My Little Pony: Determined to Write a Miracle

Wonderful! How good! I was really greedy. I originally planned to keep it in the pond until it became a big fish and then taste it carefully, but I couldn't help it. Reading this article seems to recall the time when I watched the Pony TV series. Although the characters and plot are based on the original work, they are also clever. The author said that he first wrote it. From my perspective, the writing style is elegant and childish, and it is serious and won my heart. However, there are three shortcomings. The first shortcoming is that the volume is too small and it is not enjoyable to read; the second shortcoming is that it is too early to read and it makes me feel itchy after reading the current chapter; the third shortcoming is that the author is a human being rather than a thing and cannot be updated every day.

This novel is really good to read. I don't understand why the score is so low. When I read it, it felt like I was reading a novel by Kangao Detective. The logic is smooth and the characters are not OOC. It is an excellent book. I hope the author can continue to write more. After all, there are not many books that are fast and have high quality.

The writing is exquisite and the story is wonderful. Every chapter is polished with care. I really like it and will keep following it! There is no substitute for good and powerful writing, please continue to update and support forever! 🍊[Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The characters of the original ponies such as M6 are very appropriate, the drama and daily life are written very delicately, and the protagonist's personality and other settings are also very lovable. However, the protagonist's character is too mature and has no shortcomings, and there is not much room for growth, so the main drama is reflected in other ponies.

It's quite good-looking, um, and one of the very few. I know the male protagonist's image of My Little Pony books. I stopped reading them after two or three years. Then it was 26 years before I started to read them again, and then I also started reading fan fiction, which can be regarded as a review, and it also satisfies my childhood desire to be friends with them. Ah, of course, what about the image of the male protagonist on the cover? Because I am too young, sometimes I It looked like his nose was that of a mare's nose. Ah, although there is an image in the original work that is obviously a male horse, but the nose is that of a mare, so I often imagined the scene when watching it, resulting in the male protagonist's nose always being a mare's nose.

Overall, it is quite comfortable. The language is not bad, but some paragraphs are not divided well, which slightly affects the perception. It is not bad emotionally, and there are no unacceptable settings. If you polish it well, I believe it will get better and better.

There is no big difference between Pony's character and the original work, and the emotional line is very delicate. The characters mentioned briefly in the original work have more detailed identities in this book, and the foreshadowing has been fulfilled so far. It can be said that the author of this book is very thoughtful, and the mood and reaction of the characters in danger are not abrupt. It can be said that it can be regarded as the best among the current Tomato Pony novels.

There are many female protagonists, but the emotional scenes are very good and sweet😋. I saw that the latest chapter has almost no poisonous points. Personally, I only think it was depressing when facing Discord for the first time. Anyway, it is still a 5-star review. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Love]

One of the best Xiao Ma novels. It has no sense of existence, is not procrastinating in daily life, is sweet but not greasy, and has no value for in-depth reflection.

There are multiple female protagonists, which ones are they?

Good-looking, original and interesting setting of Elements of Harmony

Another brand new Pony article, very interesting. Big support for the author! [Ask for updates][Send heartfelt messages][Top post]

The main character is the best among all the pony novels I have read so far, and the emotional lines with each pony are handled very comfortably. It is definitely considered a top quality among the pony novels.

It's a very good book. It looks very comfortable overall and has no bad points. If you look at the emotional line at the end, each one is relatively good. However, it is a bit too much and each one has to be written well, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. My suggestion is to write more about what readers like to read and less about what they don't like. Each chapter is relatively large, and it can be regarded as more than 300 chapters.

From the beginning, I knew that the author has a good control. The protagonist has a very good character. It is a masterpiece. It does not ignore feelings too much. Basically, every line has a corresponding plot. A few can write about marriage. Although it is fake now, the writing is quite good. Come on [please update]

Looks good, cheers for the author [top post]

Good luck! Definitely recommended

It feels a little bad to be able to be human again.

Hao Chi, this is a rare masterpiece. That's why there are so few people [Thinking]

There's not much to say, it's still a relatively good piece of writing by Xiao Ma.

It's been a long time since I've seen such an excellent pony fan [blowing kiss]

The writing is very good [flying kiss] [flying kiss], the plot is attractive, I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Wisdom Teeth, author of Xiaomawen

Come on, come on, come on, come on [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Beautiful, no need to say more

Add sugar until it explodes

The author remembers to update.

Very beautiful, I don't want to say anything

Who are the heroines of the author?

Excellently written piece of writing