I Become ******

I see that there is no problem now, but the redundant parts can be deleted. By the way, please remember to comment more and try to give the author a rating first. Don't let the author stop updating [face covering]

The plot is quite traditional, but the writing is good, the plot is step-by-step, bold and exciting [laughter]

Change, the writing is top-notch, the description of women's sexual intercourse is well described, the lily harem story, the dragon girl setting, the Western world view of swords and magic, the daily adventure and the bond of partners are quite interesting, the emotional line is a bit sloppy, but the description is very sparse and the details are missing, tsk tsk. The update is discontinued, I hope the new book will be better, keep up the good work!

It's nice to read, the author's writing style is very good, and it also has a sense of Westerners speaking.

It feels pretty good. The author's writing is very good, but could it be faster [pout] and [give heart]?

The plot logic is fine, the writing is also good, and the author will praise people (definitely not because of the five stars given in the last article)

So far, it looks pretty good. Cheers, author.

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

Looks like I have to raise books again

The best issue by the author [Like]

It's okay, nothing poisonous

So far it's okay, keep it up [sending heartfelt wishes]

The plot is rich, and the protagonist's weaknesses are obvious and he is not invincible.

It's okay, just a bit like that in the front It's great to take that back

Okay, I finally found a good one.

It's very beautiful. I support the author to continue making more updates. Come on! Come on!

I found that the first ten chapters seemed to contain Sasha Sasha. Did the author get into trouble with Sasha? [Laughter and cry] [laughter and cry] [laughter and cry] [laughter and cry] There are also wheezing, various sound words. In the later stage of the author, I hope to reduce these sound words, just a little more appropriately, so that it will sound better when listening to the book [smile][smile][smile]. Also, the author, please write more, it is not enough to read.

So far, there's nothing toxic about it [Like]

It's my favorite book hehe

This book is gone, as if it had been raised.