Online Games+Daily+Multiple Heroines+Slow Tempo+Knife in Sugar
A fantasy-loving nun sister, a sexually repressed princess, a yandere childhood sweetheart, an arrogant young lady, a foul-mouthed brat... This game world is full of disasters. As a time traveler, Chaos originally just wanted to protect himself wisely, but with more and more companions around him, he could not stay alone and could only lead his companions to face natural disasters.
"I, Kaios, the top sleight-of-hand guy."
"Planner, if you have the skills, just wait for me to come back from time travel and see if I can blow your head off and that's it!"
Reader comments
Good looking.
However, I do recommend that you pay attention to the roles of the protagonists. If there are too many supporting roles, if it is a physical published book or subsequent readers read it in one go, they will not feel much. However, this is a serialized online novel after all. Although I don't mind it myself, for readers who are following up, it is indeed easier to dislike the more watery plots that are not the core of the main story. My suggestion is to write It is better to have a smaller word count when writing branch plots of supporting characters or relatively unimportant plots. If you think that too few words in a branch plot will destroy the coherence or interpretation of the plot and contain important plot clues, then you can only solve the problem by increasing the number of words in relevant chapters or writing a few more chapters to complete the transitional chapters as quickly as possible. This can make the data better.
Of course, if you don't particularly care about data and write novels more for love, I can tell you that I don't mind a slower pace, and I don't mind the author spending some space on supporting characters to make the novel more group portrait. I like this kind of story very much, and I hope the author can stick to it! (However, it is not good to go too far. If the length of the branch plot is about to catch up with the length of the main plot, it will be a waste of time, unless it is a two-line narrative)
Come on!
Very pretty.
Is it that Yuris who has so many dual protagonists? [Smile]
Basically, after Uris came out, the second half of the picture was all about Reese. When he disappears, I will change it back to five stars. [Rolls eyes]
It looks good, but there is too little. I wish there were more. ٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶
Overall, it's pretty good, but you still have to pay attention to Chaos' role. After all, this book has only one protagonist, right?
Abnormal but beautiful
The sexually repressed princess is outrageous, but this book is pretty good
Uris, I feel very good. Although he is not the protagonist, he does not have his own self-esteem like the brainless nobles in other novels. Come on, author, please write more plots about him.
A friend's book, a wave of support
There are too many time-travelers, and it would be better for both the readers and the author to write down the heroine's situation more clearly [punch]
It feels like watching an epic Western fantasy adventure.
Not bad, better than others
He's not a stallion, which is good. Not every girl he meets will fall in love with him. Many characters have their own, and their own paths have their own partners.
Good looking. However, I do recommend that you pay attention to the roles of the protagonists. If there are too many supporting roles, if it is a physical published book or subsequent readers read it in one go, they will not feel much. However, this is a serialized online novel after all. Although I don't mind it myself, for readers who are following up, it is indeed easier to dislike the more watery plots that are not the core of the main story. My suggestion is to write It is better to have a smaller word count when writing branch plots of supporting characters or relatively unimportant plots. If you think that too few words in a branch plot will destroy the coherence or interpretation of the plot and contain important plot clues, then you can only solve the problem by increasing the number of words in relevant chapters or writing a few more chapters to complete the transitional chapters as quickly as possible. This can make the data better. Of course, if you don't particularly care about data and write novels more for love, I can tell you that I don't mind a slower pace, and I don't mind the author spending some space on supporting characters to make the novel more group portrait. I like this kind of story very much, and I hope the author can stick to it! (However, it is not good to go too far. If the length of the branch plot is about to catch up with the length of the main plot, it will be a waste of time, unless it is a two-line narrative) Come on!
Very pretty. Is it that Yuris who has so many dual protagonists? [Smile] Basically, after Uris came out, the second half of the picture was all about Reese. When he disappears, I will change it back to five stars. [Rolls eyes]
It looks good, but there is too little. I wish there were more. ٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶
Overall, it's pretty good, but you still have to pay attention to Chaos' role. After all, this book has only one protagonist, right?
Abnormal but beautiful The sexually repressed princess is outrageous, but this book is pretty good
Uris, I feel very good. Although he is not the protagonist, he does not have his own self-esteem like the brainless nobles in other novels. Come on, author, please write more plots about him.
A friend's book, a wave of support
There are too many time-travelers, and it would be better for both the readers and the author to write down the heroine's situation more clearly [punch]
It feels like watching an epic Western fantasy adventure.
Not bad, better than others
He's not a stallion, which is good. Not every girl he meets will fall in love with him. Many characters have their own, and their own paths have their own partners.