Just Woke Up, Kiss the Sickly Girl Lin Daiyu Directly

I have also finished reading all the chapters that have been updated so far, and the subject matter is relatively new among the Red Mansion novels. But the work still has some problems and what I think are poisonous points. I think the main problem in updating the entire novel to the current chapter is the flattening of the characters. Except for the emphasis on Lin Daiyu, the creation of other characters is a bit facial, even a bit OOC, which does not reflect the charm of the characters in the original work. If I hadn't watched The Red Chamber before, I think it's very likely that I wouldn't be able to tell the characters apart. If the textual research party comes purely for the color of the Red Mansion, it can be abandoned. Then let's talk about the poisonous point. 1. Among all the characters who are on base at this stage, almost all of them have received first blood from their original owners (this may be the author's foreshadowing) 2. It's a bit brainless. After the male protagonist awakened to Li Taibai's talent, he composed one or two poems and directly gained 18 million fans on a certain music channel. Then what I think is the most vicious thing comes out. After the male protagonist's company encountered difficulties and the investors withdrew their capital, in order to recover the losses, the male protagonist asked Qingwen (who was already on base and one of the female protagonists) to do a live broadcast to bring goods. This is the point I can't understand the most. 3. The male protagonist occasionally suffers from dementia. In order to perform a systematic task, he forcibly uses potions to make a female protagonist obey his orders and transfer the company to him. As a result, the heroine's family turned from prosperity to decline because of this. It even made the heroine's mother die of anger. Then when the female protagonist was bullied by a gangster, the male protagonist stepped forward and directly asked the female protagonist to forgive the male protagonist. Even the favorability level is almost full [awkward laugh] At present, these are the poisonous points that I think. If the author can see it, I hope he can make some changes in time. Of course, aside from these, if you just want to find a novel with the background of a red mansion that is both fast and enjoyable. Then I think you can try it (if you can ignore the above poisonous points) The three stars I am currently giving are because the subject matter of the work is novel and there are not many chapters updated. If the previous chapters can be explained or changed in the subsequent plot, I think this should be considered an acceptable novel.

OK, but not with this system

Not bad, not bad

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

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