Hp Sed's Prophet Lover

The male protagonist's character is very lovable, but the plot develops a bit too fast, and a lot of detailed content worth writing is skipped, so it seems very rushed. For example, the plot of Newt's summer vacation, and the isolation of the male protagonist, or his daily life, I suggest that more words should be spent on it. I hope that the author can sculpt the plot content in more detail in the next chapters to make the cute schoolmaster kitten more vivid.

Overall, it's pretty good. There's nothing bad about it, and the style is considered warm. If you only count the description of the protagonist and important characters, it is still pretty good (for example, the narrative of the relationship with Said is quite natural in my opinion), and this setting is also very to my liking. However, the author's description of other supporting characters is very simple and straightforward, they are just tools, without any emotion, very straightforward and nothing new. There are also some parts of the plot that could be detailed, but it felt like the plot was slippery and slipped out of my mind. At this point, we can add more interactions between the protagonist and people with different personalities. From a novel perspective, the personality can be distinctive and stand out, or it can create some minor troubles (I'm not sure how to write a sweet novel, I haven't read it in a long time) Also, the plot is a bit old-fashioned, and there is really nothing attractive about the plot. It can be seen that the author must have read a lot of HP novels, and many parts must have been imitated. You can write more of your own opinions, or even be bolder and write more of your own short plots, so that readers will feel more involved in writing. Overall, it is a good novel, very peaceful. However, because there are some minor flaws in the above problems, the author may not have much writing experience. I believe that if given enough time to grow, the author's writing style will be more mature. This is just my personal evaluation. I like the author's book very much (what a sweet little article!) It is purely a suggestion. Whether you adopt it or not depends on the author. Sorry, one more thing is that the characters are a bit black and white. In fact, to put it bluntly, the characters are relatively single-minded. Apart from the good guys, there are only those who don't like the protagonist very much. Even the isolated villains have strange emotions (perhaps the discrimination and bullying in foreign countries are really serious). It is better to try to create some more contradictory people. After all, people themselves are multi-faceted and can be more three-dimensional. I'm looking forward to the growth of the protagonist and the author here.

The gentle badger x the cute little eagle, the favorite of the group (except for the classmates in the same college), does not follow the main plot and has its own daily life. The protagonist is a native with some slight precognitive ability. It can be seen that School Deng and the professors have changed a little because of the protagonist, the little sun. I hope that this can change many tragedies. It will be even better if the follow-up story is sweet and not cruel! Anyway, looking forward to the update.

The main character is so cute! ! ! Animagus is a cat. So cute! (⑅˃◡˂⑅) So far it seems to be good and the emotional line is not very awkward. It is estimated that it will be a slow-burning love affair, with the relationship warming up bit by bit. The most anticipated Triwizard Tournament! I hope Tal will not be involved and let Tal be the most solid backing in the Seder competition! ! ! Plus, Tal is so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute! (ฅ>ω<*ฅ)

Overall, it's pretty good. I feel that the author is writing for love, and the pace is relatively fast, especially before the main plot begins (when Harry is not in school). The writing is more natural, and the young lovers are very sweet. However, there are many places that seem uncomfortable. Many places that could be written are not written, and it looks bland and fast. (I'm not sure how to describe it!) There are a few pairs of sub-CPs in it that are quite sweet. They look good in daily life and the main character is cute.

The main character is very cute, and the Animagus is a really cute kitten. The writing is also pretty good. The plot is pretty light-hearted, I think the male protagonist is the darling of the group. Although he was isolated at first because of his excellence and inability to communicate. But it's so short that it won't make people feel uncomfortable. And the first time I watched Godmother was a McGonagall fanfic. There are several pairs of deputy CPs inside There are too many sub-CP plots. It's always the same senior William, who else?

First of all, the character setting, both the protagonist and the supporting characters, is well created. There is no bad guy, except of course a certain pink frog. Secondly, the plot mainly focuses on the growth and love of the protagonist. There is not much space for action with the three-person team, but many key cases of Sirius overturning the case or the withdrawal of Sirius' death have the protagonist (major contributor). In the end, this article shows various rich characters such as Dumbledore (a grandfather who counts his own life and will be soft-hearted towards the protagonist who wants to live), Cedric (a clingy dog), Snape (a tough-tongued tsundere), and the Weasley twins (enthusiastic and rational who understand what they want or want to be early on). Whether you like to see the protagonist with a strong background (McGonagall is the godmother, Grindelwald is the uncle, and one of the twenty-eight pure-blooded ones), you like the protagonist to have a sweet love (the whole story is cruelty-free, the love between Cedric and the protagonist is super easy, and they go both ways), or you like the protagonist to be highly talented (a smart and hard-working little eagle), likes the protagonist's good qualities but has his own bottom line (although he is a bit introverted, but in front of friends and family, he is a high-need cub who is brave enough to express love and affection), likes the article without being irritating (the relatives and friends around the protagonist , the seniors and seniors are all very good. At first, Zai Zai was isolated and bullied, but they took action, and even the lion protected Zai Zai. Later, the four colleges basically did not target the protagonist. The protagonist is beautiful and talented and is a heartthrob) etc. I highly recommend reading this book. You will definitely not be disappointed. It's so good, I finished it in one go and I look forward to the day it ends.

The teacher's writing style is really delicate and feels very gentle. Wow, I really can't describe it. (At this time, I have to blame my poor Chinese skills.) In short, it's a great writing style. Enjoy it *^_^*

The score is really low, super sweet, 200 chapters in one breath, the emotional line is very rich, but it lacks something royal.

Looks good, but I want an accurate left and right position

Overall, he is very cute. He is an original male protagonist of Cedric and Ravenclaw, and he has a good relationship with the three professors. Grindelwald is also his uncle.

Ah, although I came here for two male protagonists, there are too many male-male protagonists. Well, I think three pairs... But it is within the acceptable range! ! I also feel that Professor Snape is a bit OOC, and it doesn't particularly match my impression of Professor Snape. I feel like (bow), everyone has different opinions, but I think it's okay, and it's still acceptable.

Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Love it, be fascinated by it, look at it

It's so sweet with Cedric. The protagonist is a cute little cake.

Super super super super super super nice (๑• . •๑)

Highly recommended, the writing is very good, the author must work hard to update [Sending heartfelt wishes]

Very nice! ! ! ! Both of them are very nice, I like them very much! When will we be together? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's very easy to read, the writing is very good, but the number of words is a bit short [cry] [cry] [cry]. I hope the author can be more productive.

A very gentle protagonist. Although the plot is a bit unclear, it gave me the feeling that the protagonist was born in love, grew up in love, and distributed love to everyone.

Very beautiful👀, the best I have ever seen

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Overall it's okay, the rhythm is not very stable

Wow, Wow, Wow, Wow

So pretty ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Oops, it made me twist like a maggot on the bed. It's so sweet. I love watching it [shy][shy]

Author, I love you! ! ! ! ✪ω✪Update soon, I love this book so much! ! ! ✪ω✪

The gentle little badger and the proud little eagle are very, very good.

Very beautiful, highly recommended to go and see it

Super super super super beautiful