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The content of the article is compact, but a bit too far-fetched. The male protagonist is a walking succubus. Nine out of ten women like the male protagonist and fall in love at first sight. There is nothing wrong with it mainly for the sake of the plot, so the author works hard to update it [Like] [Like]

It's quite good. The plot has details and foreshadowing, and each character has his or her own arrangement. It's not a brainless novel, nor is it just the protagonist's side. Each character has his own story background and established life trajectory. I hope the author can work hard and don't be too anxious about the emotional line between Xian'er and Su Chen. I hope the author will seriously consider whether to add more women or single women. Single women are easy to write but the audience is not large. Multiple women will test the writing skills and the control of the readers' psychology. Finally, I hope the author can continue to write books well, because it can be seen from the lines that the author actually likes his characters. [Thinking][thinking]

Let me give you a book review first. I hope that the protagonist himself is the younger brother of the heroine, and not the so-called soul traveler. Otherwise, it would be like watching someone else's sister call you brother on someone else's behalf, which would be very awkward, okay? That kind of reincarnation can make up for this. Get a review first. Wait until the word count increases and then revise it.

The content is wonderful, the emotions are delicate, and it is relatively rich. Keep it up. By the way, I hope the heroine is Su Xian'er, and there is only one single heroine. Don't let it be unfinished or discontinued.

I hope it will be a single heroine, just Su Xianer is enough

First of all, I don't think it's orthopedics. If it's a close relationship, then the attack when they were children must not be a simple attack. It was probably to steal talent and luck, which is why the soul is missing. And because talent and blood were taken away, there is no blood relationship anymore🤓

Advantages: The writing is really good, the characters are well created, and there are a lot of foreshadowings that are also good. The background is also good, and it has a bit of a knife. For example, Liu Yun is quite memorable. Disadvantages: The plot is a bit delayed, but the author has added more updates. It is really good if you read more than 10 chapters in one go, but it is a bit uncomfortable to read chapter by chapter. In summary, it's really worth watching and it's pretty good. I just finished reading the first volume, and I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next.

The book is very interesting, but a little sad. I hope the author will continue writing it and don't let it die prematurely or stop updating it like other books! Come on and write it down! I will always support the author. If you stop updating, I will hate you forever! (The blade is ready, locating the author's coordinates...)

How to say it? Overall, there are no particularly big poisonous points. The only thing that is more poisonous is that one of Chu Feng's soul eldest sisters was also affected by being reduced to the halo. The two people had little relationship to begin with, but they actually risked their lives for Chu Feng, which is a bit poisonous, but overall it is still okay.

So handsome, I like it so much, especially the part about the power of the hearts of all living beings

The content is wonderful, the characters are full-bodied, and it's so beautiful that no need to say more [Like][Like][Like]

It's still ok to read, but the male protagonist is a bit weak, and the female protagonist's nine-star luck can't be compared to the five-star one, so she just goes to heaven and kisses her daughter. It's not very satisfying. Maybe it's because I've read too many cool articles. The author still listened to his advice, and his writing style is pretty good, so keep up the good work.

Is the heroine a sister? Still good-looking

Yes, but does this book have a single heroine or multiple heroines?

The writing is smooth and the writing skills are profound, but it is a little unclear to the readers.

The plot is compact, the characters are rich and thoughtful, the writing is very good, and it is very persuasive. I highly recommend everyone to read it.

So far it looks okay, it gives people a sense of flesh and blood, and the emotional lines are also very delicate. It's just too little. The author should update it quickly. The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this [laughing]

It's beautiful, super beautiful, I'm addicted just watching it [laughing evilly]

The plot is good and the characters are well developed. The protagonist should become stronger soon [Blow kiss]

It's very interesting to watch. Every character has flesh and blood. The plot is well polished. I hope there will be a single female protagonist.

It feels good. I just want to strengthen the protagonist and the heroine. I understand that the protagonist is a little weaker just after rebirth, but the protagonist's sister is talented and lucky and can't kill Chu Feng.

The description of the characters is quite detailed.

First of all, it must be emphasized that the protagonist's promotion speed is really slow, and then he and his sister are separated later. More than 200 protagonists have just established their foundation. Although he said before that Su Xian'er was his sister and had a very strong fortune, he didn't seem to notice much until now. Potential is below 8.0 And above 7.5 However, the quality of this book is still quite high. If it can be slightly changed later, the following potential can continue to increase.

The author writes very well

It's really a gold rush, and I've found something good.

The characters are really well drawn and Liu Yun really died with a knife.

I hope the author can keep doing it [laughing] In fact, the author doesn't need to write so many women. If he really wants to write, he should pay more attention to the emotional line.

It looks okay, very good, I'll give it five stars first.

Very good, the plot is very good, the structure is also very complete, it is a good book

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