Sin? Great, I Was Originally a Dark Batch

It's nice to watch, but a little bit frustrating. It's not the imagined evil girl novel. The heroine is not vicious, and it's not very satisfying either. However, the design of the dungeon and talents are very imaginative. Finally, I hope Lin and Shen will be offline soon. Comments seen on other platforms: Nowadays, most of the copywriters writing about evil women are not evil, those writing about sadistic women are definitely sadistic, those writing about weak women are definitely weak, and those writing about stupid beauties are almost like paper. Very true hahaha

The heroine is a bad guy, selfish, and can only act like a mouse in a dark corner, but I like her very much. Please stop complaining. I really like the setting of the heroine. Her setting is very real and multi-faceted, and the author also controls it very well! (My liking is based on the premise of the novel and has nothing to do with reality. My three views have always been positive. I support justice and reject evil. I don't have any psychological problems. I just like the setting. Of course, if there is a person with the character of the heroine in reality, definitely! Stay away!) Of course I want no cp!

It looks great, I love watching it, I want to see the heroine kill everyone! He looks like a lone wolf and a creeping villain, but he actually tends to be a heartthrob. This makes the heroine's psychological activities in the first few chapters feel like child's play... ´ᯅ`

It's good. The heroine has gone from just watching and cursing secretly, to now hiding in the shadows to strengthen herself and control others. The progress is a bit slow but the description is quite detailed. I suggest you speed it up in the later stage, otherwise just a basic copy will have more than 50 chapters and nearly 60. How long will it be to write later? The point is, Shen can survive, although I'm looking forward to it, because the heroine's idea in the early stage was obviously to pull him down from the altar and trample him under her feet. I followed her idea, but now I can't see through it. I don't know whether she will kill him or not, but I always hate her because she pays attention to the heroine. There are too many descriptions. I don't like the feeling that the secret is about to be spied on. I always feel that if you keep writing like this, the heroine's secret will be seen through by her. Shen is a leader who is aloof and aggressive, while Lin is a smart person, thoughtful and clear-minded. Her observation skills are too threatening.

So pretty! She is a rare gloomy villain heroine! ! Like! ! A little stubborn and a little stubborn Very good! ! It's just too little, not enough to watch 5555 I hope the heroine can continue to endure. Jie Jie Jie I want to see rivers of blood! ! I want to see the heroine pick up leaks like crazy! ! Insult others! ! Be the sixth child! !

I originally thought it was a lone wolf breaking into the dungeon, but it turned out to be a U-turn halfway through. But it's a rare battle royale dungeon article that dotes on you! And it's very interesting. The large-scale battle royale dungeon is so rare that I really like it. It is a waste of time and effort to write a lot of characters and the camp itself. If you can write many characters without confusing them, and take into account the dungeon, you must put the five stars first. The following are my thoughts In the early stage, the dank heroine, who wanted to tear apart the male and female partners, was so cute, but when the style changed, suddenly several people started to hold hands. I said it's no wonder that the male and female supporting roles are written so well, and they are so organized that they can be the main force of the team. It turns out that it is for the sister line and the lilies of the hometown are blooming... The light of justice of the two people behind is about to overflow the screen to protect the heroine's C position, which made me go to the front again to look at the heroine's psychological activities and being ignored by 80. How can I put it, it's a bit complicated... The feeling of the heroine being ganggated after the jelly grass is broken, the general psychological activities: the heroine is so cute shashasha! →Hmm... Okay, the battle royale still requires the assistance of a team, so you can wait and see what happens next→? Everyone has a hard time telling what is going on → In the chapters that are almost finished, the way a few people are guarding the heroine makes me laugh...

Hehe, I like Xiao Ma so much. He is growing up a little bit, is cautious in doing things, can seize opportunities very well, and will never show mercy when he can take revenge. I look forward to a more powerful Xiao Ma in the future (˵¯͒¯͒˵). The author also has a richer portrayal of other people, such as Xiao Shen and Xiao Ma. Lin, I have a little bit of facial control, so when it comes to Xiao Shen, I wonder how long he can live. When the author writes about the interaction between Xiao Lin and Xiao Ma, I always feel that there is a bit of ambiguity, hahaha. Of course, I am also looking forward to the next copy, so, the author will update it more [Blow kiss]

It must be five stars [laughs], but I'm just a little confused as to whether the heroine should go through the dungeon alone, or whether there should be a group of protagonists [what] I feel that the author has spent time writing about Shen Lin and their relationship, but I still prefer Xiao Ma to kill everyone by herself [eating melon]

I just love reading evil women and pure hate literature✨ Who doesn't love the super sexy dark heroine with the ultimate contrast? She seems to be a dark and cowardly little mouse and a little transparent person who is trampled upon by others. In fact, she is secretly plotting, fighting to the death, and using all possible means just to control the destiny of the gloomy villain heroine👊🏻 What a shameful origin, what a bad character They are all empty words in the face of absolute power! Strength! Strength! Take control for me! I want to be the absolute master! Dominator! Feeling of power It's really awesome✌

The people in Da Da's works are very special, each with their own characteristics, but they are not group portraits, because the heroine's outstanding viciousness is so cool, and the characters and plots are described very well! Love it. Love it. Will update soon! ! !

Please update more. The question now is whether we should kill these people from the previous class. We wanted to kill them so much before but now they don't look like they want to.

It looks good. The heroine is dark on the inside but actually cute [laughs] I like the feeling that others are strong but the heroine is stronger. I just hope that the heroine can be in better health so that she doesn't have to rely entirely on Shen and Lin.

It's a very good setting. I personally like the heroine and Lin Enya. They are essentially profit-oriented people and can survive well in this apocalyptic world. At the same time, they are also the people that Mu Qiang hopes to become stronger, especially Lin Enya. I thought she was a bad female partner at first, but later I found out that she is not flat. It's a pity, at least he hasn't done anything bad, and then Zou is a bit annoying, at least in the end of the world, his useless kindness will only make him more useless. Shen is a person that I can't like from the beginning to the end. He is really pretending at the beginning, but later wants to kidnap the heroine for family affection. The last thing he should do is to imagine that the heroine will give her sincerity because of his temporary concern. Lin Enya will not have such thoughts

Actually, Lily is pretty good, the author should think about it. (ᐡ ɞ̴̶̷ . ɞ̴̶̷ ᐡ)

You ask me if I look good? I stayed up until three in the morning just to read this novel and update it! ! Renew! Wuwuwu, when will you let me enter your draft box to eat! Your kids are going hungry!

Great, there is this kind of novel with the female protagonist as the core. The ones I read before were either discontinued or blocked.

I'm a big fan, I've also been over 80 in ÷, I like your works very much [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] even though I'm a man [you taste it carefully] From the moment the heroine activated her talent to look for food, I knew it was starting to feel good, [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] @w What's going on? There's no traffic? [Cover face]

The heroine is a villain, she doesn't just kill without thinking, she is calm and well-planned, and for the sake of the greater long-term interests, she can temporarily cooperate even if she has torn apart the other party in her heart. Only by not being controlled by hatred and killing can this kind of character live a long life. Several killings were carried out cleanly and decisively. Whether it's helping teammates or killing teammates, it's all for profit! For the sake of strength, no one can be killed. At present, the heroine is still a little too weak. She has no energy and feels dizzy and faints every now and then. I look forward to making up for her shortcomings.

The heroine is neither a good person nor an evil girl in the traditional sense. The characters are rich and three-dimensional, and the plot is very compact and not just for fun. The writing is very mature, but it is still a bit short right now. Please keep writing, author, and don't be fooled!

The first chapter of the minefields is very detailed. Writing is not easy. Please read the minefields first and then decide whether to read on. Again, if you have any questions, you can communicate with me directly. And people who jump to conclusions before reading are boring. I respect your subjective thoughts, but please don't misinterpret my writing.

Get stronger, get stronger, get stronger, get stronger, make them surrender, obey, fear and awe

The heroine is very naughty, and she is not evil at all. She is just dark, twisted and crawling. The heroine's design and skill types are quite innovative. It's really not cool enough. The main text talks about the team's transparent character who is actually the villain. But in fact, the heroine is not transparent at all. She can't be said to be honest, and she can't be controlled secretly. She can crush her occasionally, but she can't feel the cracks in survival. She is very jealous of Shen Lin and wants to step down. She has a cold face and unconsciously wants to gain attention. Her presence is quite strong from the first copy. Comments always say that Shen Lin is a bully, but I personally feel that he is a bystander. In the author's writing, they are not even onlookers, because their eyes are not like the ones below, so Xiao Ma hates her so much that others bully her because of Shen Lin, but she has never been noticed. In real life, many people may become Xiaoma, and many people hate Xiaoma. The author's depiction is very innovative. The missing star emphasizes that the heroine is really not a little girl! Through! Bright!

Not bad, I picked a good one -

All the villains are mice🐭But the heroine is a forced mouse🐭This is a really gloomy mouse protagonist [Like] I felt so happy watching it [Send heart] I suddenly realized that I am a little abnormal, but in reality I am just an ordinary person, but reading this book made me feel like I am a mouse too🐭

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, ten points, a killing game, the heroine's strategy, all linked together

The subject matter is novel, and the heroine has a dark heart, but it also reveals human nature. The dark side of everyone's heart is expressed in the heroine, right? Very catchy

Good-looking, don't let Ma Chunyuan fall in love with that person named Shen, no!

Very beautiful, the heroine is amazing

It's really beautiful, and the author is truly a genius! ! !

Good looking, good luck to the author