The Whole School Was Shocked! Confess Your Love to the Cold Teacher at the Beginning of School?

It's as good-looking as ever. The author's style of writing is one of my favorite authors based on more than 6,000 hours of reading time on my Tomato platform. The previous book "Housing with My Sister" is also one of my favorite novels. I like the characters Shen Man, Xiaowan, and An Ruo in it the most... The characters in this book are more delicate and vivid! The current heroine: Xiao Qingmei, twin school beauties, goddess counselor...

It comes from "Housing with My Sister". The book was not called this name before it was finished, but it was changed later. I only recently read the book "With My Sister", and the more I read, the more amazed I became. How the hell did I just read this book now? I can say that this is the most beautiful urban emotional harem novel I have ever read. As for the arrangement of the plot, the emotional lines of each heroine are well arranged and will not cause a lot of resentment. This book continues the previous style, but the difference is that the protagonist is not narrated as "I", which better depicts the protagonist's personality characteristics and allows the audience to see the outstanding qualities of the male protagonist. At the same time, it retains the original harem plot in the upper part. If you like harem novels or are interested in emotional books, you can read it. Get in early and enjoy it early. You know the author's speed. The upper part is about being locked up in a dark room hahahaha [blowing kiss]

I came from Yumei. The last book was also a million-word urban harem complete with a hot little side story. The author of this book is still talented in writing. The story is not dry and does not insert some embarrassing plots. The characters are especially well created and it is worth reading.

Haha, I haven't seen such an interesting novel in a long time. The author is a veteran at first glance. What's even more rare is that he has a good sense of lightning protection. There is no bullshit ex-boyfriend or anything like that. I only read Chapter 80 and couldn't help but give it a good review. I hope there won't be any trouble in the future.

This book is highly readable, has a wonderful plot, and the ups and downs of the story are gripping, making readers immersed in it. The writing is beautiful and contagious, and it also contains profound philosophy and is thought-provoking. It is a masterpiece worth reading.

Not bad, not bad. The refreshing novels are quite good. I just like it, nothing else matters [Sentiment] Reading novels is just for physical and mental pleasure [laughing]

Style of painting: childish Writing style: detailed and smooth Overall impression: There is a strong sense of immersion, but there are still many unreasonable things. For example, the protagonist repeatedly mentions something. Maybe from my perspective, I think it is a bit too deliberate. There may be few opportunities to tease this kind of girl in life. It cannot be all accidental events. It should be more natural and various things happen naturally. Generally speaking, it is suitable for 14 to 14 years old. For a boy around 22 years old, Tomato is considered a good book, but there are obviously many areas that need to be polished. I would like to encourage the author to keep up the good work💪

Just watch Xiao Chunan's fantasy life, just watch it without saying a word [Admiration][Admiration][Admiration]

This is a rare commodity. After 50 pictures, there are basically intimate stories in a few pictures, and the writing is quite delicate. This is a daily story, and each girl's feelings are increased step by step, and they are not given out of nowhere. Of course, although the twins' emotional settings for the male protagonist are not particularly reasonable, you can't be too particular about being completely consistent with reality when reading novels. Overall, it is good. Finally, the author's setting of empathy for the twins is a bit invincible. The author will give it a [like] and five stars soon.

It's really, really, really, really beautiful. It's so beautiful. I can't stop. I'm going to go. The author is begging you for more [crying] [crying]

It's fun to watch, not procrastinating (eat as much as you can), and the plot is tightly paced.

This book is energetic [like] [like], it's pretty good. The heroine is well portrayed, especially Ruan. I haven't seen this kind of character for a long time. At present, the large-scale Shura field has not exploded yet, but after the outbreak, it is estimated that Ruan may be used as a transitional adjustment. After all, she is the only one with special attributes and ideas. As for the male protagonist, how can I put it, I think it is not as good as the previous one. The emotional line of a multi-female novel is difficult to write. The conflict and development all test the writing skills and the transition process of the Shura field. At present, the male protagonist is too unable to control his desires in the early stage. Passive attraction is fine, but the male protagonist is not. While worrying, the two He kept teasing the twins and taking advantage, until he finally ate them, and then the relationship was not confirmed from the beginning. It felt like the heroines were completely confused when they were with him, and you hid it from me. The explosion in the Shura field was not easy to deal with. The identity and background of the male protagonist was not easy to figure out, so look forward to the plot later. [Bookshelf plus one][Ask for more updates][Ask for more updates]

The story is rooted in urban daily life. The male protagonist has a smooth life and gets to know various female protagonists with different personalities along the way. The emotional pull is natural and down-to-earth, the details of the interaction are vivid and real, and it is full of sweetness and interesting scenes. The overall writing is relaxed and casual, focusing on comfort and stress relief, and the picture is comfortable and enjoyable.

Overall, the writing style is good, but there is one very interesting thing, that is, the overall portrayal is not like college life, but more like the high school life in Japanese comics, and Teacher Ye is only four years older than the male protagonist, and then the university teacher is also very interesting. It would be more reasonable if it is a counselor. After all, counselors can indeed be served by college graduates of the school.

The plot development is pretty good, the characterization and details are pretty good, but some places are too cliche. Once you see it, you will know the general plot behind it, and you can add some new ideas [Like][Like][Like]

How can I put it this way? After shopping all the way, I found that I really like the XP of Chongshi. This book is the only one I have read in N books with less than three-digit chapters. Although it seems that there is no large-scale Shura field yet, it is indeed a more enjoyable and better-looking book! [I'm about to cry] I don't want that kind of thing. I really want to finish it. It's a rare non-toxic urban novel. XP is also very good. Why are you pregnant? [I'm about to cry]

An urban harem novel, full of sweetness without any knives. I would give it an 8.5 Out of ten, which is very good for Tomato. The author's other book "Housing with a Sister" is also a masterpiece. I followed the previous book with my sister from beginning to end, and so does this one. I feel that the Shura field could be a little bigger, otherwise the harem story that is too peaceful always feels less flavorful, with more noisy emotions, or a few women competing for husbands. If it is too bland, it is not good. The various interactions with the heroine and the advancement of the relationship feel okay. It's okay to write more plots about maps and characters, schools, rental houses and homes, but I feel it's not enough. You can write more campus activities or certain events outside school to promote the development of the plot to make the plot richer and more exciting. In summary, there are too many daily routines, and there is no climax plot, which makes it a bit boring to watch. And compared to the previous book, the career development line of the male protagonist is a bit too low and too little. At present, he is just a college student and has very few outstanding points. He may have a more popular personality, but I still feel that there needs to be more career lines. Moreover, in this urban theme with multiple female protagonists, the status of a college student is a bit Limitations, the current timeline is not even halfway through college, so it can't end with college students engaging in underground romances and hugging each other, and the heroine will have to be revealed to have various belongings, but the plot is too slow at the current time. Let's put more emphasis on academic and career development, and end college career as soon as possible and enter the society. For me personally, the ending of the previous book "Housing with a Sister" was not handled properly. The joint wedding at the end felt a bit too idealistic. In fact, it could have been written with a better ending. I hope the author can write this book better and better. There are really not many good books about urban women nowadays. The author's book can be regarded as a masterpiece. If it can evolve a little more, it can really make a name for itself. Anyway, I am very optimistic about it and will always follow it.

Friends, please help me forward your photos to me. Beautiful sister, sister, sister, I love you. You have a happy life and a prosperous career. I just want to laugh. That's when I miss you. Let the day begin with a steady flow of life!

It's so beautiful, it's the mouth teeth I want to see! Come on, author! It's so beautiful😭I will give you power of love every day😭😭😭

A good work that I sincerely recommend. From the beginning of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, from acquaintance to acquaintance and falling in love, each stage is gradual, not abrupt or superficial, and the plot logic makes sense. The characters of each female protagonist are also very realistic, whether they are arrogant, cute, or silly. The male protagonist is also a good person (you can kiss and eat as much as you can), and the most important thing is that the pace of the whole book is really good now that it has been updated. Really, the pace is really good. A very sweet and ambiguous love story! Worth recommending

Damn author, peeking into my daily life [laughing evilly] Chapter 97 It's so hard to eat meat.

Which university has so many classes and the teachers have to come to school every day [face covering] I can't understand the background. Who has so many teachers in college and is so strict? It's good if I can get the message back to you [face covering]

Lao Deng, I won't rate it. There is still a gap between this book and the previous one. It has a very novel beginning, but the writing style could be improved. It is a bit boring. There is really nothing to say about the plot. Here, I wish Lao Deng a happy New Year and good luck in your work.

When the protagonist first appeared, he felt a little inferior. However, as the plot progressed, he gradually showed his sense of responsibility and sense of humor. There was not a lot of friction with the heroine. When it comes to the plot, it is better to get it directly without delay. Come on, write the big brother of the emperor's uncle [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's pretty good. I feel it's a little better than the previous one, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

WC is so beautiful [Admiration]. The characters in it are very unique. Please update soon.

The Golden Three Chapters are very good, and there are some laughs at the beginning. Not bad. Let me follow up with my review [laughs] [like]

This is the best campus love book I have ever read. The author is very good at connecting the characters before and after, without the feeling of chasing one after another and letting go of the other. I hope the author will stick to it!

Good-looking, sweet daily articles, quick to push women without pulling her back, highly recommended It's beautiful, I really recommend everyone to try it, but I don't know why the rating can't go up.

This book is very good. Why is the rating so low? Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables [smile][smile][smile]