Cleaning up Illegal Travelers in the HP World

A masterpiece! Simply a masterpiece! ! ! I have never read such a wonderful book since I was short of books! Some of the author's ideas and little ingenuity simply made me exclaim. Every time I watch it, I feel a comfortable feeling as my cerebral cortex is stretched out, and I think, "Can we still play like this?!" Moreover, the left side of Sifu is also super delicious. After seeing the two words [Master and Sufferer] in the introduction, I felt at ease. My mother no longer has to worry about me eating in the wrong position✌☺️. Super invincible cosmic explosion level of security, the whole tomato can only be given by the author😭, and the old Fu transforms into rabbit Fu, the picture of Maya is so beautiful, I can't imagine how cute it will be, a black dumpling kicks there, starting his little Dark Lord's potions class💊It's so cute

It's very beautiful. I like the interaction between the protagonist and Lao Fu. Lao Fu with the red eyes and black rabbit is so cute! Sijiao is so perceptive, I like it so much! The plot is currently reasonable, there are no common routines, and there are many surprises in classic plots. What I am most curious about now is the Horcrux in the flying lesson. Which Horcrux is it? I look forward to the follow-up plot.

Okay, I'm a nerd but I have to admit it's pretty cool. Who has watched HP and never thought about time travel? Maybe it's because of someone who died tragically (or maybe some people), or maybe he's simply attracted to the magical world. Oh my God, protect everyone like a savior, do whatever you want in the magical world, and pretend to be a big deal. Okay, okay, I'm used to seeing time travelers act recklessly, but I didn't expect a counter-routine, like a cat catching a mouse, right? Although the emotional line is not slim at all now, but my God, the description of Severus is simply amazing. The description is very, very realistic (personal feeling). How could a double agent be so simple? Ahem, when will the author release the 100th chapter?

I can only say that it is very good-looking. The protagonist has that kind of hidden madness and masters the whole situation, like a snake crawling in the dark. Every step of the plan is perfect and pressing step by step, giving people a very good feeling of a villain. The interaction with CP is currently relatively small, but I think there will be more in the future. After all, it has not been long, and although it is currently just a seemingly ordinary Hufflepuff, But this kind of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is not like other articles where you are obviously pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger and you are often targeted by others, making it more popular. It is really as plain as water, lurking very well, like a snake. This is the first time I have written such a long article. It is really beautiful. If you don't read it, you will definitely regret it.

A clever worldly tug of war, a large-scale werewolf killing, the protagonists are both strong, and the supporting characters are also very powerful. Each has its own characteristics and is not very simple. Jiang Li really has a sense of darkness that is wandering in the dark and controlling the overall situation. Moreover, I also play Genshin Impact Bengtie and like HP. The author's writing style is super good and very delicate, and the updates are on time. I am blessed [Blow kiss]

The confrontation is well written, with good diction and expression. The author is very suitable for writing small climaxes and fighting scenes. There are many small ideas, and he has carefully considered the original work and polished the scenes. The characters are very distinct. Personally, the problem is that the rhythm and drums are too dense, and the plot is too tightly connected. It is not like a tide, but always at the peak, lacking daily space for relaxation, making it very tiring to watch. You have to constantly digest the plot and rhythm, and there is no time to breathe. The overall plot points that can be remembered are very vague. But I can feel that the author is very careful and the characters he created are also very good. Recommended reading.

The writing is very beautiful. It's like a lot of time-travelers come together, each with their own little thoughts. You can't write too human-machine. After all, if you don't write well, the situation will be difficult to control and it will easily collapse. The protagonist and various characters are really well described. I like it very much. I hope I can write hundreds of pages. It's not enough! It feels so good to watch, why the rating is not high? I thought the author could write hundreds of chapters (*´I`*)

The writing and setting of the plot are very good, but I feel that the pace of the plot is a bit too slow. It only takes 160,000 words to write to Harry meeting the three-headed dog for the first time. It also feels that the identities of many time-travelers have been determined, but it feels a bit uncomfortable to always wait for a certain time to send them back. In the early stages, the protagonist and Snape didn't have many scenes together. I look forward to more interactive plots in the future.

What a great plot, I enjoyed watching it so much! The protagonist has a high IQ and a very thoughtful mind. He is like the kind of graceful chess player outside the chessboard. The kind that others think the protagonist is under his control is actually being led by the protagonist. I like this character design! Also, I would like to ask, who is on the left and right between the protagonist and Sif?

I really have never seen such a perfect article that stepped on my XP. Gao Zhi's slow-burning [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] is a masterpiece, and the plot is simply amazing. The characters of both the villain and the upright ones are all very well executed. There is no OOC at all. Oh my god, this is simply the love letter of my dreams. The protagonist's high IQ really impressed me. I am very glad to have discovered this book, but regret that I discovered it too early and read it all. Finish it quickly. If I have a chance after it's finished, I'd like to watch the extras from the movie studio. I want to see everyone's jaw drop and be stunned [shy][shy] Why is there no one reading such a beautiful book? [Cry][cry]

It's beautiful, it's really not bad, it's a hearty meeting with fellow villagers [laughing and crying]

It's very beautiful, Kako is really smart. I thought he would use too many Genshin Impact skills, but it's okay. Kako's brain is used more [Admiration] [Adoration] and Snape. I was indifferent to Snape when I read the original novel and other fans. When I read this book, I was fascinated by Snape. The author described him very sharply. He is worthy of being a double agent [Send Heart] [Send Heart] and Futu, I think the rabbit is quite cute [Love]

It's very interesting to read, and it's slow to warm up. I didn't see the CP in the early stage. I didn't read the introduction so I watched it without CP. Later on, I got a sense of CP. The plot written by the teacher is very compact. I like it. Sometimes it's a bit obscure and you can't understand the meaning until you read it (but I've read too many online articles for my brain). It's worth pursuing. It's a relatively novel setting and a hearty feeling.

It looks good, even though there are elements of Genshin Impact. In fact, it is easy to understand that the character skills of Genshin Impact are regarded as ancient magic. The IQs of all the members are online. The interactions between the protagonist and Voldemort in the early stage are very interesting (climbing the wall for a while). The game between the protagonist and the Sect later is very well written. There is a hint of sincerity in the pretense and calculation. It is so delicious🥰

It's good to watch, but not good enough. It writes the protagonist's sanity very well, and also shows the wisdom of Dumbledore and Snape. Not all the time-travelers are fools. Author, come on, support you.

There is no love line yet. The protagonist has the skills of the original god, but he is very cautious and rarely uses them. There are many time-travelers, and the protagonist's purpose is to eliminate the time-travelers. The subject matter is very novel, I have never seen HP fan fiction like this before. The protagonist of this book is very sober, and the various characters in the original work are not stereotyped, and they do not treat the original characters as fools. All the characters are very sober, and there is no aura of a big protagonist, which is very logical. I hope the author will be happy and prosperous.

It's good to watch, the protagonist is not a virgin, the purpose is bold and smart, the plot is very novel, I haven't watched it much, but it's still very good [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

The introduction seems to be about a relaxed romance with a little bit of battle planning, but in fact, fighting and planning are the main themes of this book! The details of the battle and the protagonist's plan are very interesting. If you just want to read mindless and cool articles, don't come here. You can't hold it [sad][sad]

Sapiosexual Beet, the relationship between the protagonist and Sri Lankan teacher is so touching. I haven't seen such a smart article in a long time. I am very moved. The shortcoming is that there are too few updates and it is not enough to read. The original characters are also very restored. In the case of a bunch of time travellers, the protagonist's appearance as a strategist as a chess player is simply sparkling and so attractive.

I finally dug up an article written by Sifu, and the writing is delicate and the characters are not OOC, and the characterization is very good. I am scared to death if the author dares to update Chapter 10 [laughing] Keep up the good work.

The topic is very novel, very relaxed and enjoyable. Especially the temptation between Voldemort and the protagonist is simply too exciting for me. I heard that the author is going to write a side story between Voldemort and the protagonist. I hope to see it as soon as possible [][][]

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, the character of the protagonist is particularly in line with my taste, he looks like a sweetheart but he can actually kill you (ಡωಡ)

It's rare to see an HP time travel story where all the members' IQs are online. It is an intellectual game between different camps. The protagonist is a hunter, but the other players are not white rabbits. It has an excellent viewing experience. I want to watch the movie, not only the original work, but also other time-travelers. Malfoy joining the Iron Triangle is also very interesting.

I really like to see Snape being so shocked by the protagonist's potion talent that he doubts his life. This kind of fatal attraction to smart people is ten thousand times more delicious than a straight confession! There are so few people reading such a beautiful book!

Immortal product! A super invincible and beautiful god-level treasure article! ! ! The protagonist is so charming and has an absolutely high IQ. It is simply a paradise for sapiosexuals! Watching him strategize and make clever plans, every logic crushing and game-breaking operation made me feel numb, so awesome! In this article, everyone is not a simple NPC. The author adds wisdom bugs to their characters. Whether they are original characters or original characters, good or evil, it is very logical and has a complete logical framework for the characters to think! Each character shines brightly. They have intelligence, strategy, courage, execution ability, and an elite aura. But! ! ! This is the beauty of this book! There are so many geniuses, but they finally become useful chess pieces in the protagonist's plan. The protagonist is already a chess player, and he has a panoramic view of the overall situation. He strategizes, moves step by step, and invisibly allows everyone to follow the designed chess game. And the Sijiao in this book really fully demonstrates his ability to walk between black and white, his true strength as a double agent, and his crushing charm as a top potions master. The confrontation and game between the two protagonists collided with a kind of soul resonance, carrying fatal tension. Every time, the protagonist's disguise is already in perfect condition, but Si Jiao is able to capture the protagonist's true identity through tiny attempts and plots. Si Jiao is the only one who has found out the identity of the protagonist. Oh my god ahhhhhhh! ! "Caspar Thorne", when Sijian said the protagonist's name with certainty, I was dumbfounded. It's really amazing! The author is so good at writing! Really huge and beautiful! ! ! Changed word: buff... How did it become a bug (face covering)

It's very interesting. This is a new way of thinking. I always thought that the most I could do was kill others. I never thought about sending them back. There seem to be quite few people who think this way. Most people I read seem to choose to die, um, or the articles I read are like this Why are so few people reading good books? (σ⸝ᵒ̴̶̷̥́꒳ ᵒ̴̶̷̣̥̀⸝)σ After searching for a long time, I couldn't find his shortcomings. This book is really a perfect book₍ᐢ⑅•ᴗ•⑅ᐢ₎♡ You can go and read the teacher's new book. The movie version of this book is particularly beautiful, and the teacher's movie version also followed very quickly. I was so excited (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ Boss, the eternal god, so beautiful, why are so few people watching ꉂꉂ(ᵔᗜᵔ*) Every plan is really interconnected, every foreshadowing is filled in, it's very beautiful ૮₍ ˊᗜˋ₎ა The boss's idea is really awesome੭ ᐕ)੭ But I still don't understand the main point, because it seems that the protagonist is very strong now, and he should be stronger later, and this is the first time I have seen the strong one at the bottom (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎) But it doesn't matter, it's not unacceptable for the Lord to accept it ε==(づ′▽`)づ But there is one point that I have been crying about, that is, actually, I really think that Xiaopa and Voldemort really have a lot to do with each other. Apologize Their relationship is a mysterious relationship in which two top predators use each other, test each other, and cooperate with each other. Really good Sometimes I really wonder if the teacher is lying to us. Voldemort and Xiaopa are the official couples, right?

，，，，，，， [][][]，， It's really beautiful. Highly recommended. You must read it. The protagonist's identity is a time-traveler, but his mission is to clean up foreign time-travelers. Here you can see the protagonist identify the time-travelers through various key event points and return them home. In fact, I feel that the protagonist is quite gentle and at the same time, he is also very sensible and seems a little cold.

Very well written, I really like it. The characterizations of the protagonist and Sijiao are very three-dimensional. I look forward to the next development.

So pretty! The plot is very novel. Everyone's character descriptions are very good. Due to external reasons, everyone originally had emotional reactions based on their original personalities. Harry was cautious and sober and changed to be reckless, and Draco told Professor Snape everything. Keep up the good work, teacher! ｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

It's a rare novel that I'm serializing and I'm equal to it! First of all, the subject matter is very novel, and secondly, the character of the protagonist I can only say is a paradise for sapiosexuals. The dialogue between Ka and SS, Ka and LV is full of Slytherin-style games. The author's description is also very accurate. It is not brain-burning but also very enjoyable to watch. There are also foreshadowings at the moment, and I hope they can be filled in well in the future. All in all, this is a very good HP fanfic! Worth a look! The current rating is really far below the level of reading of this book.