Reincarnated Vampire: Starting from Building a Fantasy City

First of all, I can say that this book is well written. Although there are some problems (① the combat power is not clear, ② there is no specific description of the world view, ③ the description of battle scenes is poor, ④ the description of specific economic aspects is very low), but it is a very good novel to read, relatively readable, and it is a novel that is more creative than written.

To be honest, when I saw the name, I thought it was one of those old clichés. I didn't expect it to be quite amazing. The protagonist no longer starts as a rookie but as the man behind the city. It's quite amazing. The characters are very vivid and have their own standpoints and IQs. The protagonist also uses a lot of modern knowledge to improve his strength and develop a strong sense of urban immersion. It can be said that it is the food that has come out recently. It's just that the fighting aspect needs to be improved a bit, it's not as exciting in this aspect.

I personally feel that the writing is quite good. The beginning and the abilities of the protagonist are quite attractive, but it feels a bit like a group-oriented novel. If the frequency of the protagonist's appearance is reduced for a long time, it will lack attraction and sense of substitution, and at the same time make people lose the main line. I don't have the desire to be read anymore. There don't seem to be many people reading this book at present, but the book itself is still good. It just lacks traffic. You can write 200,000 words first to attract a wave of traffic, or you can ask readers to promote it more in the author's comments. If you stick to it, it will get better [Like] [Like] [Like] I feel that the protagonist "dotes" on her sister a little too much. At present, I only see the protagonist's investment and care for her sister and her boyfriend. I don't see the description of the value and dedication of the role of sister to the protagonist. It feels to me that the role of sister is a bit like a burden to the protagonist.

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. The battle lasted hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, White Mask would have died after this wave of M4 six-fold fire. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang Tu said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Danking is proud, don't show off in front of the national football team." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks and his sympathy for Junior Wa. Fortunately, before his death, a helpless Q captured Junior Wa's mother to death. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on!

The protagonist has a relatively high level when he appears. There is no plot where the protagonist is busy running for promotion, allowing the novel to focus on the story itself. The characters in the book all have their own thoughts and beliefs. The most important thing is that they have normal IQs. The novel describes the bottom, middle and high levels very well. All in line with The basic characteristics of his class are also very logical. I've read sixty chapters, it's probably a group novel, and I haven't locked onto the protagonist for a long time. The perspective makes the story too monotonous, and the description of the supporting characters is also inadequate. Everyone is a human being of flesh and blood. Looking forward to the next story

Western fantasy, not an orthodox Western fantasy, but it's pretty good-looking. The writing is smooth and natural, and the narrative is gentle. The setting is not novel, but it's still pretty cool to watch. The story of the protagonist as a vampire develops his power to transform society. Since there are not enough words at present, it is basically not developed, but it is worth reading.

It's a good-looking, non-traditional vampire story. The protagonist will go his own way (different from other vampires) and has a strong background. The vampire family is not the strongest, but it is also top-notch [cool]. At the same time, the protagonist is not simply improving his strength, but wants to do a great cause. The protagonist also has to establish his own power [blowing kiss]

Rating: Three and a half stars Guide to entering the trap: It is considered a half-group portrait, behind-the-scenes flow, expect the protagonist to pretend to be big, and be cautious about entering the Magic Industrial Revolution. Personal perception: As a semi-group portrait novel, each character has its own characteristics, the descriptions are vivid and have memorable points, and the characters are all well grasped, with a score of 70 or above on Tomato (Because I was blown away by the ghost ship part, although the author has an explanation) I originally thought it was a suppression of combat power, but after reading the author's explanation More difficult to stretch without any foreshadowing Let the protagonist lose his strength for the recognition of "will" Without knowing the setting of "will" I have no idea why it is necessary to obtain the recognition of "will". It is very abrupt. As the protagonist of the chaotic good faction, he considers his subordinates and himself to be important. Why do we need to ensure the safety of the "experimental field"? Even though the protagonist was sleeping at the time and there were only a few bonds, why not change to another "experimental field"? I keep saying that I am not doing charity, but my behavior is to save everyone? In this plot, except for the Paladin and the union president who are working, what are they saving when all the high-level professionals run away? Just to highlight the nobility of the protagonist? Come out and save all the civilians? The protagonist's self-analysis and behavioral separation Although I am dissatisfied with this plot, I still agree with other aspects.

Yes, yes, basically the logic is self-consistent, holy but not mother There is a holy heart and holy power, but if you are not a saint, everything that is perfect is false, because only falsehood can make you perfect. As long as it is real, grounded, and existing in this world, there will be shortcomings. Use his strength to offset my shortcomings, and use my wisdom to support your strength. Cooperate with each other, unite as much as possible and move forward as much as possible. Not bad, not bad. The protagonist is well designed, and the world view is well designed. At least that sense of reality is really rare in novels.

This book is really good. The author carefully depicts a vivid world and presents his fantasy to everyone. At present, I think the 88 chapters are an excellent work according to my own level. I can read it in one go. There is no other system in this book that makes the protagonist fuss. It is just that the update is too slow. You can write it well first and wait for this book to accumulate experience and gain a reputation before it will be read by the audience. And I would also like to remind you that if you rely on novels to make a living, the author should give up and just treat it as a side job, because it is free in itself, and even if there are many readers, they will give it to others for free. You can watch it. Come on. Why isn't anyone watching? I feel like this book should get a score of 8!

Nice! The language is precise, the writing is capable, the key characters are accurately described, and the characters are perfectly created. It seems like someone is reincarnated from someone's family. I don't feel like a newbie. I'm sure I won't lose anything if I try it and put it in the library. Ps. It's not a Sichuan opera. I was deceived by the title of the book, but I can quietly and secretly kowtow to myself [shy][shy]

It is a very good book, with the blood behind the decisions of big characters, the struggles of small characters facing survival, wonderful contradictions and conflicts, and the sadness behind the entanglements of interests. Although the description of the characters is a bit stiff, I believe the author will get better and better as he writes. The author's layout of plot and plot makes people look natural and soft, the writing is humorous, the characters are vivid, and the rhythm is well controlled. It is a very creative novel, with a slow-burning edge.

Very good, very flavorful. Most of the books on the market focus on the identity of humans, undead, or monsters. The subject of vampires is relatively rare. For now, the pace is very stable and attractive. Anyway, I read it with gusto. The main line should be farming construction, so you should pay attention to the description of the various forces and whether the details need to be described in detail, and also pay attention to the rapid pace. So far, it's still pretty good-looking, and there's nothing bad about it. Come on!

The world view is my favorite type, and the author's writing is actually not bad. Maybe it's because he hesitated in the writing direction and the pace of progress was a bit confusing, which made it seem like there were pieces here and there. Or maybe he wanted to break up the feeling of copy after copy, so he spread out the clues flatly. Generally speaking, it is not unconscionable to give a 5-star encouragement.

Chapter 115 is quite interesting. Western Fantasy Farming starts from scratch but is not particularly downtrodden, and the male protagonist's combat power does not start from scratch. It is more comfortable, but the pace is a bit slow, but it is reasonable when combined with the male protagonist's identity and world view.

Some small ideas about Magic Industry 1.0, The author writes them so well that even an old bookworm like me, who has written books before, can't help but want to write something. The increase in productivity brought by traditional industries under the magic system is not enough for the society to form top-down industrialization, and bottom-up industrialization is almost impossible to achieve. However, there is an inevitable contradiction between traditional industries and the productivity progress required for social development. This contradiction is mainly embodied in the huge gap between the productivity efficiency between professionals in the magic system and ordinary people. Therefore, the industrialization of the magic system can only be done by analyzing the various technologies under the magic system and then gradually dismantling them to form modules that can be assembled, disassembled and replaced. The modules must be standardized and fool-proof. In order to enable mortals or low-level professionals to make slightly more advanced modules or parts of modules. Therefore, there are certain prerequisites for the initial formation of the magical system industrialized society, and the middle and lower classes of the original society (especially mortals) have higher productivity. The increase in productivity brings about the improvement of their original social value, and the higher improvement of social value will feed back to their basic rights. At this time, the increase in productivity of the overall society will also bring more population. Under the magical system, population is the most important factor in giving birth to strong people. In the world view of this book, the world's will and world strength will also jump significantly as a result.

It's good. The author will explain some poisonous points very clearly and make things right. Although I don't like this poisonous point, the author has a very good attitude and supports reading. Such an author will write better and better. See you later

It can be seen that this book is very new. [Seeing 170, trying hard to catch up with the big group] [On the contrast between the title and cover that I saw at the beginning and the retro feel of the cool articles in the past and what I read now ()] Except that the introduction didn't indicate at the beginning whether there was an emotional line or not. [Is it a decision to have no cp or what? (It's okay if you really buy a stock and you can write it down without talking about it, but you feel something is wrong, or you only talk about a reasonable one, but you only feel pity for other people "no limit♂♀")] It's a bit awkward, but there's no big problem. The writing is also good, which is rare, and it went smoothly. But from the beginning to what I saw now, there's a little too much plot in Aomou, to be honest. [Then some people keep saying that Sichuan Opera has been misled by me (actually, it is unlikely that we will actually talk about it)] There's nothing wrong with anything else, it's nice and smooth, and the world view is also very rare [I really like it very much♡] It can be seen that the teacher is not an expert in writing books

It's very good and has potential. First of all, I have to say that starting from the chapter where the protagonist is sleeping, although it feels a bit fragmented, some arrangements are a bit digging, but not much, and it is acceptable. But from the beginning of the duel field, I think it can be written as a side chapter if it is a small interlude and a paladin apprentice is used as a substitution point instead of the protagonist. In this case, readers can also accept it and try to intersperse it with as few connections as possible that affect the plot. However, some explanations about the world view and force values ​​can be inserted more correctly. This way, readers who want to understand the world view and plot can be reasonably allocated, and it can also give readers certain choices to skip parts appropriately. But this is just my little understanding of the plot, because the plot has been updated to more than 2,000 pages, and I have only read more than 700 pages. If you start changing from the node, it will definitely be too late. I just want to share a little bit of my opinion

I really like this kind of novel that focuses on business rather than personal improvement. At present, I feel that there is no poisonous point, the logic is online, and the protagonist as a time traveler also has the pattern that he should have. The only thing I don't like very much is the secret realm. I don't know how the author will write it? Will the protagonist enter the secret realm in the future? This has become an adventure novel. At present, the novel is still biased toward business. Even if the protagonist is a hands-off shopkeeper, he still has to intervene at critical moments.

It's a very good food-level book, the story unfolds quite interestingly, and the setting of dark creatures is also quite interesting. Then the realm is very interesting. I really like the setting of the road to transcendence, and the setting of world consciousness is also quite interesting, but there is still a little bit of it at the moment, so I can't read it too much. . .

The beginning is particularly interesting, some settings are quite novel, and there are also some particularly funny sentences, such as the following two sentences: "The pain is so painful that the corpse becomes warm" "If you have the guts, come and try it with those 'parents' whose bones are rusty from sleeping in it!" But there are also things I don't like very much: the pit that was buried for too long has not been filled. I thought the protagonist was going to show off his power (opening the abyss gate in hell), but in the end, he dug another pit (a continent with chaotic rules), which made me feel very disappointed. Until Chapter 390, I still don't know how the hell lord found the protagonist, and why he targeted the protagonist in order to get some souls (a soul is a relative amount)

A pretty good portrait of a vampire farming group. For many people, the biggest poisonous point is that the biological sister has a human child adopter of her own.

The content is humorous, in line with my personal core values, and in line with my fantasy of the protagonist, who is strong and intelligent. Come on, author [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] I have paid my salary and will give you electricity for love!

The fish story about the reincarnated boss is much better than the novel about Xiao Bai. The plot is coherent and the writing is delicate. This is a true western fantasy dark medieval novel. The shortcoming is that the description of the protagonist feels a bit lacking in behind-the-scenes feeling, and the subjective feeling of the B-level of the language narrative is high and low. It may be considered a close and immersive style. Anyone who likes the old book of The Evil God's Lackey should like to read it.

It's very interesting and logical. Although the protagonist is a vampire, he is an upright person. Unlike those protagonists who kill and kill all day long, it becomes boring after watching too much. It's not bad to return to such an upright character. The only bad thing is that the protagonist has been dormant for too long from chapters 30 to 70. I don't mind it very much, but many people have run away, so you can skip it directly.

Good looking! Change, redemption, from chaos to order, from a unique perspective, the novel background of the villain set off this epic change, praise the author, I have been reading for a week and suddenly I am so excited, there are so many chapters, hahaha

It's good to watch. I think the only problem is that my sister is a love brain. The protagonist also wants to see a paladin related to vampires because of family ties. Dean also lived up to his sister's expectations. The other characters are also very three-dimensional.

It's been a long time since I've reviewed it, it's indeed a very good book: The Western fantasy story written by the author is in line with my imagination, and the protagonist's ideal is also my fantasy. It is really happy to live in such a wonderful world. In addition, the characterization is also very vivid, and each race has its own characteristics, which is realistic and logical. The shortcoming may be that the narrative rhythm made it awkward for me to read, but since there are thousands of people with different faces, this may just not be to my taste. Overall, you can read a dozen chapters first, it's really interesting.

How can I put it, it is well written, the subject matter is very good, and the world view is very good. It can be said that this novel is a perfect Western fantasy world. It can be produced as an anime and manga, but the disadvantage is that the world view is a bit huge. It is easy to be spoiled by writing such small articles on Tomato. Basically, it is purely based on the author's own love. Come on, author.