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This is a really good book, with depth and content. Although it is not much, it is enough in Tomato. It is much better than the inexplicable various school beauties, female anchors, seniors, and other mess. I retract my preface, there are too many allusions within allusions. How can we repay kindness by repaying grievances directly?

It's quite good. It's a spiritual recovery article, and it does write about all kinds of strange people or things under the great changes. Because of the unlimited lifespan of this protagonist, he is not the kind of adventure stream that rushes into the secret realm when he sees it. For now, he is relatively quiet but not afraid of trouble. Judging from the current situation, the writing is not bad.

I like the setting of this book very much. The protagonist only needs to sleep in the water to obtain attribute points to increase his strength. The author's writing style is not bad. At least it does not make me feel uncomfortable while reading. The plot design is not bad. For me, the biggest highlight of this book is probably the setting. I think it suits my taste very well.

Judging from the current situation, the writing is extremely good. I think it is the best type of writing in the supernatural recovery category. It simulates the changes in the world after the huge changes in great detail. The protagonist is also very nice. The author is really trying to imagine the changes in people and society in the case of huge changes in the environment. Of course, the five-year gap is a clever way of writing to avoid the difficulty of describing the riot period and rationalize the article. The conjectures and reasoning based on the nature of the world are also very exciting.

The setting is okay, and the plot is on the right track, but visually the plot may be on track for world hegemony and the classic humiliation of South Korea and Japan, which is a bit typical. I'll wait and see, hoping to break out of the cliché and write something that really makes people watch. I will deduct one star or add one star depending on the situation.

I have read Chapter 50, and the plot is exciting. I liked the protagonist in the early stage, but after reading it, I particularly agree with one comment: If the protagonist were Director Chen Zhong, I don't know how cool it would be! How can a talented high school student, cautious and struggling to develop, be better than Director Chen, who is decisive, resourceful and firm in his beliefs? The further we go, the more I feel that the protagonist's behavior is not very likable. He is indeed too timid and afraid of getting into trouble. In addition, when reading the book, there are some references to scriptures, which are too cumbersome, too lengthy, and not well integrated into the plot. It feels like they are just trying to make up the number of words. Is it possible that readers don't want to read long passages about quotations from scriptures? It would be better if you split the content and integrate it into the plot. List a long description! It gets worse and worse from now on, even now I can't stand it anymore

It is considered top-notch among Tomatoes. Many of the settings are large and empty, but they can be written in detail and dare to write. Different from traditional immortality and supernatural powers, this book pays more attention to the development of the world, the progress of human civilization as a whole, and technology is still the top priority in the era of supernatural powers. It is very commendable. After all, many novels cannot explain the origin of superpowers at all. After the arrival of superpowers, the world will collapse directly, and all high-end technologies will directly collapse into ruins. Therefore, I think this book should be regarded as a sci-fi-type immortal power novel. It is really fresh and worth reading.

It's considered a high-quality product of Tomato, and it's not a brainless article. I don't understand why the rating is so low? Some of the writing is like a piece of shit, with scores of 8 or so. This book only scores 7. It can only be said that many people nowadays just want to have fun without brains and have no patience to read this kind of novel where the protagonist needs to grow up step by step. After reading it, I felt that the plot was very compact and not procrastinating. I felt that my IQ was online. It was good to read.

(Those who want to see the brainless pretense and slap in the face can leave first.) There are several good points in this novel: 1. It does not give you an ability at the beginning, but it is used repeatedly in the subsequent plots to constantly spawn monsters. This is already more than 90% of Tomato's novels. 2. The main and supporting characters all have IQs. It is not a story where the main character is smart and can see through everything directly, or the plot is tailor-made for the main character. 3. You may think that some plots are very common, but now that online literature has been developed for decades, what plots are not common? The key is the development process and results of the plot. I think at least the writing is not bad. 4. The writing is not bad, and the reading is quite smooth. Of course, it is impossible to study the Internet article in detail. Generally speaking, it is not a masterpiece, but it is enough for daily reading. Let me reiterate, if you only want to read the first few dozen chapters of each novel to get a fresh picture and just want to read it without any brains, you can just ignore my comments. Any one of the recommendations will meet your needs.

This book is quite well written. Don't let the elementary school students in the comment section lead you away. The author writes with care and his writing style is remarkable. The excessive explanations complained about in the comments section are actually the best parts of the book. The author's description of the data is relatively accurate, and he firmly keeps the protagonist's combat power data updated. The article's description of the construction of the brane universe and the body universe is still immature, but compared to Tomato's other books, at least he writes it clearly and allows people to understand his whimsical ideas. What is also worthy of recognition is the author's definition of the framework of the cultivation system. The four-step advanced cultivation method from scratch. I thought it was developed by the protagonist, but I did not expect that it was revealed through the sacrifice of the supporting character Kunlun Taoist Priest. What needs to be strengthened most in this book is the emotional expression of the characters, which is a bit unfamiliar and immature. There are also many characters who have been given a lot of descriptions, but they remain at the stage of having names and surnames, without flesh and blood. Although there is a lot of room for improvement in the book, it is undeniable that the author is writing well. I look forward to the author's next book!

The main character is emotionally stable, which is nice. The plot is more interesting and the characters are more realistic. The pace is not that fast, which is quite satisfactory. I am really tired of seeing the kind of mindless upgrades. Then it's a little watery.

Yes, it is very well written. Based on my ten years of reading experience, except for a few minor flaws, it can basically be said to be a masterpiece, but it is a bit short. The analysis of powers and the world I have seen so far feels a bit like the Holy Ruins. Overall, it is quite good and worth reading.

From the early stage, it was pretty good. The plot was smooth and ordinary, and the character of the protagonist was calm and calm. At least the early plot so far seems to me to be pretty good. That is, the formation logic and operation logic of the entire system have not yet been revealed. The early performance and description of these abilities were basically superficial. Anyway, after awakening, it can be used. I don't know why it can be used, how it can be used, or how it can be used. Even the term energy has not yet appeared. Let's see if it unfolds later.

Very interesting setting, I really like it. The protagonist's character is also quite good, he is sensible and cares about emotions. I like the setting of the world view, and the author's occasional popular science introductions are very satisfying to my taste. [Like] However, there are many loopholes in the page. The country's code name sometimes becomes a real name, and sometimes it becomes a real name. There are also some input errors that I hope the author can go back and correct. It was so exciting to see the Qiming experiment involving thousands of people! Come on, author!

Five-star support: 5.9 Is a bit low. There is no decisive killing or secret revenge, and the crooked businessman is saved later. It can be seen as a foreshadowing, but the characterization is a bit conflicting. The male protagonist should be very sensible and not care about these troublesome factors that hinder his immortality. Let me complain. When I read Chapter 40, I can tell that the author is looking for mythological material. I don't understand classical Chinese, but it does not prevent me from seeing the excellence of the plot. Later, I will amplify the uniqueness of the water god, such as developing a unique ability of the water god that other water powers do not have. It is easier to attract readers by widening the gap and contrasting it. The title of the book is a bit inconsistent. It has this ability, but it is not used to its fullest extent. Changing "I was selected by the Water God at the beginning, I chose to be invincible" has a cause and effect. Readers will roughly know the subsequent content, which is easier to substitute. Now it has reached the first and biggest explosive point in the book (the first copy has been opened). I have written it and the score has skyrocketed. If I have not written so much foreshadowing, it will easily lead to death. I look forward to it. I will save a bookshelf and read it later [Sentiment]

The description is delicate and the protagonist really has a brain. I hope the writing will get better and better.

It's a good read. I've read a lot of books. The development of this one is different from what I thought. At first, I thought it was an old-fashioned setting. The more I read, the better it looks. It's not a traditional setting. The world view is also great. Come on, author! ! !

The novel's unique lonely and intellectual temperament is already present at the beginning. The protagonist's choice when spiritual energy is just emerging is different from any other novel with the same theme. The dozens of chapters about entering university to study the nature of ability are perfect, with exciting points, foreshadowing and explosive points. It is definitely not to be missed. Of course, there are some parts in it that I personally think are not good, such as those chapters when I was in trouble just after I came out of Penglai, but the flaws are not hidden, and it is truly a fine book.

This is a masterpiece! There are countless famous scenes in the book, but the most shocking one is when Guan Yu rides a giant dragon and competes with Thanos for the Moonlight Box. Thanos is about to snap his fingers to overturn the situation. Fortunately, Huang Rong takes out an RPG and interrupts the spell. But the biggest variable is Lin Daiyu, whose spell power is ridiculously high. At the critical moment, Victor activated his mechanical evolution in time, connected with sprinting flash and then Yasuo's Breathless Slash, and then avoided Lin Daiyu's ice ultimate move. What impressed me the most was Lu Zhishen roaring at Voldemort: "Stop playing with black magic in front of the Sa family!", Which vividly showed Lu Zhishen's anger after being hit by Avada Kedavra. Overall, the plot is ups and downs, the combat power system is complete, foreshadowing runs throughout the text, the martial arts descriptions are full of tension, and each character is unique.

Brother, you have to work hard When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise starts to sound. The number of dead harvests began to decline. When you finish the fifth update, the readers' support will spontaneously form a voice of praise that becomes louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

From a scientific and another perspective, it reasonably combines the mythical powers and the world after the great changes as far as possible. The reasonable inference is that it is a very enjoyable book. The poisonous point in my personal opinion is that the protagonist is too powerful, and Director Zhou who defies all opinions also impressed me deeply. When this kind of situation happens in our nation, there may not necessarily be such a clear-minded person. It should be noted that horses with a thousand miles of horses often have Bole, but not always. Under normal circumstances, the protagonist is the ending of Copernicus. In any case, the chapter on the superstring membrane universe experiment can be regarded as a good climax. The framework of an unknown source of power system is still set up, and the rest is how the protagonist obtains power within this framework. Whether the previous foreshadowing has been withdrawn.

The science fiction style is combined with the spiritual revival style. There are many new things that are very interesting, such as membrane theory, in vitro embryos, and AI hosting. It is already rare to find new things. It can be seen that the author carefully researched the information and tried his best to be rigorous.

When I read this book, I went straight to the end. How can I put it, the traditional spiritual energy recovery is about a world that has been revived for one or two hundred or even hundreds of years. This book is very innovative. Of course, there are also some books about the beginning of spiritual energy recovery, but it is not as logical as this book. Especially the protagonist is smart, and it is good that the male protagonist does not forcefully increase his combat power. However, there are still a few points to complain about. The male protagonist's sister should not be so bored. , In terms of combat power, the one millionth part is really a bit low. I feel that the combat power will collapse as written later. I also have some suggestions for the subsequent development. There should not be too much feeling about the realm. Since Taoist companions are immortal, it is best not to do so. The author has not made it clear on this point. If you write about the stars later, you can refer to the Holy Ruins, but it is best to be innovative, otherwise it will be boring to watch later. In short, this subject has great potential.

To be honest, judging from the world view of this book, it is a bit qualified to become a god and enlighten the Tao. The book is also interspersed with some hot Internet memes, some like Chen Dong. The most praiseworthy thing is that the description of the changes in the world of spiritual energy recovery is very grand and has a strong sense of substitution. The changes in the social and political system caused by spiritual energy recovery are also logical. The only separation is that the protagonist's ability growth must be sleeping to increase combat power, which is equivalent to the traditional immortality flow, but the protagonist is difficult to break away from the fetters of the worldly family. In fact, before and after The contradiction is quite big. As the protagonist with the power of the water god, it seems that the main method of fighting is hand-to-hand combat, and the look and feel is a bit unacceptable. Suppressing combat power is necessary to have an outline and keep the combat power system from collapsing, but it must also be reasonable, with a clear growth system, reasonable plot conflicts and interesting arrangements, otherwise it will become a boring article. I hope the author can consider this aspect. Overall, the current content of this book is indeed low at 7 points, and it is acceptable between 8.8 And 9 points. 20 Year old bookworm stays

The setting is good, the author's knowledge base is not bad, and he has grasped both culture and physics to derive a different setting. Similar works include "Arcane Throne". It uses contemporary physics to explain fiction, forming a logical and self-consistent structure, which is very comfortable to watch. The characters have distinctive personalities, and they appear to be indifferent, but they are affectionate and meaningful. Moreover, the thoughts and ideas test the author's logical ability and thinking ability, which can better support the description of a high-IQ character. There are some flaws, but I have little talent and knowledge, so I can only see these, and I can only briefly comment on the surface. This book was born out of the idea of ​​​​physics people enjoying themselves, but the writing style is not exquisite enough to support a huge narrative. The upgrade structure is not outstanding enough, but who says that exploring the upgrade structure is not a unique advantage compared to other books.

I have finished reading the chapters so far. It can be seen that the author has put great care into the settings of each person, and they all have vivid backgrounds. And this ability is also very interesting to watch. Anyway, come on author, let's discuss something and save the manuscript🥺🥺🥺

The first few hundred chapters of this book are a bit like a scholarly novel wearing a resurrected aura when he is on Earth. The protagonist speeds through all kinds of knowledge with a very high IQ bonus, and then proves the dimensional theory, and then studies the out-of-body consciousness technology, creates the Dream Core Consciousness Processor, and then studies cell farms. To be honest, I think these are a bit boring. But on the whole, this novel not only contains many golden quotes from Taoist and Buddhist works, but the author's basic skills are also very solid, and the content does not have any trace of a novice novel. However, this novel has a very serious problem, that is, the protagonist's methods are too single. In the era of supernatural powers, the protagonist always defeats all kinds of magic. And after the protagonist acquires new skills by visualizing the inscriptions, he feels that the power of the skills will never change. In the early stage, he still felt a little discouraged from giving up. The protagonist's skills are a bit overwhelming, and there is no way to deal with them, and there will be little or no improvement before falling asleep. They are all about defeating all methods with one force and relying on physical fitness to kill everyone. Overall, this novel is still very good. It must have content and quality, and it can be strongly recommended by some xuebawen.

Can you please look at the back of each comment before commenting? I didn't get into the topic at the beginning, but after reading a little bit, I felt it was toxic, and some gave it 1 star after reading it for a while. The world view at the back is very grand, and the characters are well designed. Most of the novels I read do not want to read anymore, but I have been following this book. The score of 7 is really low, with a guaranteed score of 8.8.

Just looking at the introduction, this article can easily be classified as an longevity-style or urban superpower cool article. But after reading it carefully, you can taste a different kind of heaviness: it has the common features of similar works - the protagonist has invincible confidence, a special growth trajectory, the unique caution of the immortal, and the loneliness of independence from the world. It also has some exciting plot points that the public loves to watch: slaps in the face and pretending to be cool, happy grudges, standing up and supporting the younger sister when she is oppressed, which is equally refreshing to read. But it also breaks out of the framework of the traditional longevity novel: the protagonist is no longer just a bystander and witness of history, but a writer of history and a founder of civilization. While pursuing his own strength, he never gave up to create the ideal era in his heart. In my opinion, the most touching part of this article is not the core reason for the popularity of most immortality articles at the moment - they more reflect the psychological projection of contemporary readers: Pursuit of stability: In a fiercely competitive environment, everyone prefers "stable" protagonists and dislikes high-risk fights. The longevity flow just provides the sense of security that "as long as I can survive, time is on my side." Lie down and be free: Immortality means absolute freedom and the confidence to solve everything, catering to people's desire to get rid of anxiety and want to lie down but still be in control of the overall situation. What is really rare about this book is its unique depth: it not only satisfies emotional catharsis, but also represents the true ideal utopia in the author's mind when he writes it. If written in this context, this is no longer just a legend of one person, but a majestic epic of an entire civilization.

It's really super good-looking. Why is the rating so low? The more you read, the more exciting it becomes. Every time I watch the changes in the times, I get goosebumps. It makes me feel terrified when I think about it. Just when you feel that this era is developing for the better, the biggest turning point suddenly comes. The world is impacted by the emergence of superpowers, and ordinary people are coerced to develop upwards. Every time when the world is stable, the evil brought by superpowers is quietly appearing. It is not a sudden appearance, but a gradual one. When you watch it appear, you will feel more wonderful afterward.