American Comics******************

Well written so far

Very well written, keep it up

It's okay. I read another comment and it makes sense. If you make it bigger at the beginning, it will only become more difficult to write later.

The only shortcoming is that the number of words is too small. Many protagonists in Marvel novels have the strength but dare not make trouble. This protagonist can, just make trouble, and it is cool.

It's really good

I am very satisfied with this book

Invincible is still very invincible, but it doesn't feel that great.