What's Wrong with a Frail Top? Don't Cry When I Spit Up Blood

The pace of this book is good, and this genre is not easy to find. The author, as a newbie, writes very well, and the words are full of vitality. But there are some shortcomings, that is, the protagonist's relationship develops too fast, and it feels like he falls in love before anything has happened. Although the relationship in fast-travel novels generally develops relatively quickly, there should also be some process. Nowadays, many heartthrob novels and fast-travel novels have this common problem. You don't know when you will suddenly become obsessed with this person. If the author wants to further develop in the field of novels, I think this aspect can be worked on. Die Jia: As a new author, the writing is already pretty good.

Very nice article. Because the requirements for XP are usually relatively high. I often can't eat delicious food. This one really made it up to me. Highly recommended, deserves to be seen by more people. Moreover, I am a person who never reads unit articles, but this one is really well written. It can be regarded as a small cure for my thunder point.

After watching Three Worlds, I can't help but want to comment. Although the emotions are a bit abrupt (I don't really care because I like people inexplicably), the character settings in each chapter are super delicate. Especially the third world, after watching it, I felt like someone was squeezing my little heart, which hurt and itched. The corpse couldn't help but feel warm. And the storyline is not a cliche plot, there are a lot of little ingenuities that do their own thing. 💛💛The most important thing is that the author is really gentle and well written. A happy ending was given to every character (including supporting characters), and a lot of regrets were avoided as much as possible. For me, who is usually very depressed, reading novels just makes me feel better. This book was exactly what I expected. I believe the author will write better and better P. S. Chinese is not my native language hahaha. I can only express my love for this book in poor language (ˊo̴̶̷̤ ᴗ o̴̶̷̤ˋ)

It's very interesting to read. The characters are very three-dimensional and the language is not too cumbersome. It is one of the best articles in the series I have read. He is also very lively and gentle. He listens to readers' suggestions and interacts with us. I hope everyone will not miss this article and this excellent cook. I also wish you success in updating the article and that it can be seen by more people [love] [love] [blowing kiss]

Fits me perfectly, like tailor-made. How could I ever come across such a perfect book. Don't miss it if you like the beautiful, the strong, the weak, the weak, and the weak. The most important thing is that you will meet the upright and humorous chef! ! !

The writing is very beautiful. My biggest XP in my life is that my lover feels sorry for me. The writing is also very good. I wrote very well in the first world. I have some basic skills. I look forward to finishing it.

Now I have read the world of the Zerg. The author writes it very well, the writing is smooth and the plot is smooth and sweet. I like Xiao Xue very much and it made me cry non-stop. The author Bao Baobao's writing is very good, but if you only look at the sick and weak attack, you can avoid the lightning a little. The attack is only sick but not weak. It still gives me the feeling that I am stronger when I am attacked by a strong attack. As far as the world I have seen so far, I will say that the attack is higher, including the world with more weak heroes like the Zerg. In the world, Gong Bao, as a male insect, can fight better than Shou, and can also pick off many female soldiers at one time. I don't have any objections to strong attack, but why is sick and weak attack such a sick and weak method? It can be said that it is purely sick and not weak anymore. In these few worlds, Gong has been injured and in pain. I still feel a little bit heartbroken when I see it. Anyone who likes two strong characters doting each other sweetly should read it. It's very well written. Based on my personal XP, I don't recommend reading it in terms of attack and control but weak in attack and control. You can also read it if it's very light and partial to attack and control. Shou Bao fell in love with Gong Bao very quickly. They're very good and doting on each other. It's just that I'm a little advanced, so I don't think it's a favored novel.

Qwq is so beautiful... I saw some people saying that the love line in the first chapter was abrupt, but I think it's okay! They are all very beautiful, and the cook is also very cute. What the author has to say at the end of each article is so cute. Baby, let me kiss you [blowing kiss]

It is a good book where you can see the entanglement of emotions and the vitality of life. Although sometimes the love is a bit inexplicable, it is undeniable that its rhythm is very suitable for the rhythm of a fast-travel novel. The personality shaping of the protagonist and the plot setting of the unit story are all arranged quite appropriately, which reflects the author's unique style. I personally think that the most beautiful part of reading the story is that we witness a part of their journey. It doesn't need to be detailed, as long as we know that they are happy. Besides, love is something inexplicable in the first place, hahaha. If I want to talk about other things worth recommending, it's great that the characters are not facial makeup. It's great that every world has something new. No matter the protagonist, the supporting characters, the system, or the author, they didn't treat me as if I was mentally retarded. This book was born under the author's loving pen. I'm so moved (˘ω˘ƪ).

I really like the story written by the teacher about Sickness. Although the relationship progresses quickly, I have read Three Small Worlds so far. I think it may have something to do with the subject matter. Because if you travel quickly, I can feel that they are more suitable for each other, but they should have more stories that have not been shown to us. As for the unit article (it feels really difficult to write about the relationship progress), I hope the teacher will write a long article so that I can see more details of their relationship. I am very much looking forward to it.