Ruler of the Heavens: It Begins with Becoming a Lord

I would like to make a suggestion, add the doctor's psychological thoughts at the beginning, otherwise it will poison a lot of people and give birth to four children in a row until the boy is born. It is normal to disdain [Thinking] The main plot is also too slow. It's been more than ten chapters and I'm still picking up people at the beginning. I can't imagine how boring it will be later. The dialogues are also the same as the articles, unlike those who write novels.

The writing is okay, there are no poisonous points, and the current combat power system has not collapsed. Character descriptions can also be used. As long as you keep writing steadily, you will always become popular. The name is from Mainland China. There is no way that no matter how you name it, it is from Mainland China. Everything you can think of has been nicknamed.

In a place as awesome as Wanjie City, you can't use force, but you can be taken away.

I really like this type of novel, please give it a thumbs up to the author

It's a lord-type theme, it doesn't have a cookie-cutter plot, the description is pretty good, and the plot is a bit interesting.

Not bad. You can take a look.

Come on, I'm optimistic about you

It's okay, the plot arrangement is very comfortable to watch

Okay, this world view setting, let's see how it develops later.

Not bad, all kinds of coincidences, barely noticeable