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It's okay. The protagonist's strength is online and he's not aggrieved. It's just a situation that happened. The author also changed Dayou's situation and gave it to 5 million, and then killed Dayou. This change is good and deserves five stars. The author listened to the advice [laughing]

Very nice! But the progress feels too fast! It is recommended to distinguish ♂/♀ on elves! There was too little emotional drama with the heroines during the journey! At the same time, there is less of a dark style of politics/money. Like (Grandma Jin and the giant jellyfish. After the protagonist is defeated, the jellyfish leaves with the tribe alone. Grandma Jin is still living a cool life on the island? Who is right and who is wrong? The author just skips it?)! Finally, I hope that the author can write a complete map. I have found and read a lot of elf novels. However, the novels that can write a complete map are too small or almost non-existent. At most, they are about Kanto ~ Sinnoh! Come on! I kept raising it, and it was finally over. This is another book with incomplete maps, which is a pity!

Thanks for reading, the paragraph about Dayou has been changed based on readers' opinions. You can read it by yourself, it's in Chapter 14. In addition, Xiaozhi's heroine will only accept Xiaoguang and Serena (undecided, a vote was opened under a reader's book review, and the result of the vote will decide whether to accept them or not). Because Hanako's voice is too high, Hanako will look for opportunities to take advantage of it. Other areas that need improvement can be raised here.

Personally, I think it can be considered top-notch among Tomatoes. It has a clear panel, no system, levels up quickly enough, and Pokémon are rare enough.

To be honest, the emotional drama in this novel is pretty good. The heroines all have their own personalities, and they are not vases. It's been a dream for a long time. If you don't want to write it, just write it. Aren't you just disgusting everyone? This ending, you can't do it unless it's a bad ending. You made this ending. This is the ending that I hate the most. Don't you think it's disgusting that you wrote this kind of ending?

It's very well written. Why did the author end it all of a sudden? You're kidding me. What about the Sinnoh Fang Yuan Sun and Moon arc? It has plug-ins and multiple heroines. She became the champion of the Kanto region. Did she get married in the end? Has the child been born?

This book is pretty good, I like the harem the most

Yes, you can recruit girls quickly, and it can also help Xiaozhi and the like to solve some regrets. Although he is a dog abuser, he still steals the show a bit. There is also an original plot. I look forward to the following areas [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

There are a lot of poisonous points, but after all, it is a cool article, no need to use your brain. The reason for missing one star is mainly because the harem is not included.

The writing is okay, I suggest adding Serena, Lillie, Karuna, and Sister Baicai

Yes, I will give the greatest tolerance to Pokémon stories.

What Xiaomao wrote is good The author hurry up and update

It's pretty good-looking, and it's considered top-notch in Tomato, as long as it remains free of poisonous spots at the back.

The setting is good, but it's a pity that there are constant little poisons

Pretty good, keep it up [like]

Okay, very pretty

It's good-looking but the words are short and will be gone in one night. You can keep them.

Suddenly I was asked to review books. I haven't read much, and I haven't seen any discomfort. And the author needs encouragement. I hope that I can write both the book and my life vividly. I will make money soon. Hehe, I am here on horseback.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, and it has the proud and unrestrained feeling of Xiao Mao. Although there are only a few sixty-four pictures, I still read the updates in one go and will continue reading.

Very nice Pokémon text

I really like this book

Rarely seen harem stories

It's good, keep going, but it's not enough.

Big cheers for the author!

It's amazing. I love it. I love it.

Good looking. Love to read and write quickly.

Come on, come on, come on, it looks good

It's so beautiful. Woohoo.

Get Kyurem out quickly

Brother, I hope it's finished. I think it's good that you wrote Xiaomao in Tomato.