[Transmigration] [Multiple female leads, but not a harem novel!] [One Piece] [Vice Captain] [No System, true to the original] [Devil Fruit] [Luffy]
“Luffy, long time no see.”
The road ahead is long. Don't ask when we'll return. How do you pursue freedom in another world?
Don't ask whether you've ever risked your life for yourself in this lifetime.
“Hey, do you want to join our pirate crew?”
An ordinary person at first. Using knowledge from another world, a knack for analysis, and his own talent, he develops Haki through the early and middle stages. After two years of training, he returns and obtains a Mythical Zoan Salamander Fruit on Punk Hazard, the island of ice and fire!
The romance develops slowly and realistically, without changing the characters' defining traits. There are funny everyday moments and thrilling battles, with a faster pace early on.
No protagonist plot armor, and enemies' strength is never toned down. Some elements are original to this story.
The protagonist isn't an all-rounder. At first, he has two types of Haki: Armament and Observation. Only after finding his own freedom does he gain Conqueror's Haki. He trains his physical skills with Zoro, then develops and awakens his abilities after obtaining a Devil Fruit.
Initial female leads: Robin and Nami. There are two main ones for now, and no more than four in total, please! I want the relationships to feel realistic and the female leads to have distinct personalities. The protagonist may gradually influence them through his modern way of thinking. Later, as they grow closer, he'll be honest and hide nothing.
No plans to pursue the Empress!!! No adding female leads without reason; there must be logic and justification. The protagonist isn't especially resolute or powerful. He's just an ordinary person with a little talent. He overthinks things and gets lost sometimes, but he'll find his way in the end. Looking back, the light boat has already crossed ten thousand mountains!!!
It's not well written, and I admit that. I agree with what you think is poisonous. If you don't want to read it, you can choose not to read it. Maybe it's fate that we meet again in the future. Maybe one day I will write a book that you are willing to read, haha. If you don't understand anything, you can ask me here. Those who scold me will not reply, and I rarely reply to paragraph comments. I don't write novels full-time, it's just a dream come true, it's also a hobby. As I grow up, there are fewer and fewer books I like to read, so I wrote a pirate novel that I liked to read in junior high school. It was written by an office worker. I spent an extra two hours a day writing books. It was quite tiring to be honest, hahaha. I have read both the negative and negative reviews. No matter what, thank you, even if I don't agree with your point of view. The questions others have asked so far include: 1. What does it mean to have multiple female protagonists but not a harem? I think the problem of quantity and emotional lines is not a single female protagonist, so I wrote multiple female protagonists. 2. The poisonous point is that the protagonist takes it for granted. Everyone will have different thoughts when reading anime and comics. When you travel to the past and have strength, it is normal for your mentality to drift away. The Yonko Luffy was beaten by batman, Blackbeard was sure to eat at the beginning and was knocked away, etc... 3. The plot is fast-paced, fast or slow, just like that. The author is not good at writing and control. 4. It's quite normal to make typos and so on. It happens when you type faster. 5. Wait, you are welcome to add... 😘😘😘 I will write some life advice, my own opinions, and some settings when the author talks about it. In fact, I quite want to start the second book right away. It may be a common problem of the author. I always feel that the next one will be better and I am more prepared...
The author is probably a novice. The plot is a bit tight and could be slowed down a bit. There are no bad points for the time being. It is just that the upper part cannot be connected to the lower part. It should be caused by skipping the plot. Overall, it is good. Why have we decided on two female protagonists? Most of them are talking about Robin, but Nami is just aside and jealous. What you wrote like this is a poisonous point. Did you not think about how to solve it, or do you plan to postpone it until later?
Check again how long you have been reading, hahaha, the last comment was about looking forward to the newt fruit. The early writing was a bit bland, but I feel like the writing becomes smoother and smoother later on, and the emotional scenes are not too fast, they are ambiguous.
The subject matter is novel, but the pace is quite fast, and it doesn't seem that fulfilling. I suggest you study other pirate novels. 😄
The writing is okay, and the character design of the protagonist is also okay, but the plot is a bit too fast 🍉 🍉 🍉 I looked back and saw that the writing was too tight.
Come on, come on, come on
The writing is okay. Please change the name. There will be more people reading.
Come on, the author is great
Are common salamander fruits too weak?
Pretty good, just a little bit lacking This rhythm is pretty good