Hogwarts: Weasley's Ravenclaw

This book is really beautiful. As long as the author doesn't write too much, it will be an absolute masterpiece. I finally got rid of the big trap of Hermione as the heroine. Nine out of ten Harry Potter fan fiction books have Hermione as the heroine. This is not to say that Hermione is not good, but I have read too many books and it is not interesting anymore. Nowadays, most of the best works in Harry Potter fan fiction are separated from the Three Little Ones and are not used as babysitters. Because there is nothing new to write about the three little ones. The change of the protagonist in this book is very good and very reasonable. Ravenclaw is more suitable for Percy. The wand is finally no longer made of lightning wood or something with oriental elements. Thank God ~ Never be the heroine Hermione, and don't write about the protagonist taking the initiative to help her. There are so many things written like this. Author, please write well and don't get too excited. It's not easy to have a good book.

It's a very, very good book. The character of the protagonist is a genius, rational and cautious man who is very consistent with the control of a sapiosexual protagonist. His past life experience also makes the character better rationalized, from being simple and cautious to the rigor of a scholar. But the character of the protagonist is not a thin and indifferent character. He will care about his family and study harder for them. Therefore, there is no need to set up a female protagonist, which would be redundant. As a natural legilimen, coupled with his past life experiences, the protagonist is destined to be a precocious person, so it is destined to be impossible for him to develop any love with his peers. Another very important point is that the reason why we need to set up a female protagonist is probably because we are afraid that the protagonist will be lonely, but first of all, the protagonist's character is destined to go to the dark side in the study of magic and the pursuit of knowledge, so he should enjoy this kind of loneliness, which will allow him to learn more immersed, and this kind of loneliness will only make him more focused. So as long as he has family (or a few like-minded friends), the love he gets will be enough. The plot setting is also very good. The daily-oriented research route fits the character of the protagonist very well, and the characters of the supporting characters also completely fit the original work. The language style of the entire article is also relatively close to the original work, with a touch of humor from the magical world and a sense of fantasy common in Western fantasy novels. Come on, author, this book is really excellent and the update speed is very good. I hope you can stick to it ^_^

So far, the plot is pretty good, and the character of the male protagonist is OK, but I would like to make a small comment. The author's descriptions in some places are a bit too gorgeous. For example, the place where I bought the wand could be a little simpler. It feels too gorgeous and looks a bit complicated (I don't mean to say anything bad, it's just a small opinion. This book is still very good.) [Like] [Like]

I have read Chapter 31 so far. I agree with what the long review said. This book is very suitable for fans of Sri Lankan religion. It is not a whitewash. I can only say that it is friendly to Sri Lankan religion and has a certain degree of admiration for it. It has the flavor of a male video. When the protagonist pretends to be a compliment (complimentary), this can be clearly seen in the behavior of the people next to him; I feel like some of the sentences are a bit... Strange? The wording is sometimes repetitive, and the description is a bit confusing (for example, the part about mental barriers and Occlumency), but it's okay, and you can see it if you just glance over. In short, it is a good book to pass the time. The author is also quite active in the paragraph comments, explaining to readers, correcting typos, etc. I will keep reading, come on, author! Um... I changed the rating a bit. Sirius is like a superhero. Colonel Deng is too tough and OOC. He puts some things that should be said in private into the open. I feel like he is not very smart.

No heroine! The author has made it clear in the introduction! The protagonist is very talented and hard-working! The biggest feature of this book is that the content is really novel! This is the most innovative and unique article about the growth of the protagonist among all the HP fanfics I have read. I enjoyed it very much! Then, all the characters in the original work have rich personalities! I particularly enjoyed the interactions between the protagonist and Snape and other professors! Secondly, the writing is solid and concise, easy to read, and definitely not brainless. The protagonist is super hard-working and diligent. I really like the character of the protagonist. He is rational and calm. He is not great at the beginning, but is slowly working hard. I have been attracted by this book and plan to keep reading it! Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you [Sending my heart]

The writing is delicate, recreating the somewhat rigid and somewhat arrogant and selfish character of the original Percy, and portraying a calm and rational protagonist who pursues knowledge and abilities while protecting his family and dreams. The plot is given a reasonable timeline, with some straightforward narratives and some refreshing moments. At present, it seems to be a rare masterpiece in fan fiction. Everyone must watch it!

The writing is great, a rare masterpiece on Tomato. The plot and writing style are very rigorous and smooth. It is not a cookie-cutter kind of story. The author wrote the story in his heart, which makes people feel comfortable to read [Like]

Not going to lie, this is my favorite HP novel I have ever read. Although it has been marked as no cp, I still want to tell the author not to write cp! Not only do I not want to see the protagonist having cp, but I also can't imagine that Percy would fall in love with someone else. There are no male CPs or female CPs! There must be no cp from beginning to end! I will always follow you author!

It's nice, but too little. The new HP Shuang Wen Liang Cao, I love the genius flow! The characterization is also very vivid, and my understanding of the characters is similar to what I feel in my heart. I probably have the same three views. And I found that hp male videos rarely describe the beauty of women, so even if you are not a fan of Harry's books, you still like to watch this kind of videos, instead of the ones where Gao Wu always shows beautiful school beauties, even if you don't have CP, you still have to do this.

Good. But starting in second grade. The author started a large number of private settings. For an old stubborn like me. People who prefer the original work in terms of setting. It's a little hard to accept. If you haven't read the original work or can ignore the original work. Or not to think about it. Still very nice. The author's writing is very good. Many of the descriptive aspects are very good. Especially the part where Blake comes forward for the protagonist. The kind of madness that only belongs to Sirius. It was really fun to write. Old Bee Deng also had a rare moment of toughness. First grade is really, really nice to watch. The score is a bit low now, maybe because many people can't accept the large number of private settings starting in the second grade. But as a novel. The author's level and writing style are quite excellent.

I feel that this book has many unexpected yet reasonable settings or assumptions, such as the relationship between the Black family and the Rozier family, and some curse prophecies about the Philosopher's Stone. The combat aspect is well written, and the plot is not sluggish. When I wrote the wizard competition, I thought I would write dozens of chapters like other novels, but the pace was very satisfying. It can be said that it has an expanded setting without deviating too much from the original work. In my personal opinion, this alone is enough to surpass most fan fiction. When I was reading the book, I thought about many words for evaluation, but when I came to this interface, there were only two words in my mind - good-looking

So far, there are no poisonous points. The author has stated that there is no heroine. Reason can be called the synonym of the protagonist. It is the best fanfic I have read so far. I will not lose money if I invest in it [Like][Like][Like]

Tomato is a very rare Harry Potter fan fiction book. The author has his own unique understanding of the characters in the original work. The protagonist's character is also very outstanding, and the author's writing style is also very good. Generally speaking, it is not a cookie-cutter formula novel. It's also the only novel I know of that features Percy Weasley as the main character and is so well written. The author publishes chapters very quickly, and there should be many manuscripts saved. I am looking forward to the plot behind it. Ten star recommendation!

Just a big suggestion for the author, that is, you can add a friend or opponent of equal strength to the protagonist, who is equally stunning and talented, so that the two people can improve each other. Now the protagonist feels a bit too lonely. After all, Dumbledore still has his Grindelwald.

The subject matter is novel, and the writing is beautiful. However, the protagonist's IQ may be too high for a fool like me to empathize with.

It's a very novel setting of mind-reading. At least it's my first time to come across this kind of setting where the main character is a master of Legilimency. The first part of the story actually seemed relatively bland, and I mainly watched it for this setting, but when it came to the part where the Harry trio reviewed the Quirrell incident, it suddenly felt like everything was worth it. These parts really made me happy [laughing] Hahaha, I am such a superficial person and I love to watch other characters bragging about how awesome the protagonist is [laughing and crying]

It's tied. It's very good. Although the author is writing a book for the first time, his writing style is really not bad, and the update speed is also good. It's a book with a very novel plot. I enjoyed reading it [blowing kiss]. The protagonist also works very hard. It can be said that he is a combination of talent and hard work!

There are no flaws, nothing too OOC, and it gives the original Percy a C-level aura, which I think is pretty good. In the original book, Percy is like a typical acquired personality, which means that because his family is too poor and unable to get effective changes quickly, he forces Percy to become a different Gryffindor. Some people may hate Percy, even in In Harry and the Goblet of Fire, he persuaded his little brother Ron to stay away from Harry, but in reality, he also cared about his family. Although Percy is a bit like Slytherin in Gryffindor in the original work, his serious and efficient work rate is very efficient. If everyone in the Ministry of Magic can be as serious as Percy, then what will happen to Voldemort?

The writing is very good, and the wording is gorgeous, but not bloated. The characters are basically the same as those in the original book, and are more three-dimensional [Blow a kiss] and I asked the author to update 50 chapters a day [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The writing is very good, the characters are outstanding, and the writing skills are excellent. The plot is slightly deliberate, but it does not affect the reading and the advancement of the plot. Percy's character is too cold, and he needs more characters to add warmth to him. Friends, girls, and quiet companionship may be a good choice.

Cool. . . [Lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] Women are average, men are average. Only 9.56 Yuan, her skin is fair and flawless. Her contour lines are not deep and can give people a sharp and glamorous visual effect, but are gentle and soft. 9.56 Does not smile most of the time. Reflecting her own cold temperament, it is easy to give people a sense of distance. 9.56 Smiled, the smile was not in his eyes, his demeanor was elegant but with a sense of alienation. The voice was very clear, like the melted snow water on the top of the snow-capped mountains in Tibet, with a hint of coldness despite being pure. 9.56 Has a gentle expression and is silent. His eyes are as clear as water, his red lips are slightly pursed, and his snowy skin seems to be stained with a thin layer of frost in the sunlight. [Lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

So far, in my eyes, this is one of the top three Hogwarts spin-offs I've read. The rhythm is not draggy, but has twists and turns. The story is innovative without sticking to the original. The author also responds very well to reader comments. Like one.

There is no heroine, the subject matter is novel, the first part is a bit dull and daily life, but not much later the more you read, the more interesting it becomes! Ah! I'm going to fall in love with this book! ! ! ! ! The author will update soon! ! ! ! @ Is not enough! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

The aroma of coffee on the Ravenclaw table and the sound of turning pages reflect the author's different positioning of each house. And it's easy to distinguish. The writing style is sophisticated. He must be an experienced author. The recommendation index is four and a half stars.

It can be seen that the author has put great care into shaping this book. There are many characters but not clutter. Each character's personality is quite three-dimensional. A round figure. Rather than a simple flat shape. Appropriate use of vocabulary greatly improves the quality of the text without affecting the reader's reading experience. It has a certain popularity. The story line is clearly explained, and time and space are well controlled. It can also be seen from this that the author's writing power is profound. It makes people want to read on. In addition, I feel that the characters that appear in the original novel by the author are very consistent with the personality. There was no very uncharacteristic situation.

It's really good-looking. It's the highest-quality HP article I've read in the past two years. Although some of the rhetoric may be a bit exaggerated, the writing is very good. It expresses the HP in my heart. The characters are also well described. The plot is not procrastinating and will not make people irritated. According to the author, the plot is not limited to being a strong student and being an honest student. This is more in line with my appetite. It is not a nanny article, but pays more attention to oneself and family. Anyway, it is a very good article. And it's not just mindless fun. There are the right setbacks at the right time. The protagonist's setbacks and growth are what keep me reading. I think Snape is well described in it. He writes out the Snape in my heart. It's really a high-quality article.

Among all the Weasley books I have read, it is the best one. It is very interesting, but a little shortcoming is that it is not finished. It is not clear whether it will be unfinished or broken in the future, so be cautious when reading it. But the author publishes chapters very quickly

It's beautiful, it's beautiful [admiration], it's so rare to see someone dressed as Percy in a book, I hope it doesn't [give my heart] to an eunuch Who is the CP of this book? Somewhat curious

The author's writing is very good! It's one of the best fanfics I've read recently, and the male protagonist is also very well portrayed! Looking forward to further development!

Amazing! The author seems to have made a very detailed expansion of the book "Harry Potter" as its title. Constantly fill it with flesh and blood and lay a solid foundation. The whole article is well-founded and has no logical loopholes. It makes people feel refreshed and relaxed. Simply awesome! Damn, we all see your hard work and thinking [like][like][like][love]