When I Woke up at Sea, the Capitalist Lady Became a Gangster

The outline of the article is quite good. Your work is a novel, not an essay. Shu Qing, there are too many revisions, the novel should focus on continuing the story Your article has the mood of a narrative prose

This article is novel, the story has ups and downs, and the map is updated quickly! A very special chronicle! The heroine is a very decisive person, patriotic and kind-hearted. She is ruthless when she should be ruthless. Not the Holy Mother!

At the beginning, it looked like she was writing a narrative. The heroine would always forget how to use space, and suffered a lot of unnecessary hardships. The ups and downs of her life slowly attracted people to continue reading. The plot was novel, the suffering in a foreign country, the waste of human life, the dormancy in the small and insignificant moments. She returned to the motherland after many difficulties and provided food for the border. In fact, the food provided for the border was not cautious at all. That is to say, the author did not pursue it because she was her own mother. She was lucky during the time when she went to Kyoto to find her aunt on the border! After arriving at Big Banyan Tree, I integrated into life, and all kinds of little experts, the backbone of the village, led everyone to survive. Things like fighting for rice and enmity would not happen. It was really good, a very harmonious life. There was no such kind of super in the village, which was very good. Later, when the educated youth went to the countryside, it was a relatively ordinary story, so I won't comment too much! Overall it looks good

The writing is very good, and it made me feel the heroine's strength from the end of the world. The details are a little problematic, but it is innocuous. After finding her aunt, she and the villagers live together. There is no best, and everyone develops towards a better future together. The heroine does not say that she provides free materials to the villagers. Many of them are obtained through everyone's hard work.

The perspective of the character, the environment, time and place, the background culture of the time, etc., And the way of logical thinking. Divergence, special relativity in wide areas. People, general characteristics of the development of things, regular causal relationships. The world view and storyline that structure the characters' lives.

Others are desperately trying to escape home, but the heroine is desperately trying to get home. It's good to go back to the old ways.

This is one of my favorite novels. It is tense, exciting, and the spirit of bravely facing the enemy without fear and difficulty is the pride of every Chinese. Thank you to the author! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's not bad, but the writing about going to the countryside later doesn't sound like it's from the south, it's more like it's from the north.

I really like the detailed descriptions in this book. When we met the bandits at sea, the whole family suffered a shocking disaster, and when they were struggling to survive, the psychological description of the heroine was really detailed. Later, it was also because the aunt, the only surviving member of the family, took root in the small mountain village and devoted herself to leading them out of the three years of disaster. The heroine's desert-like heart gradually becomes fuller. It's a very good period story, with a period atmosphere and good details.

The twists and turns of the story reveal the extraordinary life of the heroine, which is as ordinary as water. It is like a long scroll slowly unfolding, and when the panoramic view is revealed, the years are silent, and it is peaceful and beautiful in the end. Just like in the end, it turns out that she is the eldest lady of the Song family. If she had known it, she would be full of regret, which is ridiculous and relieved! Some people live in their own world and are busy in vain, but the heroine and the hero become the protagonists of the story.

The content of the work is very novel, but the loose content that is too formal should be more rigorous. The characters are well developed and the author continues to work hard.

The author's writing style is very good, and the details are particularly well described. It is not a tacky era novel. If the author writes apocalyptic articles, he must be a good writer.

Can you describe less useless things?

I want to know if the heroine and Little William will meet again, and if Little William's family will survive and reach the UK safely!

After watching it, it's not bad, but the heroine is a bit egotistical. This may be the characteristic of people who are reborn in the last days. They don't like to care about people or things that have nothing to do with them. Other than that, it's okay! Almost all are about the daily life of struggling to survive in the 1950s and 1960s. Although it writes about reform and opening up, it does not write about going to college, buying a lot of houses and opening factories. It is a cliché [laughter] and it ends with the hero and heroine going to Suzhou to live in Suzhou without arranging a child or two after several years of marriage!

I like this heroine, the story is wonderful

It's really beautiful. The subject matter is very novel and the writing is vivid.

I'll give it four stars first. It's novel and interesting. I'm looking forward to the follow-up. After I found my aunt, I felt that there was nothing to see. Moreover, each article contained many adjectives and repeated superimposed words.

It's not bad. The first half is about the heroine trying her best to survive and return to the motherland. The second half is about rural life. The heroine never relies on golden fingers to fish, she has few emotional lines, and she didn't have any children in that era. It's a good book to read.

Full five-star rating, super nice to watch and super nice to listen to.

I really like this kind of book where the heroine is tough, strong, smart, kind but has her own persistence. I admire the heroine very much. If it were me who started the story, I wouldn't be able to. Especially being so far away from my hometown, it's really not easy to come back. The male protagonist is indeed basically a background. The only thing is that I feel that the way Lin Yue handles it may be a bit merciful.

Good-looking, really good-looking.

I've read Chapter 11. Does the author like to write prose? Will the pace be faster later on?

Entering the space, the outer board is still there, cow.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

It was still smooth to read, but one chapter is too short. Only 3 chapters can equal one chapter from other authors, and it was gone in one slip.

In the first part, there are all kinds of fighting and escaping, in the middle part, you lead the village to survive, and in the later part, you live a stable life! I still like the early stage, it's so exciting!

What a novel way to bring in, it's so difficult to go back to China.

Personally, I prefer the first part when the protagonist is wandering alone. Although the second part is also good, overall it's still good [Love] [Like]

Overall, it's okay. I can't say it's good, but Dui wanted me to skip chapters to read it.