When I Traveled Through Time and Became a Pig Without Warning, I Was Torn Apart

The content of the article is quite good, and the character description is in line with the content of the original work. Zhu Wujie's strength has improved a bit faster, but for the sake of advancing the plot, there is not much that can be done, after all, it is not a system text. Among them, the ethnic content of Zhu Wujie and the Pig Clan is also very attractive, and the sense of belonging is very touching. In the future, I hope that the author will not write too much about the development of Zhu Wujie's tribe, and try to make Zhu Wujie fit more into the original plot, continue to advance, participate more in the Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit activities, and try to add as few other new plots as possible. Zhu Wujie could have more love scenes, but apart from the harem, a single female protagonist is still the most popular. At the same time, it should be more realistic. Don't fall in love with someone right away just to cater to some people's tastes. All in all, this book has emotions here and is actually very attractive. The author should try his best to make up for his regrets and not break up Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit. The author will work hard to ensure the quality and avoid unfinished work. What I say here is just my personal opinion. I just saw a joke and reported it as a new fan.

Among all the Hongmao articles, it is considered very good. Zhu Wujie in "The Best in the World", the practice of absorbing energy, and the magical power of Vajra Indestructibility, I think I can add it.

Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit Edition (Yi Xiaochuan) Super Virgin

It has a strong sense of chivalry and is a very good fanfic.

This book has an 8-point rating. I read it in a hurry, but the writing is fluent, and I am not a novice or AI. The plot is different. As a CP, I can do both with multiple girls and single girls, but I prefer multi-girls! Why not dismantle it? I think the pig's feet and the blue rabbit are somewhat interesting.

It feels okay, give me a five-star encouragement˙ᗜ˙

Come on, author, the writing is very beautiful. It is still recommended to write less about the plot except for the protagonist. The experiences of Hongmao and the others can be briefly mentioned, and there is no need to write about them in a chapter. If it is to promote other characters, it can be mentioned in one stroke, otherwise it will look very watery, and it will seem like you didn't watch it. For example, "Hongmao and the others went through all kinds of hardships, and finally gained something." Another example is "Hei Xiaohu started another plan due to various factors in the past." It can be mentioned in one sentence. The protagonist is separated from Hong Mao and the others. Just write down the process that the protagonist goes through. The center of the story should revolve around Zhu Wujie. If you meet Hong Mao and the others during the period, you can directly write down what you learned after the conversation, and you can also briefly mention it. Readers definitely don't want to see the perspective of Hongmao and the others, as well as the perspective of Hei Xiaohu and the others. It would be too clumsy to use a whole chapter to describe it. If it is a single book and you have written an original work of your own, you can divide it into two parts, and you can use a whole chapter to describe important characters other than the protagonist, but this is not necessary for fan fiction.

Approved by this General Officer

After traveling through time and being a pig, I can look at rabbits with clear features and my hobbies have changed. It's amazing!

I remember that the third leader of the Tianlang Sect seemed to have a Toad Skill when he went dark in the later period.

It's pretty good and interesting. You can take a look.

I hope there won't be a female protagonist

Can I write about all the Rainbow Cat series [Thinking][Shy] I don't need the last one [vomit]

It's not bad. Let's take care of it first. I'll read it later when there are more chapters [Blowing Kisses]

A rare masterpiece among Seven Swords fanfiction. Highly recommended. At least I can see there aren't many poisonous points so far.

Not bad, not bad, the protagonist is courageous, and there is no temporary messy relationship between men and women.

There are relatively few fanfics of this type, but the content is quite good, and the time-traveling character of the protagonist is also quite interesting. I look forward to the follow-up.

Nice! This is the most interesting Hongmao fanfic, please update it soon!

Come on, work hard and write more words

It looks good so far, but I have a question, who stipulates that Hongmao fans cannot dismantle Honglan? Fans of Shooting Condor and Divine Condor have dismantled Guo Huang

Reproduce the survival of little people

A relatively good book

Personally I think it's okay

The first red cat and blue rabbit

Okay, worth a look

It's really well written and hits the spot

A bit of a quaint description

It's worth watching to recall childhood memories

Hahahahahahahaha.

It's okay. The character's heart is well created.