[Time Travel] [Multiple female protagonists are not harem novels! One PieceVice CaptainTrue SystemlessDevil FruitLuffy
"Luffy, long time no see"
The road ahead is long, don't ask about the return date, how to pursue freedom, and travel to different worlds.
Don't ask, have you ever fought for yourself in this life?
Hey, do you want to join our pirate group?
Ordinary people in the early stage - relying on their knowledge of other worlds to think and even their own talents, early and mid-stage domineering - after training for two years, they first obtain the fruit, the Ice and Fire Island Salamander Fruit, a phantom beast species!
The relationship is slow and real, the characteristics of each character are not changed, there are funny daily routines, passionate battles, and the early pace is fast.
There is no halo of the protagonist, it does not overwhelm the enemy's strength, and it has private settings.
The protagonist is not omnipotent. In the early stage, there are two colors of domineering, armed and informed. After finding his own freedom, he will have the overlord color. He insists on practicing physical skills with Sauron and develops and awakens after obtaining the fruits.
Initial setting of heroines: Robin, Nami, currently there are two, no more than 4 at most. Thank you! I want the relationship to be written more realistically, the heroine's character traits should be more obvious, the protagonist will be slowly influenced by modern thinking, and she should not hide anything and be sincere in the later stages of the relationship.
Don't consider accepting the Empress! ! ! Don't accept girls casually, there is logic and basis. The character of the protagonist is not very firm, nor is it very strong. He is just an ordinary person with a little talent. He will have random thoughts and confusion, but he will get better in the end. Looking back, the boat has passed the Ten Thousand Mountains! ! !
Reader comments
It's not well written, and I admit that.
I agree with what you think is poisonous.
If you don't want to read it, you can choose not to read it. Maybe it's fate that we meet again in the future. Maybe one day I will write a book that you are willing to read, haha.
If you don't understand anything, you can ask me here. Those who scold me will not reply, and I rarely reply to paragraph comments.
I don't write novels full-time, it's just a dream come true, it's also a hobby. As I grow up, I have fewer and fewer books that I like to read, so I wrote a pirate novel that I liked to read in junior high school. It was written by an office worker. I spent an extra two hours a day writing books. It was quite tiring to be honest, hahaha.
I have read both the negative and negative reviews. No matter what, thank you, even if I don't agree with your point of view.
The questions others have asked so far include:
1. What does it mean to have multiple female protagonists but not a harem? I think the problem of quantity and emotional lines is not a single female protagonist, so I wrote multiple female protagonists.
2. The poisonous point is that the protagonist takes it for granted. Everyone will have different thoughts when watching anime and comics. When you travel to the past and have strength, it is normal for your mentality to drift away. The Yonko Luffy was beaten by batman, Blackbeard was sure to eat at the beginning and was knocked away, etc...
3. The plot is fast-paced, fast or slow, just like that. The author is not good at writing and can't control it well.
4. It's quite normal to make typos and so on. It happens when you type faster.
5. Wait, you are welcome to add...
[Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
I will write some life advice, my own opinions, and some settings when the author talks about it. In fact, I quite want to start the second book right away. It may be a common problem of the author. I always feel that the next one will be better and I am more prepared...
The author is probably a novice. The plot is a bit tight and could be slowed down a bit. There are no bad points for the time being. It is just that the upper part cannot be connected to the lower part. It should be caused by skipping the plot. Overall, it is good.
Why have we decided on two female protagonists? Most of them are talking about Robin, but Nami is just aside and jealous. What you wrote like this is a poisonous point. Did you not think about how to solve it, or do you plan to postpone it until later?
Check again how long you have been reading, hahaha, the last comment was about looking forward to the newt fruit.
The early writing was a bit bland, but I feel like the writing becomes smoother and smoother later on. The emotional scenes aren't too fast, they're ambiguous.
The subject matter is novel, but the pace is quite fast, and it doesn't seem that fulfilling. I suggest you study other pirate novels. [Laugh]
The writing is okay, and the character design of the protagonist is also okay, but the plot is a bit too fast [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]
I looked back and saw that the writing was too tight.
Come on, come on, come on
The writing is okay. Please change the name. There will be more people reading.
Come on, the author is great
Very interesting, the content is exciting!
Pretty good, just a little bit lacking
This rhythm is pretty good
It's not well written, and I admit that. I agree with what you think is poisonous. If you don't want to read it, you can choose not to read it. Maybe it's fate that we meet again in the future. Maybe one day I will write a book that you are willing to read, haha. If you don't understand anything, you can ask me here. Those who scold me will not reply, and I rarely reply to paragraph comments. I don't write novels full-time, it's just a dream come true, it's also a hobby. As I grow up, I have fewer and fewer books that I like to read, so I wrote a pirate novel that I liked to read in junior high school. It was written by an office worker. I spent an extra two hours a day writing books. It was quite tiring to be honest, hahaha. I have read both the negative and negative reviews. No matter what, thank you, even if I don't agree with your point of view. The questions others have asked so far include: 1. What does it mean to have multiple female protagonists but not a harem? I think the problem of quantity and emotional lines is not a single female protagonist, so I wrote multiple female protagonists. 2. The poisonous point is that the protagonist takes it for granted. Everyone will have different thoughts when watching anime and comics. When you travel to the past and have strength, it is normal for your mentality to drift away. The Yonko Luffy was beaten by batman, Blackbeard was sure to eat at the beginning and was knocked away, etc... 3. The plot is fast-paced, fast or slow, just like that. The author is not good at writing and can't control it well. 4. It's quite normal to make typos and so on. It happens when you type faster. 5. Wait, you are welcome to add... [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I will write some life advice, my own opinions, and some settings when the author talks about it. In fact, I quite want to start the second book right away. It may be a common problem of the author. I always feel that the next one will be better and I am more prepared...
The author is probably a novice. The plot is a bit tight and could be slowed down a bit. There are no bad points for the time being. It is just that the upper part cannot be connected to the lower part. It should be caused by skipping the plot. Overall, it is good. Why have we decided on two female protagonists? Most of them are talking about Robin, but Nami is just aside and jealous. What you wrote like this is a poisonous point. Did you not think about how to solve it, or do you plan to postpone it until later?
Check again how long you have been reading, hahaha, the last comment was about looking forward to the newt fruit. The early writing was a bit bland, but I feel like the writing becomes smoother and smoother later on. The emotional scenes aren't too fast, they're ambiguous.
The subject matter is novel, but the pace is quite fast, and it doesn't seem that fulfilling. I suggest you study other pirate novels. [Laugh]
The writing is okay, and the character design of the protagonist is also okay, but the plot is a bit too fast [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] I looked back and saw that the writing was too tight.
Come on, come on, come on
The writing is okay. Please change the name. There will be more people reading.
Come on, the author is great
Very interesting, the content is exciting!
Pretty good, just a little bit lacking This rhythm is pretty good
Are common salamander fruits too weak?