I'm Looking for My Way Home in the Heavens

Come on, wonderful. But here's a suggestion, you should remember what a fanfic is. What readers like to watch is to add a foot in the known plot or significantly change the original plot. The goal is strength, longevity, or rights and women. If you add too many unknown plots or segments, you will lose readers. What you write is still a view of the universe. There are many familiar movies and TV movies that can be integrated into it. When you are powerful, you can expand the dimension, and you can also praise the universe. In addition to the City of Thousand Planets, there are Avatar, Interstellar, Zerg, and many more. Come on [laughs]

Artificial literature created by AI, which is evaluated as a mixture of human touch and human-computer touch, still has several fixed shortcomings of AI creation, such as puns, serial numbers plus data descriptions, cool science fiction-style word composition, and always speaking with ellipses. But very cleverly, the author chose an intelligent mechanical map like Cybertron as the initial novice village. Cybertron uses cruel and cold battle logic as its survival rules, which is very consistent with the characteristics of AI creation. It covers up the shortcomings of insufficient human touch to a certain extent, and is also in line with the growth path of the protagonist. However, if the author continues to create in this style for a long time, there will eventually be a downhill road. The current low score is precisely because of this. However, the author's book gave me an idea. I originally thought that most of the novels created by AI were essays covered in book covers, with all kinds of cumbersome and meaningless adjectives and nouns. After reading them for a while, I felt as boring as reading a high school essay, because they are products of industrial assembly lines. But this kind of product is very suitable for the mechanical science fiction theme that lacks humanistic care. It emphasizes reason and logic without much emotional emphasis. It makes people feel like a work meal. It is not unpleasant, but it is definitely not delicious, so I give it four stars.

Can! Unlike other books, it always writes about the plot of the Transformers movie! Incorporate more movies! Go to that novice village and knead the mind stone into it!

Your growth is like a nouveau riche, using something that you think is yours to successfully become the overlord of the pond from a small person. In order to prevent others from learning your tricks, you have consolidated your life of dominance.

The author Xiaofan is great! To be honest, this is one of the few fan novels I have seen that is highly consistent with the background and setting. I personally like it very much and it ranks high among my fan fictions! Come on! ! ! [Admiration][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

It is a very interesting novel. It uses Cybertron as the framework to write a large chapter, but it is a bit too plain. The author did not write the ups and downs of the big scenes, and the performance is too plain and a bit monotonous.

The plot is very good, not boring, fast-paced and not superficial, and the setting is also good

Super beautiful, five-star praise

The plot is okay so far

I've read over 50 chapters and it's pretty good. Look at the quality at the back.

The author's writing is sophisticated and the plot is compact, but there is still room for improvement.

If you like science fiction, you can't miss it

Come on, come on, come on

There are problems, but I hope they can be improved.

Come on, come on, come on

Come on, come on, come on!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking What have you been writing recently? What about machine flow?

A pretty good book

Very good, five-star praise! [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

Not bad, you can take a look

Not bad, good, tastes great

I saw Chapter 597, which explains everything

If I were the universe, I would give you all the Rose Nebula. In fact, you are the universe, my whole universe

Will the author become a star god in the future? The one who is perfected by the rules of physics [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The idea is good, but the writing is a bit problematic Everything else is okay

This can be written well, brothers, but the pace is a bit too fast. Fast-paced cool writing

Very interesting Transformers novel

He has a rich imagination and doesn't have too many witty plots, so he can be used as a reserve of food.