Just Reincarnated in Bleach, and I'm a Little Afraid to Die

Judging from the reading time on my homepage, I can say that I have "suffered" to read the early plots, but after reading the early chapters, both the smoothness and the refreshing feeling are much better. It can be seen that the author really wants to describe the change of the protagonist's state of mind. The cowardice of the protagonist in the first eight chapters is because he is gregarious and does not want to become an alien. As for the later part, I think the poisonous point is Haiyan's "self-righteous" rejection when inviting the protagonist. It is not that he has to agree, but that the protagonist clearly has the opportunity to make himself less painful, but he has to take it hard. Overall, it's underrated in Death fan fiction. It's very interesting and well written. You must keep writing. Hey [blowing kiss]

It's good-looking, unsystematic, the cheats are reasonable, the plot is relaxed and moderate, there are daily life and battles, and the inner struggle of the protagonist is a big attraction. Let's give it a five-star rating first. As expected, the heroine should be Lucia. I would like to give you some advice. If you want to write a romantic drama, you can start with small daily routines. Don't make too much progress and learn to pull it off. And the emotional drama should not be too long as a seasoning and lubricant. In addition to emotional dramas, you can also write some brotherhood or other daily routines. The author can just take care of these suggestions. Finally, why hasn't the author updated it after so long? The production team doesn't even dare to rest like this! ! !

I have started to read this good book for the second time. The heroine is Rukia. I remember the author said that there are too few novels. It suits my taste. I think it is good regardless of the first person or the third person.

Maybe the slight abuse of the owner at the beginning scared people away? Both the writing style and the rhythm are excellent. The plot is not outstanding at the moment but it is a stable performance. It can be put on qd and other websites to make money. Of course, some of the psychological descriptions were a little immature at the beginning, but they improved quickly later on.

I have only read Chapter 5 so far. The introduction said that the previous chapters may not be very good, so I recommend skipping it. However, since I really like Death, I personally feel that Death fan fiction is basically... Emm. So I started reading from the first chapter with the mentality of giving it a try. Although the titles of each chapter indicate that they have been rewritten, I feel that the writing is very good so far! The good thing is that he is currently "reasonable". There is little description of his strength, but he can estimate the general range. (In the original plot, a Shinigami came back to visit his relatives, and the leaked Reiatsu Rukia fainted directly, so she was not at the level of a Shinigami. Xiaobai's unconscious Reiatsu affected the temperature of the room, and the protagonist unconsciously burst out for a second. Counting the spiritual pressure characteristics of the Zanpakuto's name after awakening, it is still acceptable. Xiaokai is not considered open, and Gao Xiaobai is at the same level. Similar to Xiao Aizen who is not yet a Bleach?) The timeline is also correct, and he is a 13-year-old peacetime junior high school student who has only watched dozens of episodes of Bleach and is not very interested in it and has lost the protection of his parents. You can't point him into a world where he is constantly fighting life-and-death battles with "monsters" and quickly accept the underlying logic of poverty, chaos, and the law of the jungle in Area 78. And you can't deny that what Nirvana did in the early Soul Society chapter was cruel and anti-human. Research on the Quemie's human body, using the lives of Division 12 members as weapons to self-destruct, intending to take Ikkaku for experiments when he was injured, etc. From the perspective of the protagonist, it would be difficult for a commoner in Rukongai to die if he fell into Nirvana's hands. So it is right to be cowardly and self-protective. It can also hide from Aizen's Hollow Experiment, which the protagonist is not sure whether he knows about. If he was completely targeted at this time, his life or death would be uncertain.

Five-star praise! ! Super good-looking [crying] But why ah ah ah ah, I feel that the protagonist is miserable, my best friend is dead, I thought I could save my friend, but in the end Haiyan killed her all by herself. Isn't it possible that I will have to experience Lucia's capture and execution in the future?

It's very interesting. It's a rare high-quality work. There are many settings and foreshadowings that are very interesting. The self-proclaimed logical system is closely linked step by step. It's very immersive. No matter how many people write about Death in the future, this book will still be a must-read.

I have seen the latest chapter so far, comparing it to the fan works I have read so far. The current chapters are considered the best in the series (for my taste), but the later chapters are fine so far.

It's very interesting. I want to ask. According to Rukia herself, she said that she is ten times older than Ichito. Secondly, according to Baymax, Rukia was captured and Hijin went to another world (the Japanese call outsiders to die and go to another world) for fifty years. Hijin left in the fifth year of marriage, and Renji said that they became good friends because of Rukia. Ten years later, after all the brothers in District 78 were dead, they thought about going to school in Mao (reminiscences of Renji are mentioned here). It was known that Renji and the others would go to school for six years (it is unknown how long Rukia was in the Gokong family). They were recognized by Baymax in school (Hizhen had already left at that time) According to the above conditions, when the protagonist came to Rukia, Rukia, Renji's group and other friends, that is, Renji and Rukia knew each other within ten years, the protagonist saved the friends and left, and then the protagonist went to the Spiritual Arts Academy to study. In the middle, the part where he gave candy to the friends and graduated and suppressed Chukas was all in Rukia Within their "ten years", Xiaolu was "taken home" when Hijin was still alive. Renji probably went to school around the time when the protagonist joined the fourth team after Xiaolu recognized her relationship, but Renji had already graduated with his classmates and entered the fifth team (how many years did the protagonist work for Captain Unohana of the fourth team)?

Not bad, not bad. Although some plot transitions are a bit slow, the character's personality has not changed much. If there is no drama, it seems to be back to the time when chasing death. The author should write more, it is not enough.