Ah? ***********

You can continue to divide long paragraphs into several paragraphs. In addition, the witch creation at the beginning feels like a grassroots team meeting together, without that awesome feeling.

I want to see the moment when my sister knows the identity of my brother as soon as possible [laughing evilly]

Why did the author stop updating? (Already crazy)

Accept Lord Gray Wind's praise.

There are fewer books that have changed orders now. I would like to give you a good review. I hope the author can persist in writing this book and develop to high quality.

It seems okay. I would like to ask if the heroine in the back is on the magical girl side or the dark side?

It's me again. Apart from the problem of paragraphing at the beginning, if you read further, this book is quite good. The characters are vivid, the plot is smoothly connected, and the scenes are well drawn. The only drawback is that the protagonist's current perspective may cause discomfort (but this is part of art). It can be seen that the author is working hard to learn and revise. In fact, this word count is not suitable for writing a long review. The reason for writing this now is to expose the author (ps: when will it be updated)

Oh my God, this writing style and technique are much better than some conventional magical girl + witch stories [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

This is not a traditional and formulaic Mahou Soju novel. There is no conflict between the identity and performance of the protagonist, but it is still a single character, a love letter in a dream [crying] [crying] [crying] I feel bad when I see this kind of book with a score of only 6.6

As expected of a science student, his writing is too scientific [face covering]

It feels very good, and it feels more daily. It would be better if the emotions between the brother and sister were more detailed. Since they are newcomers, I would like to give some small efforts.

Personally I think it looks pretty good.

The best thing about this novel is that there is not much national hatred

There is a lot of room for improvement 3*

Ting Haokang, I want to see the protagonist fight the witch with all his strength

The portrayal of the protagonist is very delicate, and all his actions do not conflict with his character and have no poisonous points. I am just curious whether there will be a sister war in the future?

It's a bit of a mess, but the idea is great. It's much better than the formula magical girl novel. The writing is a bit dull but the future is promising.

The routines in this book are novel and fresh. It's so interesting on this highly homogeneous platform. Beautiful and fresh magical girl

Very very nice looking.

Big cheers for the author!

It's just that the author keeps sending the wrong papers

The plot is pretty good.

It's so awesome, it's so awesome🤓

Good, good, good, good [Adoration]

It's not in vain that I searched for dozens of minutes - I hope there won't be any words, deeds, or things that are inconsistent with the world view, which will give the article a sense of fragmentation.

It's nice to watch, it's a single change, and the protagonist is considered neutral.

It's beautiful, I love reading it, please give it a thumbs up to the author!

Children, this magical girl novel is a must-try delicacy [Learned]