At the Beginning of the Game, the Girl Who Was Destined to Seize the Body and the Son of Luck Walked Around Me.

The rating encourages the author. To be honest, there are many poisonous points. As a modern person who travels through time, most of the character descriptions are "arrogant and arrogant"... It's hard to describe in one sentence. In addition, some aspects such as logic, detailed dialogue, daily practice, map scene expansion, etc. Also need to be polished. Finally, it is recommended to learn from similar works, first accumulate writing skills and then create unique works to attract fans more easily [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]

Okay, I like this subject very much. , Also the kind of green tea. , Which is the title of the later one with the surname Lu. The protagonist is a bit difficult to understand. ,, When else can we see Lin Chen meet the heroine? That must be pretty hot.

Overall review: There is only a little bit of green tea in this book. (My personal feeling) I feel that the protagonist is lively, cheerful and interesting. There are worrying episodes in the middle, including some who escape from death and some with black dragons. Among them, the protagonist has the ability to change his body. There is a heroine at the beginning, and a body (white fox) generated by a drop of blood from the succubus body and Bai Ling (a little fox) later (it should be regarded as a generated body😗). Anyway, I have watched it for so long and there is almost no poisonous point. Except for the protagonist who worries about the protagonist when he escapes from death, there is nothing else. It is worth recommending to watch. 👍

It must be supported. It's so beautiful. The main reason is that the update speed is too slow.

Actually this is the first book I read on Tomato...

The story is quite interesting, not bad.

Abba Abba, Abba Abba

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Very well written. Come on, author, and stay up less late.

You can create two time-travel characters

Click to see how many hours have passed [Thinking][Thinking]

It is also a wonder that there are so many children of luck

It's very good-looking. It would be better if the main character is stronger. I hope the main character doesn't have a male body.

Great work. Although I can see that the writing style is a little green, there are very few articles about this kind of subject. The emotions are quite delicate. The author is happy every day. Let me remind everyone that the author of this book will probably not be updated due to some reasons. It can be regarded as giving her a rest time [blowing kiss]

From then on, Yiming looked at each other in the blue clouds.

This book has profound connotation and unique charm, which makes people feel relaxed and happy after reading it.

The writing is smooth and the story is so interesting.

The author is really crazy! The plot twists and turns again and again, and you can't guess the next step at all!

Very good. This theme happens to be my favorite type, so I must support it!

The quality of this book is amazing, its structure is reasonable, its language is concise, and it is worthy of every reader's collection.

The content is rich and the language is concise, making people feel the power and charm of knowledge.

The writing is concise but powerful, without unnecessary embellishments, but it can touch the softest part of the reader's heart with the simplest words.

The plot twists and turns again and again, and you can't guess the next step at all! I stayed up late to tie it, but it wasn't enough to watch!

The writing is good and the plot is exciting.

Whether it is plot design, characterization or depth of thought, this book is a masterpiece of the year and is highly recommended to all book lovers!

It's rare to read such a smooth story. The plot is clear, the overall picture is complete, and the content is substantial. Recommended

The story has ups and downs, and the twists and turns are dizzying. After reading it, I still feel that the aftertaste is long. It is a masterpiece worth reading again and again.

The narrative of the full text is concentrated, without branches or branches, the language is simple and smooth, and the emotions are sincere and touching. [Praise]

The plot is compact and fascinating, worth reading!

The plot is really full of ups and downs and full of surprises.

This fantasy novel is so beautiful, and the characters are so vivid and vivid! Liked