My name is Chen Xiaoxian. I am born with the ability to see the lines of cause and effect on people.
Aunt Wang next door's red thread leads to her old scalper, and the county magistrate's financial thread leads to the entire bank's warehouse.
Until I saw a dead thread as black as ink hanging above my mother's head, which would be broken in three days.
I stole the incense money from the City God's Temple and bribed the ghost to read the book of life and death - my mother-in-law Yangshou was actually borrowed for thirty years.
That night I held half a piece of moldy bun and used a sewing needle to break the dead thread on my mother's body.
The moment the needle broke, there was a crisp sound of glass shattering in the sky.
>A man wearing a moon-white robe landed on the stars, with the Tianji Pavilion's star patterns embroidered on his sleeves:
>"Life-stealer, do you know whose cause and effect you have torn off?"
Reader comments
The growth series, the subject matter is quite niche, the setting is very novel, but some details have not been handled well, and some things and things lack a little process, such as the protagonist's concentration technique, which seems to appear out of thin air; some descriptions need to be streamlined, and the exclamation marks need to be changed. Less, a little more repetition in expression descriptions (feeling), the plot is relatively new now (retro style), but the rhythm is a bit messy, and there may be a slight problem with the outline, but it is a good improvement; the cover and title need to be slightly changed, it is a bit interesting but not much [Thoughts]
The growth series, the subject matter is quite niche, the setting is very novel, but some details have not been handled well, and some things and things lack a little process, such as the protagonist's concentration technique, which seems to appear out of thin air; some descriptions need to be streamlined, and the exclamation marks need to be changed. Less, a little more repetition in expression descriptions (feeling), the plot is relatively new now (retro style), but the rhythm is a bit messy, and there may be a slight problem with the outline, but it is a good improvement; the cover and title need to be slightly changed, it is a bit interesting but not much [Thoughts]
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