I'm a beginner, so please don't flame me if you don't like it. I hope everyone will help keep me on track, but please don't just criticize. It would be best if you could suggest how I should improve, since that would motivate me more. This is my first book, and I hope there'll be more to come.
This is a fantasy world, leaning more toward war. It consists of one continent and four regions. The continent is called the Karl Continent. There won't be any transmigrators or anything like that, and there are no reborn characters. I selected that tag by accident. If there has to be one, then I can only say there's a prophet who can glimpse the future.
Everyone is welcome to comment. If you can suggest reasonable character setups and the like, I'll definitely add them all. Suggestions about countries and races are welcome, too. I hope you'll help me flesh out the worldbuilding.
Also, since I haven't settled on a title, the cover's colors may look a little odd. I'll change them once the title is finalized.
It can be seen that the author is building a grand fictional world, and the imagination and plot design are very good. It would be better as a children's book! Special reminder, everyone will feel better if they listen to books than read 😂 😂
Highly recommended, very helpful for sleeping
The scene where Jun Daoyao meets the savages is so real, both in terms of actions, expressions, and descriptions, it is very fascinating and gripping. What took so long?