Why Is My Substitute Becoming More and More Real?

It's more about romance than orthodox immortality. I've read too many of this genre, so hurry up and read it.

The Children of Shennong is Coming, an ordinary pseudo-harem eunuch story with good character development and a bit toxic, but still watchable [laughs]

As a big sister who writes Lolita novels, you must hold on. The development is relatively slow, but education and training are quite concentrated... Non-traditional immortality writing

Come on, the big lolicon guy who can write books [laughs]

The front feels relatively bland, but the excitement is at the back. You can keep chasing. Pink entered first place on its own, mainly because the front part was too bland. Too routine. The latter part is more exciting.

It's okay so far, but the biggest poisonous point of the stand-in novel, the real young master, hasn't appeared yet [facepalm] Last time I read a novel in which the protagonist dressed as a prince's stand-in, written by a female author, it poisoned me quite a bit. [Laughing awkwardly] You can imagine that the original protagonist threatened the male protagonist as a substitute, implying that if the male protagonist disobeys, he will pretend to be a male protagonist and go to the harem of the male protagonist [Laughing awkwardly] Of course, the writing of Ge Ge is okay so far. The biggest question now is whether Su An'an's other personality is her reborn in the future. If there is a plot between her and the real master, don't write that she regards the real master as the male protagonist. After a long time, she finds out that it is not the case, and then finds out that the male protagonist died after blocking the disaster [pouts] and then reborn changes everything. I saw an author write like this before, and I just commented, "Just treat her as if she came back from studying technology." [Laughing awkwardly] After all, what she wrote was that she discovered after a long time that the closer you are to the stand-in male protagonist, the easier it is to be taken advantage of. Nothing happened and it was disgusting. As for why I see books written by female authors, I also want to know. I am obviously watching books written by men. Of course, some vicious male authors also write books, such as Zhongyuan Wulu [smile] [smile]

Pigeon, you have changed [crying] Your last book was two chapters a day.

There are currently 80 chapters. The heroine is a female brat and we know from the beginning that the hero is a fake brother. The plot is lighthearted and pleasant without any poisonous points. It should be a harem novel like the author's previous one, and most of them are lolita. Lolita control ecstasy. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up. There are only 80 chapters at present. It is too few. It is not enough. The author should update it quickly [crying][crying][crying]

The plot and character portrayal are both excellent, but the combat power and fighting scenes are lacking in writing skills. After the book is completed, the author may consider writing a Western fantasy novel. The requirements for combat power in Western fantasy are much lower than those of cultivating immortals. It focuses on plot and characters, which is very suitable for the author. Isn't the speed of one chapter a day a bit too much? After two months, there are 60 more chapters.

I recognize the author's writing skills, and the previous book is one of the few that I have read without missing a chapter. But the subject matter of this book may be considered poisonous by some people. I thought so at first, but it was a bit of a guess. Because this book is a bit similar to a Korean comic boy stand-in that I followed, and the secret was revealed at the beginning. It was originally because the original boy was gay, but he had to marry a woman to inherit the family business, so he found a male protagonist. However, that book was not finished yet, so I don't know the plot direction. But in this book, the male protagonist will survive the tribulation in ten years. The real young master will probably survive the tribulation and then come out to fight. But these two people must not be the same person. I have an idea. If the male protagonist is a talented person like God's jealousy, with an unparalleled temperament and extraordinary talents, who can threaten the way of heaven, then the way of heaven will simply give him a point. Second, the person with good character will be the male protagonist, and the person with good talent will be the young master. However, the character will not be exposed easily, but the talent will directly affect the results of cultivation. Therefore, he will be discovered by heaven early and then all his cultivation will be lost. Therefore, the talent will be transferred to the male protagonist in a systematic way. After the progress of seizing the young master is completed, the two can be combined into one. But I'm just guessing and I don't know the specific direction. This subject matter feels like writing about cows, a bit southern clam. Let's see how it develops.

It's worth watching if you like female videos. If you prefer people with logic and normal brains, it's a pity that it's tasteless and discarded.

Good-looking,,, brother's warm underworld queen Sasasa [laughing] [shocked] [shy] [shocked] [what] [heartfelt] [pucker] [laughing] [crying] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [crying] [what] [laughing] [cover face] [laughing] [what] [laughing] [crying]

Different people like it differently. I think this book still has an 8 rating, or even hovers on the edge of a 9 rating, but the number of words is too small, and I don't know what will happen next. Some people say that the plot of this book is old-fashioned, but I feel that it is very natural and smooth; others say that this book overwhelms the protagonist's combat power, but my combat power is very reasonable. I can't just come to the Immortal Emperor and become invincible. What's the point? Or I can go directly to Nascent Soul, fight with the Su family, and then proceed to the next copy. This is also meaningless. The problem with this book is that there are a lot of characters that appear later, and their combat power is a bit strong, leaving too many pitfalls. I'm afraid the author can't fill them in well. At the same time, I feel that the fluency decreases later on. I prefer this book to be a daily novel about cultivating immortals (it lacks fighting and intrigue, and it is very warm to read. I think the author's characters and emotional development are pretty good.) In short, different people have different opinions and appreciations.

I still like this novel. The conflicts in the book are not very intense, or not very prominent. Most of the author's words are focused on the interaction between the protagonist and other heroines, downplaying the fierce confrontations in the world of cultivation. However, the protagonist's cultivation and the promotion of the main plot have not fallen behind. In short, I haven't seen any poisonous points so far, but there are a few updates. Obviously I don't think the protagonist is very lustful, but what's going on with the growing number of people in the harem? [Laugh]

The development of the plot is compact and exciting, especially the foreshadowing in chapter 33550336. After reading it, I was shocked and broke into a cold sweat.

This counterattack system also learns the essence of the luck system in the author's previous book [laughing]૮₍ ˃̶ ꇴ ˂̶ ₎ა

This is the novel with the most comfortable ratio of cultivation and emotional scenes I have ever read. I was practicing and tuning the piano at the same time, and it also had a strong sense of stealing. It made me feel happy reading it in bed [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's very good-looking. Only a father and a male villain appear in the early stage. Later, except for the male protagonist, all the characters are female. It's really good. Now I feel like a time traveler who knows how to make stockings, and I don't know how to deal with the materials.

It's okay. The daily writing about the harem in the context of cultivating immortals is very similar to the previous book. There are at least ten harems, and there are already five of them. The writing is still bland but it is better than fluent. Give it a five-star support.

The little ghost's sister, the sister with two souls, the master who steals food, the fiancée who enjoys fighting, the lonely genius girl, the old lady who loves to watch the fun, the two little pets who love to eat delicious ointments, the zombie girl who has no role for the time being, and the senior sister on the side of the road

The heroines are very cute, and I especially like my sister. Good luck to the author.

Brother, please give me one more episode. I'm dying. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more episode. Just one more episode. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother. Really, just one episode. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore😭😭 Brother, please give me one more episode. I'm dying. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more episode. Just one more episode. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother. Really, just one episode. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore😭😭

It's a good read. The author's introduction is very detailed. I didn't expect to include my experience. I can't imagine that I was followed for so long.

It's well written. I can't say anything about the writing style. It's very fluent.

It's not bad. It's short and concise. There's nothing too bad about it. But I really can't give it a high score. You can read it to pass the time when you're bored. It's a little more compact than the author's other book on villains.

Familiar feeling, two sisters, fiancée, joined the master [learned] [learned]

Coming from the previous book, I support the author [Chigua]

There are fewer and fewer normal novels. Authors should keep writing.

I didn't notice you at first. The author of the novel "Villain: There Are Too Many Children of Luck, I Broken It" has published a new book [laughing evilly]

[Chigua] Judging from the author's other book (Villain: There are so many children of destiny that I ruined it), this book is still worth reading [Chigua]