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The low rating must be because few people read it. It's not the kind of straight-forward diary-style fanfic. Oh my God, the author is really thoughtful in writing and plotting. The characters' speeches are also very interesting. So far, every character stands up. It's so exciting. I'm looking forward to Bella! Come on, author👏 You write so well! Thank you for your hard work, author teacher~

I finally saw the fan fiction I wanted. It doesn't have that crazy plot and is very consistent with the original work. I'm really looking forward to the story of Bella and her transformation! ! ! The problem is that it looks so good. After reading it in one go, I realized that it is actually a serialized novel. Waiting for fattening and another stud [Adoration] [Adoration]

I can't help it... It's such a delicate writing style🥹🥹🥹The teacher writes really well. Whether it's Liz, Liz's own family, friendship and love lines, or the original characters, the characters are all very well and vividly created, and they all have their own unique charm. The storyline is also very delicate, and the emotional line is also very good and very natural. Liz gradually accepted the world and was accepted by the world. This transformation is also particularly touching. The first time Liz showed her ability to frighten other vampires also made me taste it several times. Liz has really grown up a lot compared to the beginning of the article, which is so gratifying🥹And no matter which character the image is created in the whole article, it is basically connected with small events, and each character is carefully crafted and displayed. What is created is a completely three-dimensional image. The Twilight fandom ate this for the first time, and I enjoyed it too. I can no longer resist the urge to write a review for my teacher... I can't imagine my life without reading a novel that is so delicate and vivid in terms of character creation and storyline... I will seriously appreciate this novel again and again!

OMG! ! ! It's really super, super pretty! ! ! It's simply a miracle. The beginning of the story is finally not the kind of plot where I know all the truth but I just want me to run away and you chase me and I can't fly! ! ! The writing is really good! ! ! ! This is the best Caius fanfic I have read in recent years! ! ! ! Be sure to keep updating! ! ! I will always follow you! ! !

It was so good that I read it in one go. It is the least OOC and most natural Twilight fanfic. It is written like a Fox native. The heroine has a common sense and independent mind. The ambiguous period afterward is even more great and sweet. I look forward to the follow-up! I saved up for a few days to see the latest one. To be honest, I don't understand why I have to put myself in the game. Is it just to catch her? What if she is not a fool and knows that Liz kept Edward away on purpose?

This is the Twilight fanfic that I have seen that is closest to the spirit of the original work [Like] [Like] The author has a profound background, and he vividly portrays the behavior of the old nobles in medieval Europe and the smoke and rain in the small town of Forks [Like] After reading the original book and the movie, I felt that I was actually there for the first time. Feelings [Like] The portrayal of European and American society is very authentic. The author must have studied abroad. Otherwise, how could he grasp European and American classical literature so accurately? It seems to be written by locals. I hope to maintain this level. I have a hunch that this book will be published as a physical book in the future [Like]

This is my first time writing a book review on Tomato, and I have been thinking about it for a long time. My true feelings after simply reading more than twenty chapters. Overall, the writing style of this book is vivid and delicate, the narrative quality is very good, and the characterization is also very eye-catching. Whether it is the heroine Liz, the hero, or the characters of the Cullen family, the characters are distinct and have their own characteristics. I also like the story topic. It is very attractive and shows the author's solid writing skills. However, there is a contradiction between the heroine's character and behavioral logic, which was also the most confusing and tangled place for me during the reading process. Liz has traveled to this world for more than ten years. In the middle chapters, she has experienced life and death, and has been recalling her adoptive mother. She also truly loves her current life and the friends around her, but she has never been able to truly integrate into the world she lives in. Her thinking is always bound by the plot of the original movie. Every time she enters a new scene, the plot begins to enter. She constantly compares the plot of the movie with real life. She takes the perspective of a bystander throughout the whole process. She has a strong sense of alienation. It is difficult for people to sympathize with her situation and state of mind, which makes me feel disconnected. When you feel the scene from the perspective of the heroine, you will suddenly be pulled into the plot again and feel uncomfortable. It makes me unable to empathize and invest in this article. In addition, the heroine's behavior is also difficult to understand. She clearly understands that werewolves and vampires are incompatible and contradictory, but she still actively steps into the boundary, as if she acquiesces that she will not be implicated as a human or that she is not a threat to them. It seems that if she can figure them out, they will be kind. In fact, I think movies are movies, and reality is It's reality. When she is in reality, she shouldn't use movie scenes to think about what she thinks. If this is the case, then I think she is still an individual who has not integrated into different time and space. I will feel that the feelings of my friends are not worth it, because the heroine always represents the feeling of this is the plot of the movie. In addition, in the plot, she knew that the Cullen family silently protected her, and she would feel guilty for causing trouble to the other party, but she always went her own way and still acted arbitrarily according to her own ideas. She said she wanted to be herself, but didn't she know that when she was chosen, it would be impossible to be safe, especially after going through so much. Overall, the heroine's personality is not straightforward enough. Her daily speech in dealing with people is short and slightly distant, but her inner drama is particularly rich. Her overall behavior is more casual. The above is just a matter of my personal reading perception and preferences. It does not deny the quality of the book. The author's writing style and story framework are excellent. I will still continue to read the subsequent plot.

It's beautiful~ It doesn't look like someone thought of writing it, but it feels like they saw what happened in that world and then wrote it down. Come on, the author, it's great! ! !

Wow, it's so beautiful [Admiration], it's really a treasure of a book, and the author's writing style is also super good. It's such a good-looking book but there are so few reviews. The only flaw is that there are too few. It's not enough to read. I feel like I finished reading Chapter 49 in a short time. Needless to say the word "authority", please come on for more updates, I can't wait hehe [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

It's super good-looking. The author's descriptions are very detailed and the handling of emotions is very reasonable. Whether it's family, love, or friendship, it's super good-looking. Even if you haven't watched Twilight, it won't affect your reading. I seem to have only watched one part, and I've known the other parts, so it doesn't affect it at all. You can read it as an independent read.

This is really a good book. I rummaged through Tomato to find this Twilight fanfic that I can read (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*The emotions described are delicate and the key is to segment them.

Nice looking But haven't you been very busy recently? I haven't seen you update for a long time. This month has passed. I miss the author✍️. Don't forget us. Remember to come back when you are not busy [I'm about to cry] I will always wait for you.

Unexpectedly beautiful! The characters are very vivid, especially the characters in the original work, which are very consistent. The pictures are full of charm. All I can think of are those tragically beautiful faces [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Teacher, you must keep writing! It's really, really good!

Super nice and engaging which is to say, well done to everyone! The pull between the young lovers is incredible, and Liz and Karen's family are also very loving and warm. I look forward to the next story ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧

It seems to be the least occ so far, the character descriptions are really good, and the plot is very smooth! ! ! ! Super looking forward to future developments! At last! Grab the wife and give her a shake (the remaining food falls off) [full]

Eternal life is a long desolation, and you are the only spark in the twilight. It describes the loneliness and affection of a vampire, the collision between human fireworks and eternal life, restrained heartbeat, secret preference, and inseparable bonds. There is a gentle and broken atmosphere between the lines. After reading, I fell into the gentle dream of twilight and could not get out for a long time. It's super, super good-looking. I hope the author won't stop updating [Admiration] [Please update more] @

Liz is really smart. The psychological games in the article and the scenes of using abilities are very well written (the author is really diligent in updating! 2-3 Chapters a day, so awesome ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧)

It's very well written and has a British and American narrative feel to it! ! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]

This is the first Twilight fanfic I read on Tomato. It opened up a new world for me. Oh my god. How could it be so beautiful? I thought Rowling was here to write it... It completely matched my imagination of another perspective. Really, I thought it was the continuation of Part 5 [laughs] I was particularly lucky when I fished that afternoon. I clicked on this novel, but accidentally couldn't hold back and read it all. Now I'm waiting for the update every day [I'm full] Can't Teacher Bao Bao suddenly update 10 chapters and 8 chapters in one day? It's not enough. It's really not enough🥺🥺🥺

I tied it in one breath in one day... Oh, why did I discover this book when it only had more than 50 chapters~ How can I put it, the first few chapters were very dull, but as the story unfolded, it got better and better. Each character has their own characteristics, and the protagonist's feelings are also accumulated little by little without being abrupt. It has a drizzle and silent feeling. It is a good read and recommended!

Super super super beautiful! ! ! ! ! Even if you haven't read The Twilight Zone, it won't prevent you from reading this book. Moreover, the author updates the book very quickly. I hope the update speed will always be like this! I really recommend this book, it's so good! ^O^

Really good-looking! ! ! ! ! Such delicate emotions. As a bookworm for more than ten years and not interested in romantic literature, my aunt laughed so hard in the middle of the night! What I like most is that both the male and female protagonists have long mouths, can express their thoughts and love, fall in love with and choose each other firmly, and tolerate everything about the other person.

The delicate brushwork and beautiful writing took me back to the time when I read the original novel as a child. I especially like her portrayal of family and friendship, and I hope there will be a warm ending in love. The most important thing is that our protagonist is very smart, powerful, and has the power to protect himself in a special world. I hope it can be completed! This is my favorite Twilight fic in recent times! Come on [blow a kiss][blow a kiss]

It looks good. Caius has no way to deal with Liz. His emotions are affected, but he is soothed by Liz and completely controlled by Liz. Moreover, both of them have long mouths and their words are straight forward. They are very sweet and make you feel refreshed physically and mentally! Caius is not a grumpy vampire setting, I like it very much.

The first time I read a Twilight fanfic, I was attracted by the cover photo of the book. Zundu is beautiful, the author's writing is very good, and the plot is not too slow. The logic is very strong, and the emotions and psychology of the characters described are very rich. I would like to call it a fairy tale! Love watching! More updates! More updates from Teacher Qiuqiu

The super restored Twilight Saga Caius fan, I once again found the chaff.

Update soon! ! ! ! ! Please give me 10 chapters and 8 chapters at a time! ! ! ! ! ! No! Just give me all the updates! ! ! ! ! ! Write a long story! ! ! ! ! ! ! I saw that Paper 1 has been marked for three years and has only been completed for one year. I am so looking forward to it! It's been a long time since I've read a Twilight fanfic. There's really no one writing about it. Quick update! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Chasing Better Pain I'm afraid I'll forget about this book as long as I keep it, update soon

At first, I felt that the relationship between the male and female protagonists was a bit fast, but the singer's setting may be the pull of fate. Neither of them is a very public type, but the subtle ambiguity is really good.

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Oh my god, author, you must finish it, otherwise I will be in a hurry with you. This is my first time reading a Twilight fanfic. It's so delicious, so delicious, so delicious [Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]