Naruto: the Witch Tastes so Good!

This book is quite good. I originally came here because of the title, but I found that the battle scenes are surprisingly good [laughing] and the character interactions are also interesting and logical. I just have a small suggestion. You don't need to talk about the details in a long way to brag about the beauty of the protagonist. It would be better to write more about the characters' reactions. The author has this ability [like it]. Regarding the question of whether to change or marry, or whether to sleep with Kakashi, I think the author can just follow the logic and character of the character. There is no need to deliberately cater to the readers. After all, it is difficult to agree with everyone, and the most important thing is to ensure that the character does not collapse. Then I also have my own opinion, that is, facing such a genius with double bloodstains, someone in Konoha Village will definitely keep an eye on him, such as Tuan and Snake. In addition to the above unconventional methods, there are also slightly milder methods that allow the protagonist to leave descendants. After all, blood stains can really be inherited. [Awkward laugh] And facing such a female ninja with great potential and extremely high value, using family to tie her down is also an effective method. You can also consider arranging some plots such as marriage, introducing partners, etc., And digesting the potion by the way. Of course, it depends on whether it fits the direction of the book, so I'll just say this. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and finish this book.

It's very interesting [laughs][laughs] The author has changed, so let's get a few more, okay [blowing kisses][blowing kisses][blowing kisses]

The writing style of "Transformation of Marriage" is excellent, the writing style of "Tomato Transformation" is top-notch, and the description of women's transformation into women's clothes is full of descriptions. This is the second Tomato Naruto Transformation novel about the witch's path, but it's the best written. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is smooth and the emotions are in place. The heroine's revenge at the beginning ended up feeling confused when she was thinking about Kakashi. In fact, to be honest, Danzo does not need to be killed so quickly, because many plots need him to promote. The heroine's golden finger is one thing, and familiarity with the plot is also an advantage. If the change is too big, the change will be greater in the future. What's more, the best way to get revenge on Danzo is not to kill him, but to destroy all his calculations and plans, making him incompetent and furious. For example: destroying Shisui's death, destroying Uchiha's genocide plan, etc. . . The description of the battle scenes is spot-on, and the daily life and battles are well interspersed. It is not abrupt and has a lot of feeling. Especially the interaction between the male and female protagonists is very sweet and there is no particularly awkward plot. Ninjas are inherently high-risk professions, and it is acceptable to be more direct with relationships. In this book, Kakashi's age is changed a bit. According to the anime timeline, Kakashi was only about 13 years old during the Nine-Tails Rebellion. Iruka was 10 years old when his parents died. Kakashi is 4 years older than him according to the setting. The heroine's age is set at 16, so Kakashi's age in this book is at least about 8 years older. At this point, the author can arrange a lot of things in the follow-up plot, especially if Nohara Lin comes out, she will definitely not be in the form of a young girl. At least she will be a few years older than the anime image, right? Looking forward to the follow-up plot, and what is the name of the heroine and Kakashi's baby, Hatake Yuki? Hahaha!

Let me start by saying that there is a high probability that this book will involve a marriage changer, but I feel that the author has actually quite good control over the plot. At present, there is no such thing as a lot of fans trying to criticize the third generation. Shinobi is still the same Shinobi. Let's see how it develops in the future.

It is well written and I hope the author will keep up the good work. In addition, I hope that the protagonist's strength can be improved faster. No matter what, invincible writing is better than mainstream abuse. After all, Naruto is a dangerous world, and the protagonist is being targeted by Obito again, and the situation is still relatively dangerous now. Especially with the absolute spore ability, be careful.

The author writes it very well. The collision between the Lord of Mysteries and Naruto is very harmonious. In order to reach a higher level, they can even do anything. I love so much. Come on, author! Code like crazy!

It's very beautiful. It's the best one I've seen so far.

To be honest, I came here because of Huang Tao's famous saying, but after reading it, at least I think there is nothing wrong with it.

This is the first time I've seen the theme of mystery + Naruto on Tomato. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs.

The author is very good at writing about witches [laughing evilly] Why is the rating so low?

It looks good, it looks good, hurry up and put Kakashi in your mouth, hehehe

This fanfic about changing marriage is also quite good.

It's very good-looking, but its early combat power is a bit weak, but that's understandable.

The author's writing is pretty good, the names of the ninjutsu are very suitable for Naruto, and the description of the battle scenes is very good. Come on, the author is getting better and better^ω^

Very good, very tasty

Perfect fusion, a rare masterpiece.

It's also very pretty, right?

It's okay, the author worked hard too

Not bad, not bad, it would be nice if the progress could be speeded up [laughing evilly]

It must be praised and praised! I just love to see people getting married [laughing evilly]

Very good. Although I haven't watched Mystery, the plot looks very good.

It's very interesting, and the author's writing style is good. Come on!

Come on, the writing is good, it's so embarrassing

Very good, not bad, come on

It looks good, good luck to the author

Very interesting book

Secret text is very good

I hope it won't be too overwhelming, just a little more relaxed.

When will you marry Kakashi?

The author's writing is very to my liking [blowing kiss]