! Author: This is a novel that suits my XP very well. The heroines in other novels are not annoying to me, but their personalities may make me dislike it. There are very few novels that suit my XP. The author is great, if you cut me off, I, I will beg you.

It's really, really good-looking, and the heroine's character is also interesting to me. Come and watch it, you won't lose money if you invest in it (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

I hope it can be updated more often. The writing style is exquisite. I really like All. However, none of the author's works by Blaise touched my point. Theodore did the same, and some even didn't. If you ask me, this is the real All.

I like it. It's very interesting. It's one of the few high-quality HP fics. I like it very much. The heroine's character is very Slytherin, shrewd, self-interested, and ambitious. It's not like those lion-hearted ones in the snake garden, which are not in line with the characteristics of Slytherin at all.

The author's writing style is really good. I haven't seen such a good-looking book for a long time. I have abandoned several books and my computer is almost down. Finally I saw the author's big book. I have read the latest chapter. I hope the author can update it at once with 100,000 words to scare me. [Adore][Adore][Adore]

Super nice,,,, I hope the author recovers soon

Super cool^ω^ Come on, the author^

I didn't expect it to be so beautiful... I must keep updating, goddess🥹

Super pretty! Like the interaction with Gemini [love] [love] [love]