God-Killing *********

The Jiangnan flavor is very strong, and the level of science and technology in the world of God-killing is unprecedentedly high. In order to adapt to Lu Mingfei's coordinated operations, the difficulty of the monster-killing plot is increased. Overall, it is well written and the author writes it very carefully. [Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses]

Teacher, please keep writing. My suggestion is to write more about Lu Mingfei. Like the original work of God of God, the content can be shorter as everyone knows it, because like me, my words are directed at Lu Mingfei [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

The author wrote it very well. I look forward to Mingfei becoming a cowherd in the Japanese circle, (*^o^*), and I don't know what Qiu's reaction will be when he meets Mingfei. [Sinister smile]

This book is very, very good. There are a lot of things in it, very rigorous. There is no other protagonist in it who is outcast because of Lu Mingfei's appearance. When I first read it, there were only more than 1,000 people. I thought this book is so good, why are so few people reading it? Then I wrote a comment, and then my comment received a lot of likes. I looked at the homepage and found that 12,000 people had read it. I was very happy. I am particularly looking forward to Lu Mingfei's reaction after he comes to the Japanese circle or commemorates meeting Lu Mingfei. After all, she had seen Dragon Clan.

It's very interesting. I came here mainly for Dragon Clan because I haven't seen it yet. But the character description is very good. In fact, I don't know what to think about the God-Slaying God, but the description of Lu Mingfei from the Dragon Clan is actually quite good.

It's so good. I sit and wait for updates every day. There are a lot of soul-calling people in the comment area. From time to time, the author can update 4 times a day, and sometimes he can update twice a day. It's super good-looking. I'm looking forward to the author's updates. "Although the author's writing is very poor, the writing is really good." I just read it every day. It's super good. Say a word to the author: Can you finish it more directly? 999999999 Then I will update 99999999 extras. Thank you ๑•́₃•̀๑ Remember to do more Chu Lu hehe Chu Lu 99

The author used DS, but he did a good job in solving some of the pain points of DS composition. Overall, the look and feel is good, and the traces of AI are obvious. People like me who are more sensitive to DS are just cheating.

The content also shows that the author tried his best The writing is also very good, but updating may be a bit slow if I try to imitate the style. Come on, author, I saw you from the first place on the recommendation list While waiting to become a veteran [thinking] Oh, it's finally popular congratulations congratulations

The writing is really very good. I have never seen it written so well. I personally think this book is the best one among the fanfics of Dragon Clan and God Slayer, because it does not weaken other characters in order to highlight Lu Mingfei, but treats everyone equally. The writing is very good, looks very comfortable, and does not make people feel awkward or angry. But the updates are a bit slow. I saved up for several days and got six of them, and I finished them in one go. I hope the author can update more in a day, but writing a book is also very demanding on your brain, so don't be tired. Really really beautiful

Oh my god, this fanfic should be seen by more people. It must be five stars. It is of such high quality. The writing style and the description of the battle are so exciting. The feeling of pleasure is really amazing! （°ο°）！ ! The author's writing style is so amazing! When I saw that Shai Zai and Qi Ye could resonate with the gods, I felt that they must be perfect for each other!

This writing style is so good, I feel like the author has eaten a piece of Jiangnan

Keep up the good work! There is no need to write down some trivial things so cumbersomely, and there should be fewer metaphors. They should be used in more important or sensational places (? Forgive me for not saying I'm still very optimistic about you @Qibaixia It's very beautiful, and the writing gets better and better later on.

It's quite good to read, but it uses a lot of metaphors. It feels like each paragraph has a long rhetoric, which makes it a bit tiring to read.

The writing is very good and smells like a dragon. Does the author have CP? If so, can you write about Eriyi? (Suggestion) I just feel very sorry.

It's super, super, super good-looking. It's simply the best one among all the Lin Qiye and Lu Mingfei fanfics I've seen. The description is very close to Jiangnan, and the whole writing style also has a sense of comfort. It is a story of two people growing up together, rather than one person trying his best to highlight the story. It is really comfortable. Author, I love you, but please don't kill me later ˃ʍ˂

The writing is really good, but the DS flavor is too strong.

When can senior brother appear? The little monster will be resurrected, right?

I asked, why does Jiangnan stop following Douyin every day? It turns out that he opened a trumpet account.

The writing has a Jiangnan flavor and the writing style is very delicate. I have been waiting for Chu Zihang to appear in the introduction. If the author changes it, he can change the introduction.

The author's writing style is very good, and the character description is also very good. In the early stage, the old thief's style felt a bit heavy, but in the later stage, the old thief's style was light and integrated with the author's own writing style. In the two books, I have only read about Dragon Clan, but I have also heard about the God of Destruction. In fact, the author can also use Lu Ming The concubine should be more full-bodied, because I feel that in the style of the old thief, Ming Fei is the kind of person who doesn't care, and has the same complaints in the early and late stages. How can I put it, it's just bad vernacular, but the article is meant to be more funny and look more relaxed. I don't know if the author will add Boss Caesar and others later. Ming Fei should be after Long San and before Long Si. I don't know what identity the author gave Ming Fei, because the old thief didn't fill in this hole in the original work. In fact, many people prefer Ming Fei's identity to be the black dragon. There is also Fingel's appearance. I have not read the original work of Zhanshen, but what can I say, based on his character, there is actually a funny point. I quite like Ming Fei and Fingel's quarrel. This way, they feel that they have a strong sense of life and being alive. And Lin Qiye, I think the author's wife also wrote it very well. I haven't read the original work, but overall, I like it very much. The characters are really well drawn. I hope the author will update the article soon. I rely on you for my spiritual food.

The author is so sorry, I beg you. I have rarely been embarrassed in my life. I really beg you this time. Can you bring my senior brother over? Please, I miss my senior brother🥺🥺🥺(┬＿┬) Please (╥╥) @Qibaixia

_I don't understand why the score is so low. I have read many Zhanshen fics, and this is the top three among them. It combines Dragon Clan and Zhanshen, and creates a very new path. Even if you leave aside Dragon Clan and only read Zhanshen, it is great to read this one.

After reading the first few chapters, the concept is okay, but the writing style is too deepseek.

Again, Jiangnan knows nothing about the Dragon Clan [laughs] Very worth seeing

It's very beautiful. Author, you must be happy. May you be as bright as the sun and bloom like a flower. Every day is full of hope and joy, and every step taken is firm and powerful. I wish you better and better and a more exciting life! And the author, do you still have a draft? I just wanted to see if you have any words [laughs]

It has a Jiangnan flavor, but the DeepSeek flavor is a bit strong in the first few chapters.

There's no problem. Those who can accept AI can read the wording modified with AI. Those who can't accept it can still read it. I just read the first dozen chapters and I don't know if AI is used later. If not, please @ me and I will come back to continue reading.

Lu Mingming traveled through the God of Destruction, and Chu Zihang appeared in the later stage.

The description of the environment can be reduced, the camera can focus more on the pig's feet, and the jokes can be written more.

The original plot description is a bit too much, you can write less, please come on Write less original works, really, it's all about Lu Mingfei [I'm about to cry]