Will justice prevail?
Of course, only the winner is justice!
In a chaotic and filthy world like One Piece,
Weakness is the greatest original sin!
Want to control your own destiny,
You must make yourself stronger!
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"Chris, I will become a great swordsman, and then I will let you experience the love from Leah."
"Then you have to work hard!"
…
"Francis Toph, on behalf of the Chris Pirates, I welcome you to join us. From now on, we are family."
…
"Chris, you are so domineering, I look forward to your performance."
"Raphael, we'll see."
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On the mighty sea
See how Chris started from scratch, gathered his partners step by step, embarked on the road to the top, and wrote his legend!
Welcome to taste it!
Reader comments
The writing style is clean and neat, and it is an author who strives for the most perfect character. The plot is smooth, clear, concise and reasonable. I hope it is not a perfect psychological writing that is conceived in a moment of passion and delays reality. Advantages: Chapters 1-3 perfectly analyze the cruel survival of the world of pirates (winner is a king and loser is a bandit). Many fan authors do not even understand the most basic world and social situation: "I ask you authors who just talk about it, what is the theme of pirates?", "OK, you are a fool, you write to satisfy your own desires, there is no logic at all." Disadvantages: I only see "chapter" ships, which are also the basics of the pirate world and science (I don't like the author: the ship structure of 50 meters wide / 150 meters long, "and bow wings", a ship with no physical power science. The bow can be engraved what you like, or you can reflect your own symbolic inner thoughts on your own flag)
It deserves a five-star rating, because the protagonist created by the author has his own ideas. He does not blindly rely on the so-called prophet plot, nor does he lick the protagonist group or the navy. He forms a group to develop his power alone, has time to settle, and advances in a planned way, which is quite good.
It's quite good-looking and has a moderate pace and a clear main line and goal. However, it's a little bit procrastinating and should be rated a nine, so I'll give it a five-star rating. But it's very well-written and should be a hit. If you're interested, you can come in and take a look.
All of them think that the protagonist's strength improvement in the pirate novel is the most reasonable. He grows up step by step, and finally uses the three colors of domineering to fuse and destroy Im! (Great idea)
To travel through time, you must rely on your own force and resourcefulness to defeat the world government, rather than just flying around the road! Isn't it better to gather companions yourself and then train them than to just find the original protagonist group?
The ending is also good, because the protagonist's strength has been raised to the limit, and he has united and resisted forces. Do we have to wait for Luffy to grow up for a few more years to come?
The writing is very good, the author keeps up the good work and urges updates online [smile][smile][smile]
This is my first time writing a book, everyone!
Finally, I have a fanfic that is not a system, and the rhythm is not too bad and the rhythm is good. Finally realized the feeling of panning for gold in the shit heap mentioned on Douyin.
A pure story about a bull and horse traveling through the world of pirates. He has no system and no super talent. He finds the first thunder fruit and gives it to his subordinates.
It's usually a book, but if you're short of books, you can read it
Well enough. . . . Just the whole powerful fruit without hanging it
Come on author, the writing is very good.
Come on, keep expanding your power
So far so good…
Like first and then read, make it a habit [like]
It's best to eat fruits that are in the form of angels, demons, Shura and other phantom beasts.
Not bad? If you are new. There is still a lot of room for improvement in basic skills.
Hang in there and keep writing
This book is okay. It was okay at the beginning. There was a slight problem in the middle, but then it became fast-paced. Although the ending is a bit messy, it's okay, at least the ending is clear.
Well written, let's see what happens next. [Think]
Not bad, not bad. Among pirates, this is also a very good novel.
Chapter 6 The woman was not headshot
Very good, I feel it has a potential of over nine points. But if the thunder fruit is not eaten, and the pink green dragon is not eaten, what kind of fruit does the author arrange?
Can you tell me whether the protagonist will eat devil fruits?
Overall, it's actually pretty good. The protagonist and everyone on his team have a pretty good image. Don't let the ratings put you off.
The writing style is clean and neat, and it is an author who strives for the most perfect character. The plot is smooth, clear, concise and reasonable. I hope it is not a perfect psychological writing that is conceived in a moment of passion and delays reality. Advantages: Chapters 1-3 perfectly analyze the cruel survival of the world of pirates (winner is a king and loser is a bandit). Many fan authors do not even understand the most basic world and social situation: "I ask you authors who just talk about it, what is the theme of pirates?", "OK, you are a fool, you write to satisfy your own desires, there is no logic at all." Disadvantages: I only see "chapter" ships, which are also the basics of the pirate world and science (I don't like the author: the ship structure of 50 meters wide / 150 meters long, "and bow wings", a ship with no physical power science. The bow can be engraved what you like, or you can reflect your own symbolic inner thoughts on your own flag)
It deserves a five-star rating, because the protagonist created by the author has his own ideas. He does not blindly rely on the so-called prophet plot, nor does he lick the protagonist group or the navy. He forms a group to develop his power alone, has time to settle, and advances in a planned way, which is quite good.
It's quite good-looking and has a moderate pace and a clear main line and goal. However, it's a little bit procrastinating and should be rated a nine, so I'll give it a five-star rating. But it's very well-written and should be a hit. If you're interested, you can come in and take a look.
All of them think that the protagonist's strength improvement in the pirate novel is the most reasonable. He grows up step by step, and finally uses the three colors of domineering to fuse and destroy Im! (Great idea) To travel through time, you must rely on your own force and resourcefulness to defeat the world government, rather than just flying around the road! Isn't it better to gather companions yourself and then train them than to just find the original protagonist group? The ending is also good, because the protagonist's strength has been raised to the limit, and he has united and resisted forces. Do we have to wait for Luffy to grow up for a few more years to come?
The writing is very good, the author keeps up the good work and urges updates online [smile][smile][smile]
This is my first time writing a book, everyone!
Finally, I have a fanfic that is not a system, and the rhythm is not too bad and the rhythm is good. Finally realized the feeling of panning for gold in the shit heap mentioned on Douyin.
A pure story about a bull and horse traveling through the world of pirates. He has no system and no super talent. He finds the first thunder fruit and gives it to his subordinates.
It's usually a book, but if you're short of books, you can read it
Well enough. . . . Just the whole powerful fruit without hanging it
Come on author, the writing is very good.
Come on, keep expanding your power
So far so good…
Like first and then read, make it a habit [like]
It's best to eat fruits that are in the form of angels, demons, Shura and other phantom beasts.
Not bad? If you are new. There is still a lot of room for improvement in basic skills.
Hang in there and keep writing
This book is okay. It was okay at the beginning. There was a slight problem in the middle, but then it became fast-paced. Although the ending is a bit messy, it's okay, at least the ending is clear.
Well written, let's see what happens next. [Think]
Not bad, not bad. Among pirates, this is also a very good novel.
Chapter 6 The woman was not headshot
Very good, I feel it has a potential of over nine points. But if the thunder fruit is not eaten, and the pink green dragon is not eaten, what kind of fruit does the author arrange?
Can you tell me whether the protagonist will eat devil fruits?
Overall, it's actually pretty good. The protagonist and everyone on his team have a pretty good image. Don't let the ratings put you off.