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Reader comments
Ah? No, why? Why was the protagonist beaten up without provoking anyone? He was born to be a masochist? I'm wearing a book and still have to be criticized?
It's a classic system task to control the protagonist's plot direction. The rhythm of the plot is quite tight, but I feel that the protagonist is just a puppet. It feels aggrieved to be beaten and defeated all the time (of course I only saw the protagonist and Lu Jin competing). Also, the system's performance gives way to the plot too harshly. The protagonist can copy entries when he comes into contact with other people's Qi. As a result, I have to fight against so many people but still get beaten up and give up. I can't understand it.
Ah? No, why? Why was the protagonist beaten up without provoking anyone? He was born to be a masochist? I'm wearing a book and still have to be criticized?
It's a classic system task to control the protagonist's plot direction. The rhythm of the plot is quite tight, but I feel that the protagonist is just a puppet. It feels aggrieved to be beaten and defeated all the time (of course I only saw the protagonist and Lu Jin competing). Also, the system's performance gives way to the plot too harshly. The protagonist can copy entries when he comes into contact with other people's Qi. As a result, I have to fight against so many people but still get beaten up and give up. I can't understand it.
Author. Are there any women in this book?
Average, um, average