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Four stars first, there are some shortcomings. The first is a paragraph question, without specific paragraphs. Secondly, there are too many adjectives, and a simple description will suffice. Then the protagonist trusts the woman a little too much in the last days. To be honest, you can divide the contract into short-term and permanent so that it can explain the behavior just now. Overall, it looks okay, but the paragraphs are too long, and I skimmed most of them. So there may be leaks. This is my evaluation. If there is anything wrong, please point it out and I will actively correct it. I hope the author will work harder and write more exciting stories.

Wearing a bamboo hat, armor, and a cloak, he rode on a strong horse. There is a long pole hanging on the side of the horse. He carries a bow and arrow on his back, a long knife in his right hand, and an eagle in his left hand. Follow a dog, perfect atmosphere.

Okay, ok, ok, ok

You can write well, keep up the good work [laughing evilly]

Well written but lacking something

Yes, just write a description of the tool and cut off a line. You can definitely do it.

It's quite well written. I'll give it a 4⭐ first because the update is a bit slow. I'll wait until chapter three or four hundred and then change it to five stars [making faces] [making faces] [cool] Ula la la! The horse's long-term burst acceleration is more powerful, but the protagonist's short-term burst is more powerful. After the horse sprints and gets close to the enemy, the protagonist can then use the horse's acceleration to rush out and explode [rolls eyes]

The protagonist is cold and decisive in killing, which is good😌

Okay, worth a look

Okay, this is the most sensible novel I have ever read, and the most fitting title. It is really well written, so good luck to the author!

I feel like the writing is okay, but it's a little uncomfortable to read in some places. But I think the content is quite interesting. Doing things is also more in line with business principles.

Still pretty good

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good Why did Cheng Lu turn against the protagonist?

The author's writing is online and the battle descriptions are very detailed. It is a rare national survival novel.

The luxury magazines will continue to steam after they have fattened up [laughs]