Another World Reappears: I Will Rebuild the Foundation

It looks good, but the main character is a bit pretentious. I hope the author can adjust it. Everything else is fine. I hope it sticks to it. After all, there aren't many people writing SCP anymore.

It's pretty good. It's relatively good among SCP writers. I like it better. It's emotionally delicate and moving, making people feel the same, and it's impressive. The plot is fascinating, and the plot is very cleverly designed, with ups and downs without being abrupt, making people want to keep reading and wonder what will happen next. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and each character has its own personality, making people feel as if they really exist. The descriptions are vivid and specific, the scenes in the novel are described very vividly, and the details are well handled, making people feel as if they are actually there. The language is concise and powerful, the language is very concise, but every sentence is full of power, there is no unnecessary redundancy, and it is very comfortable to read. The rhythm of the novel is well grasped, and the combination of fast and slow will neither make people feel dragged out nor breathless. The details are handled skillfully. Many details are handled very cleverly. They may seem inconspicuous, but they play a key role in advancing the entire story. , The overall feeling is good, and I feel very satisfied after reading it. This is a novel that people are willing to read again and again. It's just that the number of words is a little short at the beginning, but I believe you can do better, and I will support you, come on! O(∩_∩)O👍

It is recommended that the author learn more about SCP. I just saw the chapter where the nine-tailed fox fights 008. To be honest, the nine-tailed fox is not that weak. There is also the helmet in the chapter 096. It is indeed there in the movie but it is of no use. In the end, the person wearing the helmet still died. And 682, it is not that small. It can be locked in a room of 5ⅹ5ⅹ5. In the original book, its basic data is more than 5 meters, and it has extremely high intelligence and evolutionary capabilities. It cannot be easily contained. Although I have not finished reading it, I have found many mistakes, so I suggest the author to learn more about SCP. Giving 4 stars is just for encouragement.

After reading the book review, I found that many people don't know what it means to be unique. In a decentralized writing community like ██████, the orthodox setting cannot be determined. Many project settings themselves are contradictory, so all settings are based on the author's worldview of this project. There is no setting that must be followed (don't be too outrageous, of course, if your writing is good enough, it is okay) Supplement: Book reviews and paragraph reviews Finally, although there are some problems with this book, overall the writing by you, the author, is very good.

Yes, but I want to say... When will the 5k start (I expect four to five hundred chapters if I can continue writing it, right?)

It's ok 👍 👍 It's okay to write, after all, the number of words is a bit short at the beginning 🤔 🤔 I'm looking forward to what comes next [laughing] [laughing]

Six Thousand Six Hundred and Sixty-Six looked great but suddenly ended

It must be given a five-star rating, it's so interesting.

It looks good and has a clear structure, but there are some loopholes that need to be filled in, and Frank's background needs to be constructed well. Also, describe some of the real life of the protagonist. You can also build a containment object with strong hiding ability for Frank, the kind that is not discovered by the system, and then the protagonist discovers something is wrong in some aspects of life and investigates it. You can add this plot. Of course, I am just suggesting it.

Come on, come on, I hope you don't get banned The author can also write about some niche and unpopular containment objects.