Zhutian: Transform into a Tornado and Instantly Kill Kame Sennin at the Beginning

Tatsumaki's combat power is too high. Tatsumaki can't even reach the destruction star level. How can he compare with Frieza? Frieza just stood there and the tornado couldn't even scratch him. . . 😓 Wow, what's more, the protagonist only has 25% of the power of tornado, it's too outrageous [face covering]

Change order, excellent writing style→The writing style is excellent, there is almost no description of women's clothing and female bodies. Li Yuanba didn't change his name immediately after transforming into a tornado. It was really awkward for Li Yuanba to listen to the book, and he used the male "he". Except for these two poisonous points, everything else is well written. The plot of the first volume of Dragon Ball is magically modified. It is semi-invincible, the contrast between pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, and the delicate and soft loli is a great score, which makes up for the regrettable plot. I have just started writing the second volume, and I have to say that I am looking forward to the follow-up plot. Fortunately, I changed the name. It is still called Tatsumaki, which sounds comfortable. The writing style has also improved and is worth updating.

(Those who want to read the book review before reading the book, please read here first) Tuguo read the comments and book reviews of all chapters at chapter 50 and gave everyone a thumbs up. At the same time, he also responded to some of the audience's needs: 1. Regarding the character of the protagonist, there are some confusions in the front. In fact, it is mainly due to the plot arrangement of the character. At this time, the protagonist is constantly being manipulated by the system. In fact, the character of the protagonist in the first chapter is still relatively distinct. However, as the plot develops, the character of the protagonist will gradually stabilize. Audiences can rest assured. 2. Regarding the setting of combat power, because this is Zhutianwen, the protagonist will go to different worlds, which also means that the combat power of each world is not the same, and it is difficult to synchronize with the corresponding world, so everyone can discuss and compare the combat power of various worlds, but they cannot fight. 3. It can be seen from some of the responses that everyone has a relatively high level of understanding of each world. Tuguo cannot guarantee that he is better than the audience. Therefore, this book focuses on entertainment and fun. At the same time, you can bring up the regrets that may exist in some worlds. Tuguo will try to join in as much as possible to give everyone an experience to make up for the regrets. As an author, I can only say don't keep books, I understand everything [laughter]

..... To be honest, it's good-looking, but the main character is not epileptic as the author said. It's Tang. He's finished Tang or mentally ill. Otherwise, there's no way to explain it. It's really good-looking, but the inner description of the protagonist is really unflattering. Then the author said in chapter 59 that he accepted this problem and only updated a few chapters now. But to be honest, this book is really good. The one star missing is purely due to the Tang protagonist in the early stage [face covering]

Invincible, all I can say is

It's so good, but it would be perfect if the male protagonist had more plot in the later stages. Then……………… It's good-looking. It's even better with the protagonist's role. More would be great.

By the way, what does the protagonist look like? Where does the tornado come from? Do you have any pictures?

Humorous and interesting

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Don't give up, don't give up. I still read it, so I just bought 5 of them. I almost thought I was dead from reading.