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I have the following questions that I would like to discuss with the author: 1. The pirate group route taken by the author's protagonist should be an elite one, just like the red-haired pirate group. Among the many fanfics I have read, most of them are either all confidantes, or a small group of confidantes, plus some younger brothers, and some are based on family members. To create a pirate group in the form of a family, this part is a confidante, plus a lot of family members, and some are loyal or not, relying on their strength and inexplicable charisma to recruit Elephant Fatal ones, how to say, evil people, for example, it is the Blackbeard Pirates, so which type do Bamboo and the others prefer? 2. When I was watching One Piece as a kid, I really liked Luffy's passion and friendship. But when I grow up, I watch the adventures of Pirates, which are called passion and friendship. What's underneath is identity, bloodline ability, and Luffy is like that, relying on the so-called halo of the protagonist, otherwise he may die a thousand and eight hundred times. There are three kinds in total, or he must stay friends with the ship. A good relationship, it may be like a nanny, sometimes it is hostile to the third party, and sometimes everyone does not care about their own affairs, but according to the original work, except for the red hair, at least the other four emperors will be beaten again this time. According to the introduction, the protagonist feels that he will also become emperor on the sea later. What do you think about this aspect of the plot? ⊙▽⊙3. As an entrepreneur, when it comes to Nami and Robin, I personally think Nami's ability is more important to time travellers. As for Robin, although he is very capable, we already know that Pluto is in Wano and Neptune is Shirahoshi, Uranus is in the World Government, and the last big boss is Imu4. Don't tell me that the protagonist wants to be the Pirate King. Just say it verbally. After all, you are your power. When you are strong enough at sea, and among pirates you can basically give an order, you are either the Pirate King or the Pirate King 5. I think fate is a very good word. Sometimes when two people meet, it is an arrangement of fate. In fact, you don't have to be so deliberate in creating the encounter. Come on, keep up the hard work and update. So far I haven't read anything that can make me quit instantly.

I hope it looks like an elite group and not a big fleet and a founding country. It is extremely bloated and cannot be explained clearly. It is best to bring Hawkeye here too. Hahahahahahahaha 5 stars to the author. Cheers!

Give me five stars first. The protagonist can be strengthened from the theatrical version. For example, go to the Precious Beast Island and use the unicorn horn to strengthen the protagonist's system, awaken the so-called unicorn bloodline, unicorn pattern, etc., And the Seven-Star Holy Sword. It's a waste of feelings, there has been no update for 14 days, and the updates have been discontinued [grievance][grievance][grievance]

Old time writing

Come on, it's not bad

Reasonable, don't collapse

You can take a look. Just a little less

A very nice novel 🤩

I would like to give the author a suggestion. For the ability of fire, please refer to Yamamoto Genryusai in Bleach. He is simply invincible.

Not bad, not bad, I like it very much. It's pretty good among Pirates fans so far.

Good pirate fanfic

The author writes well and is willing to listen to some suggestions from readers. This is very good.

Compared with the book, you can still check it out. It's not too spoofy. 5.3 Is indeed the lowest point, it should be within 7 points. I don't know why your book is so low. You can still read it. I don't recommend it. I can give you a score.

Okay, okay, but I still want Lu Qi and the others to eat the phantom beast fruit, otherwise the limit on their strength is too great!

The writing is pretty good. Keep up the good work.

Come on, the author is great

Author, how do you write the name of this pirate group?

It's okay, a book above the standard.