I'm a novice here, so don't criticize me if you don't like it, but I also hope that everyone can supervise me, but don't criticize me purely. It's better to tell me how to change it. This will give me more motivation. This is my first book, and I hope there will be more.
This is a fantasy world, which is more war-oriented. It is divided into one continent and four continents. The continent is called Karl Continent. There will be no time travelers or the like, and there will be no reborn people. The label was accidentally chosen by me. If I have to say that there are, I can only say that it is a prophet who peeks into the future.
Everyone is welcome to comment. If you can suggest a more reasonable character setting, I will definitely add it. National race and the like are also acceptable. I hope everyone can help me add some worldview.
Also, because the title of the book is uncertain, the color scheme of the cover may look a bit strange. We will change it later when the title of the book is confirmed.
Reader comments
It can be seen that the author is building a grand fictional world, and the imagination and plot design are very good. It would be better as a children's book! Special reminder, everyone will feel better if they listen to books than read [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
Highly recommended, very helpful for sleeping
The scene where Jun Daoyao meets the savages is so real, both in terms of actions, expressions, and descriptions, it is very fascinating and gripping.
What took so long?
It can be seen that the author is building a grand fictional world, and the imagination and plot design are very good. It would be better as a children's book! Special reminder, everyone will feel better if they listen to books than read [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
Highly recommended, very helpful for sleeping
The scene where Jun Daoyao meets the savages is so real, both in terms of actions, expressions, and descriptions, it is very fascinating and gripping. What took so long?