National Destiny: Starting from Playing Tokisaki Kurumi

To be honest, it's not like acting. You rely on killing monsters to improve your acting. She doesn't have the character of Kurumi at all. She's too lively and active. She's just a heroine with Kurumi's abilities. Then the traditional ridicule and slap in the face to conquer the country's fortunes, this kind of thing has no highlights now. Also, the segmented scene transitions in some parts are too abrupt. For example (after Lin Yao closed the door, he opened the supply bag. In addition to food and water, there were also some medical supplies and a wilderness survival book. "Well, the supplies are pretty good," Lin Yao said. After reading it, Lin Yao returned to the bedroom to rest. ) You can change it from the second paragraph to ("Well, it's not bad to be able to distribute such supplies to each person in one day." Putting them aside indifferently, as far as Lin Yao is concerned, she does not need these with her Kuangsan ability. After learning a little about the subsequent impact of the announcement of the National Games, Lin Yao returned to the bedroom to rest. ) ↑It can be said that the role of the protagonist in the early stage is low. In fact, later on, Kurumi's character is probably ignored because it has no use. The words at the end of the words are not necessary to "say". You can use other words to fill in the content and summarize. Otherwise, you will get tired after reading too much.