Ninja World Succubus Uzumaki Menma

It's very interesting and the plot is very reasonable so far. Although the system of cultivating immortals is very abstract, it is very interesting to watch. The character creation is also good, there is no Virgin Sheep, and there is no so-called crazy killing decisiveness.

One said that the rating was low, but the writing is quite good. This book is considered good if placed next door. Of course, there are some shortcomings, but they are not major problems and the flaws do not cover up the flaws. The author's next book will definitely be a high-quality book. Come on ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

It feels pretty good, but if possible, it would be nice to go to the parallel time and space of Boruto later. I just finished reading the manga today, and I feel that Boruto is too depressing, and Boruto is a bit too difficult [facepalm]

The characters are well described, the content is okay, and there are almost no flaws. Why is the rating so low? [Think]

It looks good. If you like it, come and see more [Adoration]

Can you write a system article about traveling through time to a cultivation chat group? Also, can the heroine of Naruto, Bleach, Dragon Ball Gourmet, Capture the Pirates, and Cultivation of Immortals accept all the goods, only Yurouko Yu and Xiaoliu?

Very good, no pressure on combat power, invincible in the early stage

Niu looks good. Have you ever thought about writing a Naruto fanfic where the heroine is Saosuke?

I love reading it. The author writes so well [smile][smile]

Beautiful, beautiful, I like it very much!

Will there be Tsunade as the heroine?

Very interesting, good luck to the author There are also innovations, and I look forward to the plot behind it.

What to do with the author's nine faces? Is this Menma's signature addition at a later stage? Always feel like something is missing What to do with the nine-faced beast?

This is the Naruto I want to see, unite Konoha

It surpasses many embarrassing Naruto stories. It may also be my preference, but this score of more than six points is too low to be honest. By the way, did the author not buy traffic? Or was the cover chosen poorly?

Good looking author, keep up the good work Except for a little bit of setting, the overall style and writing style are quite nice.

It's very beautiful, a different future

Author, let's go to the sea, it's better than the plot😄

The writing is good, the characters are more three-dimensional and fit the original text. Both the daily and the main plot are very interesting, not just a cool novel.

I really like reading this type of Naruto story, it's so good.

Good looking good looking good looking

Give me a five-star support

It won't be over, right?

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

In fact, I am very curious about how the author maintains the relationship between several female protagonists. From the current point of view, the writing seems to be a bit difficult to push the emotional line well.

Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey

Fascinating Menma, perfect ending

Although it's a little bit toxic in some places, overall it's pretty nice.

It's pretty good-looking, but it's too short and doesn't look good enough [grievance]

A very interesting Naruto fanfic, support it with five stars [like]