The Game Launched Early, and My Sister Is a Female Immortal

The content of the article is compact, but a bit too far-fetched. The male protagonist is a walking succubus. Nine out of ten women like the male protagonist and fall in love at first sight. There is nothing wrong with it mainly for the sake of the plot, so the author works hard to update it [Like] [Like]

It's quite good. The plot has details and foreshadowing, and each character has his or her own arrangement. It's not a brainless novel, nor is it just the protagonist's side. Each character has his own story background and established life trajectory. I hope the author can work hard and don't be too anxious about the emotional line between Xian'er and Su Chen. I hope the author will seriously consider whether to add more women or single women. Single women are easy to write but the audience is not large. Multiple women will test the writing skills and the control of the readers' psychology. Finally, I hope the author can continue to write books well, because it can be seen from the lines that the author actually likes his characters. [Thinking][thinking]

Let me give you a book review first. I hope that the protagonist himself is the younger brother of the heroine, and not the so-called soul traveler. Otherwise, it would be like watching someone else's sister call you brother on someone else's behalf, which would be very awkward, okay? That kind of reincarnation can make up for this. Get a review first. Wait until the word count increases and then revise it.

The content is wonderful, the emotions are delicate, and it is relatively rich. Keep it up. By the way, I hope the heroine is Su Xian'er, and there is only one single heroine. Don't let it be unfinished or discontinued.

I hope it will be a single heroine, just Su Xianer is enough

First of all, I don't think it's orthopedics. If it's a close relationship, then the attack when they were children must not be a simple attack. It was probably to steal talent and luck, which is why the soul is missing. And because talent and blood were taken away, there is no blood relationship anymore🤓

Advantages: The writing is really good, the characters are well created, and there are a lot of foreshadowings that are also good. The background is also good, and it has a bit of a knife. For example, Liu Yun is quite memorable. Disadvantages: The plot is a bit delayed, but the author has added more updates. It is really good if you read more than 10 chapters in one go, but it is a bit uncomfortable to read chapter by chapter. In summary, it's really worth watching and it's pretty good. I just finished reading the first volume, and I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next.

The book is very interesting, but a little sad. I hope the author will continue writing it and don't let it die prematurely or stop updating it like other books! Come on and write it down! I will always support the author. If you stop updating, I will hate you forever! (The blade is ready, locating the author's coordinates...)

How to say it? Overall, there are no particularly big poisonous points. The only thing that is more poisonous is that one of Chu Feng's soul eldest sisters was also affected by being reduced to the halo. The two people had little relationship to begin with, but they actually risked their lives for Chu Feng, which is a bit poisonous, but overall it is still okay.

So handsome, I like it so much, especially the part about the power of the hearts of all living beings