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There are no major problems with the creation of the protagonist and other characters, but they lack a kind of spirituality or something else. The plot is a royal plot, and there will probably be no major problems with the subsequent plot arrangements and planning. The names and settings of the exercises are the shining points of this novel, and the author must have put a lot of thought into this aspect. All in all, it is a good novel, one of the best among Tomato novels, and worth reading. However, if there is a little more spirituality or other things in the character creation, it can definitely go further.

I would like to make some comments. It is very interesting to read and has good aesthetics. It can be regarded as a normal fairy tale. In other novels, Ice Spirit Root is written as a strong man shooting three times per second, and there is no difference in the attributes of the spirit root. This book is very well written. Hey, there is also a plot where the protagonist should not do too much alchemy and weapon training. The genius only needs to be strong. When there are more powerful elixirs and weapons, they are all auxiliary skills. If the protagonist learns so many things, he is not cool and will be hindered. There is also the protagonist's cloud flag. The first impression of the protagonist when he takes the flag in a fight is that of an old Taoist priest. Don't write so many formations. He freezes everything with a wave of his hand and fills the sky with ice spikes. This is what makes him dazzling.

There is nothing poisonous about traditional immortality novels, and the logic is clear and quite interesting.

This book is well written, and I feel that the author has a very deep understanding of the world of immortality. The writing about the process of cultivation is very realistic and not so exaggerated. And it can truly portray the personality and character of the protagonist. It feels real. It doesn't have the exaggeration of most novels to make people read it calmly. It can make people feel the same state of mind as the protagonist.

It looks good, I finally saw a genius, and finally it's not 4 spiritual roots or 5 spiritual roots.

That is to say, since you have written this novel about Xiaozhutianyunban, there must be secrets and techniques from other worlds. It would not be trivial to write a thousand chapters. Will you write about ascending to the spiritual world and finishing it when you reach the immortal world and attaining Daluo, or will you finish it until Hunyuan? When we reach Hunyuan, do we seek detachment, or do we seek detachment from other realms, unite all dharmas, ascend to the highest level, or write detachment?

Ah, it looks good. I think it looks pretty good.

The part about helping Lin Xuan establish his power felt a bit poisonous. Come on, author.

The description is detailed, not just a cheat, and worth updating. The only shortcoming is that the number of words is too small, I hope the update will be faster!

Good-looking [Like] A clear stream of immortality writing, excellent quality writing about immortality [Like][Like][Like]

How embarrassing, how embarrassing, why are all the embarrassing books new?

Super pretty! It can be called "Fairy Grass"!

Give me a five-point support and don't die suddenly.

The beginning is great, I hope the author sticks to it

Okay, it was a bit rough in the early stage but I can accept it. I hope to have more time to practice in the future. One disaster after another makes me a little tired.

Yes, well written. Genius flow starts.

It sounds good to me as a 16-year-old bookworm, and it's worth checking out.

It allowed me to see the protagonist's growth and possibilities, but some thrilling plots should be added.

Two words: "good-looking". I hope the author can maintain the plot later.

The writing is pretty good, the exercises and spells are novel, and I have the desire to read on.

The writing is delicate, the background is real, and it is relaxed and humorous without losing its connotation.

Give it a month and then see

It's perfect so far. I hope the world view will be big enough in the future.

Very, very good ((*^∀^))👍🏻

Ok ok ok

Good looking, compact plot

Very well written, very well written

Why (シ_ _)シ, no one is watching👀

Good, good, good, good, good, good

Now it seems that it is still very feasible. Please give the author a big boost.