Honkai: Star Rail: I Come with a Naruto Mobile Game

The writing is good and the content is novel. However, there are too many jokes, which has reached the point of discomfort. You can appropriately reduce the investment in jokes and push more towards the plot. Personally, I prefer to interact more with the characters in Bengtie's original work. This is a very interesting thing and has an emotional aspect. The author can keep a proper distance from me. Most readers don't like stallions now. I believe you can also understand that the gym and other things are too vulgar. It is recommended to delete them. I really can't stand it on the surface. In short, it is very good overall, but you can continue to improve. Come on✊ 👍👍

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Generally speaking, I feel that there are not many real people in the whole book, but there is no sense of liveliness. It makes people feel that except for the characters, they are all dead people, and even some characters are portrayed like dead people. . . It's cool. I wrote it clearly, but I didn't see the text.

It's okay to do some work, but it's boring if you do too much.

There are too many memes, and not being able to pick them up affects the viewing experience.

Personal opinion: The character of the protagonist is good, the daily writing is not bad, the fighting is quite satisfactory, but the content of jokes is quite high. Most of the people who read this book were disappointed and disappointed, and I think the better thing is that the proportion of the two is quite satisfactory.

It's okay, but the author still needs to control the balance. The content of stalks is too dense. The stalks are like seasonings. You can add them, but too much will make it salty and sweet. You can check whether your novel feels a bit tattered, but the author has a good grasp of the rhythm, and the combat power is not bad. (Wudi Wen) In short, come on, come on

I found a small amount of fiction among the large number of memes

Idiot kid, there are too many memes and it's already causing discomfort.

After watching it, I felt like the Star God of Joy.