HP: After Getting the Diary

Nice. It was a bit of a stream of consciousness at first, and some of the paragraphs were too long to be easy to read, but the more you read, the more you read. It would be better if the author would give each chapter a title. I really like the atmosphere between Garcia and the two snakes, there is an inexplicable feeling of mutual healing. . . All in all, recommended.

It's very interesting. I hope the author will stick with it 🥰 🥰 It's been a long time since I've seen a fluent and non-AI-like article, and there are no common clichés. Our Xiaojia is also getting better and better as he gets better and better. His personality is getting better and better, and he has an inadvertent sense of s*x, especially when it comes to training little Barty. Although there is not much written about it, you can feel that he is having fun training him. In the emotional scenes, I feel that there is a sense of relaxation where friendship, family, and love are mixed together. I usually tease each other very naturally. Xiaotang always said that Xiaojia had something wrong at the beginning, which I found very funny. Hahaha. In short, I will continue to wait for the author's update. I hope the plot will become more and more exciting. We Xiaojia want SSS!

It's so good. I've read half of it, and I really have to post a review. It's so interesting. The writing is okay. I feel that I need this kind of writing to read HP. It's very smooth. The plot is very interesting, not the same. I didn't follow the three little ones all the time. After reading so many HPs, I feel that this article is really well written!!! I really recommend it!!! [Blow kiss] Garcia may be a bit obsessed with Riddle, and his brain circuit is also very beautiful. He is afraid of children and cute. . I really like this character

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I hope the author will update it soon. I really have no taste for food every day and can't sleep. It makes me feel like I have insomnia every day. If you don't update it, I feel like my life is about to collapse! I am commenting this time, not because there is anything bad about this book, but because the author has not updated it for a long time. I have read it three times. I just want my comment to be seen by the author so that he can update it. Thank you.

After reading it, I can only say that the author's writing is awesome, the writing style is also very good, and the character creation is also very good! It completely abandons the stereotypes of the four founders of Hogwarts. The character creation is very novel and has a background. Highly recommended!

Can you add a title 🤦

Everyone's character is vivid and three-dimensional, and the entry point for Tom is relatively novel (at least I haven't seen anything similar yet). The character of the protagonist has not collapsed. Although Goldfinger is very powerful, it is reasonable to understand it along the way. The author must continue to update! (Also, do you really not consider giving yourself a pen name?) Well, I think... There is still a lot of room for improvement in the processing of emotions. Although the protagonist's innate ability is similar to expanding emotions, if he does not handle it well, he will really feel like a psycho. He can be more gentle instead of talking nicely. Suddenly he will say something very sharp, and everyone will ignore the sharpness and continue to talk properly.

Delicious cp😘, why haven't you rated it yet🧐

Oh my gosh, the author's writing is super interesting. I love this story.