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It's okay, but the author has specified a habit of torturing the owner [OK]

The plot is OK, no problem, but there are too many symbols that dazzle the eyes [vomit] New book~five stars~

The story is simple, the writing is excellent, and there is zero description of women's clothing, women's bodies, and female degeneration. The protagonist travels across the Teyvat continent to play Katisya, a parallel time and space entity, and becomes the God of Truth. She laughs to death. The combat power of "Singing Tide" is directly surpassed by the author in "Original God". The heroine has experienced the confusion of identity, the fusion of souls, becoming a god, making up for regrets, resolving various crises in the Teyvat continent, and being weak. After the divinity was silenced, Katisia's personality reappeared. Therefore, it is recommended to start reading directly from the urban chapter in Volume 8. Only in this way can the heroine be a living heroine, not a superior god. The writing is really good, the battle scenes are full of descriptions, the profile descriptions are full, and the scenery descriptions are full. The characterization is a bit lacking, and the appearance of the characters is rarely described. This is the only shortcoming. Others are much better than other transformation novels on similar themes. Those who give low scores really have no conscience! Support the author! ! Come on!

Personally, I think it's pretty good, and it's very delicately written. The author may have been influenced by the comments and sped up the pace leading to some confusion. In the early stage, the protagonist obviously met Ying twice and had not chatted much. When Ying and Paimon were treating the protagonist, they actually knew the protagonist's name, and even felt like they had been living together for a while. Later, the two of them took care of and cared for the protagonist more than ordinary friends. The overall evaluation is very good. You are in line with my taste. It would be better if the slow-paced system is not as life-threatening, and the protagonist can slowly adapt to the resistance of the protagonist in more detail. It would be more perfect if some daily life is added.

It is best to revise the first volume. The most important thing about whether a novel can retain readers is the feeling brought to them by the first few chapters. More concise depictions and descriptions may be better than complicated and cumbersome ones that highlight psychological conflicts.

The author has a suggestion for you. This book is really large and full. If you don't want to read Akaishi, you can skip the first seven volumes and go directly to the eighth volume. If there are reviews, try to give 4 or more stars. Don't give one or two stars.

The writing is too detailed and a bit boring, but the plot is very novel and I am also a veteran player of the Ming Dynasty server, and I also played Katisiya. Overall, it is okay.

Author, can you please make one or two pages full of star symbols? Oops, after I was done with Mingchao, I read my novel and saw a character playing Kati. Another one came and I clicked on it out of curiosity. It was about erasing the soul and merging Kati's memory with the erasure of the system and the confrontation with Lin Feng's soul, although the system was gone. But the first few chapters are okay, but by the next few chapters there are just a bunch of star symbols.

My personal evaluation of this book is that it's about being curious but managing enough. If you are a reader with poor receptive ability, I still recommend you not to read it. If you want to read a time-traveling system article about being curious yet controlling, this book is more recommended.

The beginning of the chapter progressed too quickly, and many details were not stated, such as the protagonist's acquaintance with Ying and Paimon, but it was very good.

The author wrote 1.8 Million words in one month? 666

Clear logic, a collection of contradictions.

In fact, the author can write slower. Did the author fail to outline? You can use fewer modifying words, as too many modifying words will make you uncomfortable.

I really like Lin Feng's role as a low-level fusion material. The cunning male protagonist finally died [making faces] (I don't understand, he must be a man)

Well, how should I put it, it feels a bit contradictory, but it's okay.

The writing is very detailed, but it is too detailed, and it feels like I am taking a postgraduate entrance examination.

It's very good, that's all I can say. If you're not a good reader, you can read it.

Isn't the author going to write about Ming Chao World? You only have as many words as you can write.

Giving it 4 points, I can only say that this book is pretty good. But it is not complete enough. Performance is an external performance, not an internal force. Distorted interference.

Personally, I prefer to watch this type of

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The writing method is novel and may be a little difficult to understand.

It's very interesting. I suggest you read it quickly. It's really good that the author has written so much in less than a year (I want others to read it after I read it) [laughing]