After Changing Her Career, Passerby a Was Made a God

I prefer no CP. I can have intimate scenes in the extras, but I don't want it in the main text. I can't accept it. [Sending my heart] Yeah, but the author's writing is quite good. The first world feels a bit messy, but it's still very interesting. The main thing is to just lose your mind and watch it, and it feels very cool [please update] [sending my heart] Come on, come on.

Welcome babies to click on my book. This is a lightning protection zone. If you don't like it, please don't hurt me. Everyone's lightning points are different. If you are stepped on, if you are stepped on, if it is not a matter of principle, you want to spray lightly. Just press the upper left corner to leave. First of all, in the first world of Lightning Protection, there will be a black original heroine, who is suspected of being a female protagonist. However, not all the original heartthrob heroines in every world are black. In some planes, the original heroines are good people, and some have a good relationship with the heroine. Secondly, the emotional line of the first world is broken, so it is recommended to skip it. Then the novel has a little bit of logic. The heroine's personality will change a little in each plane. Because of the different identities, the personality will also change, but the main content is that the Buddhist pension boss changes his career and opens up a happy destiny. Then there may be the author's thoughts in the content. I can explain this, because there was no contract at the beginning, so the last comment is not needed. The author is a novice in writing, and the three views should be considered normal. If you see any incorrect views or typos in the plot, you can comment. The author will make corrections after seeing them. Small changes can be very troublesome, but they generally won't be made. The author is usually very busy, and the inspiration may be squeezed out like a sponge, so I recommend that if you are interested, you can add a bookshelf first, and you can cultivate the text first, and wait until a plane is completed before reading. Finally, thank you all for reading. I hope you will comment more and give me some encouragement. Thank you babies❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆc)

This book is still very interesting, but I actually feel that the author wrote the first world quite well. From my personal point of view, the writing of the subsequent worlds gradually became a bit rough, that is, there is almost no plot for the supporting characters. Of course, the protagonist has the most roles, but some supporting characters must also be described, otherwise he will be like a big tree. In this way, there is only one bare backbone, but it seems a bit monotonous and lacks details. It cannot be said to be bland in reading. It just doesn't have that kind of depth. It just needs more interaction between the protagonist and the supporting characters. Don't just say it in two sentences. There is basically no problem with the rest. The main line is very good anyway, and the general plot is very good. You can watch it.

The content is quite good, but can the author make the paragraphs shorter? [Feelings]. If it's too long, you won't have the desire to read it. You can divide a paragraph into several smaller paragraphs, without changing the content. [Thoughts] To be honest, I was quite disappointed when I read the second world of Skyfall [smile]. I thought that when the heroine was a little transparent and did not inherit the throne, Skyfall said that the heroine was the emperor for eternity, etc. Others were surprised. This kind of plot is really satisfying, but it turned out that the heroine became the emperor a few years before the skyfall appeared [rolls eyes]. I was looking forward to the curtain when I read the first world [crying]

Very good-looking, this is the protagonist I love, excellent in every aspect, super perfect (PS: Although it may be rare in reality, but I just like this) The author strongly recommends writing a novel where the heroine is in the world of her previous mission, for example, a blind person becomes a pianist or something [sending my heart]

It's very beautiful. Although the author said that the first world was too much to write, I actually think it's okay. I am a person who reads fast-paced novels and doesn't really like non-CP novels, but this book really touched my heart. I feel that the heroine is just a passerby in the original novel, but she is her own heroine. I can totally accept this book. There is someone who likes the heroine in the main text, but in the end there is no emotional line. And the heroine is the kind of person who is strong yet gentle, everyone will like her very much, hehe

After watching Three Small Worlds, I finally understand why the rating is so low. The plot and characters are both good, especially the plot, which is very attractive. The shortcoming is that the writing is poor and makes people not want to continue reading. But the plot is really good and enjoyable, which complements each other perfectly. If the writing is practiced well, it should be better.

Teacher, it perfectly meets my requirements. I am the kind of main text. The more I read, the more I want the heroine to have CP, because I feel a bit lonely, but sometimes I don't like it. But this article perfectly meets my requirements. The main text has no CP. The extras can be perfect, and it perfectly meets my requirements.

Now that I see it, I think it's okay. First of all, there are some areas that I think are lacking. The first world developed too fast, and I felt that the characters were not full, so the male protagonist's relationship had a sense of drama. Although it was written in the extra chapter why he fell in love with the female protagonist, and secondly, because Jiang Jiang was omnipotent, he became a member of the country and brought a lot of high technology to the country, but all the plots are shaping How awesome she is, how many awards she has won, but she is a bit boring, and then the technology is rising too fast, which makes people feel very unreal, the second world is still the same, the plot is too fast, it feels like everything has been written, and it feels like nothing has been written, and it feels like the story has just begun and ended suddenly. Then there are the highlights in my opinion. The heroine in the first world is not addicted to love and is a relatively standard heroine. Because the heroine is an almighty baby in the quick wear department, it is actually very easy to fall in love with the heroine because the personality charm is very unique. After being polished in many worlds, her charm makes many people unable to take their eyes away. The second world has shaped the image of the female treasure empress and improved the status of women. Some people blindly open a harem because they are empresses. Of course, according to the previous character creation, if the female baby opens a harem in this world, then according to the character design of the female baby in the passerby A mission, it is already OOC (not to mention the character design of the female treasure outside the passerby A department, because logically the passerby A has no personality, so according to the performance of the female treasure, the female treasure is not keen on love) Finally, because the two worlds are too short, they cannot highlight the personality charm of the characters. It is recommended to slow down the progress of each world, because the 668 system does not appear very often, and it can be said to be basically immersive. Okay, I have almost said what I want to say, because I don't write long reviews, so if you don't agree with what I said, of course it's okay, because a thousand readers have a thousand Hamlets, but I hope you don't criticize me, I am relatively fragile in my heart, if you don't like it, just click ❌ to leave, don't look for a sense of presence By the way, there is something else I want to say. The second world canopy feels a bit redundant, and the paragraphs are too long, which makes people not want to read it. All in all, there are some weird points, but it does not affect the viewing. The subject matter is still very good.

The story has a smooth rhythm, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the plot progresses layer by layer, making it easy for people to immerse themselves in it. The author's writing style is delicate, the atmosphere is well created, and the daily descriptions are natural and not stiff. The fly in the ointment is that some sections advance a little too quickly, and some foreshadowing ends a little hastily. The overall readability is very strong, and it is very enjoyable to read it in one sitting in your spare time. It is worth reading.

What a cool article. The heroine is super strong. I have finished reading it. The heroine is just right for me. She is exactly as long as my xp. I really like the boss. Quickly wear it. The boss will always be a boss. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's not bad. There's nothing too disturbing. It's quite comfortable to read.

It's so beautiful that it makes you feel like you're in the spring breeze. It doesn't feel lonely or dull. There is no CP but there are some emotional scenes. The heroine is a very strong person and sticks to her heart. I especially like the chapter about cultivating immortals. Everyone can be the protagonist. The group portrait is written by yyds

Wow, I like it so much (●°u°●) "The male protagonist is not just blindly attracted to the female protagonist, he is attracted by the heroine's personality charm. I also like the heroine's personality, she is smart and tolerant [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

It's over. Let's read the summary of the first story. I can't stand the summary of the second story. It's obviously no CP, so why do those things appear inexplicably? It's very strange. In fact, the second story can be a spin-off about the third princess~

The heroine's personality is what I wanted to have before. For example, she can carry on whatever she says, but I can't. I am the kind of person who can make others not want to talk to me just by saying one sentence. The heroine is so cool, and the author is so good at writing.

The author has a strong desire to survive, a very good attitude, and the concept of the article is also good, but sometimes the span is too large and the connection is not good, which makes people feel confused.

The super charismatic all-round boss fish in the fish pond, he is serious and sneaky, awesome

Very good setting, very well-behaved and big

Not enough [crying] I like Jiang Ling! ! ! ! ! ! Love you [love] [blowing kiss]

Very nice, I like it very much

Why are there only five worlds? [Almost crying] Can the author open another book and read it well [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's okay, but the heroine is very much like the protagonist of the second game, and the male characters are like the heroine's dream girls, haha The side story should be endless, it ended abruptly, the main text is okay, the heroine of the side story has no subjectivity, it is purely the wishful thinking of those men, and I didn't ask Jiang Ling if he wanted to [laughing and crying] It just looks awkward and feels weakened, overall it's okay Main text 4.0 Side story 3.5

The author really wrote it very well. I read it word for word. The story is very exciting.

This book is very beautiful! ! ! Jiang Ling is so charming! ! ! I love you, Daddy, for writing such a beautiful book (˵¯͒¯͒˵) [Sending my heart]

The writing is really good. Although he plays a passerby role, I feel that every role the protagonist plays is the protagonist of each profession.

I think this book is very enjoyable and very interesting. The plot is also relatively novel and the author is very good at writing.

I gave this rating just because I really like the heroine's character.

I don't think I've seen any description of the heroine's appearance. How can such a powerful heroine not look good? I'll take a look at the back first.

Not much to say, it's really beautiful [laughing] but too little, it's over