Narutoplease All Stay Happy

Yan is an excellent protagonist in the teacher's works, and the author's novels are also very good. It is hard to imagine that the character I hate most in this book is not Danzo but the master of the hand who pushed the protagonist into the water tank, who is not even named in the article. Although I know that the protagonist may no longer have any bonds in the original world. , But I still think about whether Yan could have become a famous magician in the original world if he had not traveled through time, or whether he could have lived a plain but happy and healthy life, without having to die and be resurrected repeatedly, without having to think about how to save everyone, without having to kill people, and without suffering so many undeserved injuries? All in all, the author writes really well! [Praise]

Although I haven't finished reading it, I read dozens of chapters and couldn't help but post it. First of all, it may be criticized for being too abusive to the controller (I don't mean not to abuse other characters). However, the combination of the desire that is contrary to the system's mission and Yan's personality is destined to create a tragedy that Yan can bear alone. In order to complete the task and want others to be happy, Yan has the only option to pass on the pain to himself. In fact, I can quite understand Yan, because I also have a personality that takes everything on myself, which is very embarrassing, but there is nothing I can do about it. In fact, if the hook for cigarettes is wider, maybe cigarettes won't be so painful. Then there is the place I like The first is emotional delicacy, which does not mean that more description means delicacy, but a feeling that can describe the hidden thoughts of the character in a subtle or straightforward way. The rhythm of the plot is very comfortable, the details are appropriate, and it is very enjoyable. This ability to arrange and intersperse plots gives the novel crazy points. Then there is the different feeling this book gave me. I have read other fan fiction, and I always feel that it is manipulation wrapped in the name of "love". Whether the protagonists are acting or showing true feelings, it all gives me a very weird feeling. It's like those characters have been carefully planned to meet whomever they meet on a few days and nights. The sense of unreality runs through the whole body. The protagonists perfectly predict the characters and guide the characters' choices in the name of "love". Although it is also for the characters, it is very weird. This one is different, maybe because of Yan's character who is responsible for it alone, or because of the author's writing skills. It seems that the characters are really given a choice. Whether the characters move forward or backward is their choice from the bottom of their hearts. Including taking advantage of Nagato's psychology. How an event can affect a person is a very complicated process. Yan just tried his best to weave this drama. The forks in the characters' thoughts when watching, whether to the left or to the right, are all controlled by their own will. To put it in layman's terms, it seems to be written vividly, without OOC. After all, I haven't read many classics, so I don't know what it means to be a character alive. As for the writing style, it's okay and there are some parts that touch people's hearts. However, after ten years of killing fish in Yunfa, my heart is harder than a knife. Although some knives are a bit uncomfortable, they don't make me sad. Of course, I am not encouraging the author to improve his technique and then use it. I hope the author can use it to do something good, such as something warm and touching. Please (tears) In summary, this book is very good-looking. I don't know why it is so popular. Maybe it has something to do with the title and introduction. I was persuaded to quit many times. At first glance, I thought it was some low-fat and childish essay (I thought I had guessed the plot, but it was not the case) Be less abusive to the controller. Although the character needs to grow, some of the abusive aspects are completely unnecessary.

At first I was quite confused as to why the title of the book was "Please stay happy" After reading this, I remembered all kinds of knives (Ming smiled bitterly), thank you so much, author (இωஇ), don't do this next time Isn't this right? Didn't I come here to eat🍬? Why is the "ninja version of the desperate savior" in your mouth🔪? * In this desperate ninja system and world, how can there be any real happiness? It's like a curse, leaving only a sigh of pessimism, hopelessness and powerlessness, spreading lightly and slowly in the air, with no one paying attention.

Reading this book was really sad and made me cry. I really feel sorry for my sister [crying] I hope my sister will get better in the future and won't have to bear so much pain alone. I really want her to live a happy life [crying] [crying] But I have to say that the author's writing style is online, and the original characters are not OOC. I dare to admit that this is my favorite Naruto book. I really hope the author won't stop updating [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

It's really super invincible. The universe is awesome and dazzlingly sweet. I feel the cloying sweetness and honey in my throat. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah It's so beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! !

When I saw this book on the homepage, I just wanted to click in and read it, but I read it for half the night without paying attention. I woke up the next morning and quickly added this book to my bookshelf. I'm so lucky to get the real version. Although the plot is depressing throughout, children just love the sadistic feeling. The protagonist Yan is super gentle and a good woman but she was tortured so miserably😭😭 There won't be too many emotional descriptions, which is very in line with my taste. Although everyone has become patriarchal [I'm about to cry] I hope it will be followed by he. I highly recommend this book. The author's writing style is also great. I couldn't stop reading [I almost cried]

I really like this book and it took me a long time to review it. Although I read a lot of book reviews before reading it, and I was vaccinated, I still got bitten by a knife, but because it was so good, I stayed up late to catch up. Although the author keeps reminding OOC, the author has done a good job in character creation and plot connection! Give me the feeling: If it was like this, maybe he would really do this/say it. Then there is the protagonist, Yan, whose name makes people feel ethereal and cannot be grasped, but is trapped by the word happiness. After seeing it now, I hope that Yan can really find his own happiness in the future! (I really want to praise the author, I almost read all the comments and there are also replies)

I was persuaded to quit the book several times because of the introduction, but after reading it carefully, the writing style is very good and I feel it is very delicate. The characters' emotions are not obtrusive, and the bond with the characters is well depicted. Although it is sad in the early stage, it is still very interesting overall.

The author writes very delicately. From the beginning when Yan reluctantly completes the task, to the later when we just need to die alone, the emotional changes in the middle are very heartbreaking. Yan has been helping and saving the people around him, but when he saved them, did he ever think about his weight in the other person's heart? We Yanyan have become paranoid like this. ꒦ິ^꒦ິThe emotional line and so on are really good. Author, you must keep writing it. It's been a long time since I've seen a good Naruto fanfic. ᵒ̴̶̷̥́ㅂᵒ̴̶̷̣̥̀ , In terms of plot and emotional description, the author's psychological description is very detailed, there is really no OOC at all, and Yanyan's character design is also very good, is he a desperate savior? That smells delicious😋. Dad, I will always follow you

The emotions are very delicate, and the relationship between everyone is very warm. There is an emotional basis between them at the beginning. It feels like it is a foreshadowing by the author. If not, I am overthinking it [laughing]. All in all, it's very beautiful, the transitions are not abrupt, and the emotional communication is also very clever.

Hmm, in the front, the contact with everyone is very new and great. I feel that the magic trick of the protagonist is quite novel, but the acting in the back is a bit awkward. It is about 17 chapters. I haven't read much of it.

Overall, it's a highly recommended book, but it's too sad. Most of the books on Naruto are quite sad (I've only read them myself), and this book stands out from them all. I had to read it after reading it halfway through, so as not to have a heart attack and feel so sorry for the heroine [crazy]

Very well written! There are very few such redemptions among Naruto fans. The characters fit well and the writing is smooth and the plot is reasonable. I am so happy to see this article on Tomato!

This book must be read to the later stages! There may be some nitpicks in the early stages, and the introduction is a little bit uninteresting, but in the later stages it's really good. First of all, the image creation of Yan is very successful. It is a non-traditional fan fiction, and it has been difficult step by step until now. Then there is a problem. In the early stage, the knife points were a bit dense and the opening was a bit low, and the character creation was not in place. However, in the later stage, the author really actively interacted and made a lot of improvements. The problems were basically solved. I currently think it is the best-looking fanfic I have ever read. Let me summarize first, the protagonist's twisted and persistent pursuit of "happiness for all", a big story about love and sacrifice, sin and redemption. (Good product, using negative behaviors such as deception to achieve positive results of redemption and salvation) In terms of writing style, I think I should have some basic skills, especially in the later period when the style of writing has obviously stabilized. It is a very refreshing place. The psychology of the characters is not a riddle at all, and it is endlessly refreshing to write it directly, but it is not abrupt or childish. If the character's psychological description is not in place, in fact many of the behaviors are a bit nonsense. For example, I was a little confused at first about why Yan didn't choose to cooperate, but the psychological description is good, and I respect the original work. In many places, I didn't even consider how difficult the protagonist is... It's probably the sequelae of reading too many Shuangwen... Secondly, I really feel that this character is very strong and intelligent, but also very self-loathing (maybe this is a foreshadowing?) She looks cruel but is actually extremely kind. From what I have seen so far, Yan does not show much aggression. Although she has done so many things, I still think she is a very gentle person. In fact, in the later stages, this kind of psychology is more related to the issue of moral ambiguity. For example, in the later stage, when the war is forced to start for the tailed beasts, and the blood is shed and the family is destroyed (most fan fiction descriptions of ninja battles or wars ignore this point, ignoring the cruel nature of war, but this book is also very careful in the portrayal of small characters, it is very likely that it will not be skipped, and it may also describe the death of a specific character). The protagonist's heart will most likely be shaken and painful. [Covers face] Another knife point and I'm convinced... Regarding the setting, it is very novel. I also think that depriving pain is actually a manifestation of self-numbing and self-punishment. Of course, it also provides many conveniences, such as advantages in combat. As for the existence of the "system", convenience and golden fingers are definitely a lot, but they are more like another kind of shackles. There are also twin contracts or transfer seals, which are related to sharing and sharing chakra or life, but smoke itself cannot share psychological pain. The shaping of ""'s new identity has just begun, so I won't talk about it for now. In terms of emotional lines, the tension is very high. Itachi's dependence beyond his siblings, Shisui's gentle and firm emotions, Nagato's twisted and persistent cooperative relationship, Kakashi's affectionate and forced hostile relationship, and Mikoto Fugaku's beautiful family relationship that she dares not face. (I don't know how much of the storyline between Sasuke and Gaara has been written yet). In addition to love, family relationships are also described, but I feel that some are lacking in friendship, and the friendship line of Lin (Izumi and Inari?) Is rarely described. But it is understandable that since Yan has chosen to embark on this path, he probably will not take the initiative to make deep friendships to avoid dragging his friends into it... In terms of character creation, it is one of the best books I have ever read. I think the most difficult character to create in fan fiction is Shisui, like Nagato. One is that there are few scenes in the original book, and the other is a villain. But Shisui in this book is really lovable, gentle and tolerant but not imbecile. He is unhappy only once in the whole book, and he quickly realizes the nature of the problem. Nagato... I also realized after reading that Nagato is a very gentle character, but also a little morbid in it. The only person in the book who fully trusts and helps Yan is Nagato (Shisui is not sure if it is 100%, it should be). The protagonist has a lot of pain that he cannot tell. Nagato has had many conflicts with Yan in the past, which made my heart skip a beat... In the later stage, it is obvious that he may have begun to understand and accompany Yan. At least Yan is not alone in this regard. The plot allocates this part. There are grand scenes such as the night of genocide and the capture of the Three-Tails, as well as plots such as eating ramen in the middle of the night, buying roses at a stall, and listening to the rain at dusk (it can be said that it effectively relieved the depressing atmosphere, especially Shisui's confession, I really felt that smoke was happy for a moment.) It reshaped the relationship between the Akatsuki organization and turned it into a warmer big family. The emotions are particularly, particularly delicate, which may be related to the author's writing skills. There are also several plot discussion points. Why can't the protagonist value himself? I personally think that not cherishing oneself is actually the best thing (although I really want Yan to be happier and better off), but if Yan is really forced to realize that he needs to cherish himself, it will be really, really difficult. He can neither sacrifice to hurt himself nor hurt the people around him. Also, why don't you choose to share the responsibility for cigarettes? I can understand why Yan wants to be crazy and personally control everything, not because of his strong desire to control, but because these things themselves are life-threatening (from Yan's perspective), but I still think it will be richer if everyone is added in... Anyway, it's just that the author was a little too quick in writing in the early stage, so it's easy to lose the rating. If the early and late stages were written the same, the scores wouldn't be so ugly, at least there would be scores above eight. Come on, author! ! I'm really curious about the true identity of the "system" (I don't think it's White Zetsu or Black Zetsu, otherwise it would be too easy to guess) and the role of Obito!

It's so good, I don't know what to say. I only read twenty chapters and it's really the first one that I praised so much [Blowing Kisses]. The writing is super delicate and you won't be bored at all [Adoration]. And what I like most is that the characters in it are not OOC at all [Sentimental]

The writing is really good. Tomatoes are like chaff. I really want to see when the boss will return in the ending. Although it's a knife, it suits my taste very well. It's very satisfying to eat. It matches the brain waves of the author. I want to see the water line, I want to see it, I want to see it, I want to see the boss come back [crying]

You can tell. Looking for candy in the glass ballast. !

Very nice! I read more than 30 chapters in one go, and the character descriptions were very vivid and didn't feel OOC to fit the characters' personalities. The development of the plot is interesting and there are not only occasional funny and humorous narrations, but also the points of each character...

Personally, I feel that the score of 6.9 Is low. Although the plot lacks polish, it is innocuous. I still recommend it. The heroine saves the ninja world and everyone she cares about, and then puts all the pain and difficulties on herself. The emotions are very good. If you finish reading this book, I also recommend a book called "Naruto: Becoming Strong by Becoming a Beautiful and Strong Supporting Role" (spontaneous promotion). It is very interesting. Finally, I hope this book has a happy ending (the heroine should be better!) Otherwise it will be a bit painful.

It's very, very good-looking. Maybe I prefer watching sadistic films, so it just feels right. I hope the teacher can continue. Can the teacher add more plots about Obito? There is really very little about him.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, it's so beautiful! ! ! ! ! Author, you are my god! ! ! ! ! ! The plot is interesting and smooth, and the characters are well developed! ! ! ! !

It's a treasure trove, I recommend reading it. It's been a long time since I've seen a book with the best detailed descriptions. Some of the writing nowadays is getting worse and worse, and it is rare to see such a good book with detailed descriptions.

I have feelings for virtual characters, and I will cry for them and laugh for them. But you are suffering too much here. Please love yourself, okay? There are too many knives. Could you please give me more sugar?

It's quite to my liking, but I don't know why fewer people see it.

I love this book so much. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I can't help but comment. The slight self-destructive tendency in the main controller is really good. I love this bite... Although it hurts a bit from the knife (but it hurts very well). Boss, when will you come back? Wuwuwuwuwu, foreign persimmons can't cook without you.

Crying, why did it suddenly drop to six points? When I first started watching, my score was quite high. I really like it. It's really beautiful. The heroine is often injured and damaged in battles. It really poked me. I really like it. Why are there so few people? Www

It's so well written [blowing kiss] I like cigarettes very much [admiration] but if you forget about cigarettes, it will hurt. I hope cigarettes can live as freely as cigarettes and no longer sacrifice themselves for others [cry]

Nothing to say, it's a great book. You can see how some gentle characters can't help but become male ghosts and female ghosts. They just want the smoke to stay. But cigarettes also have their own reasons. If I had the same choice as cigarettes, I would never give up. Come on, teacher. . . I guess that the system is the consciousness of a certain person or a few people (what a clichéd guess). I feel that the system has been very ghosty since it appeared. You really smoke it. You start attracting ghosts at frame 0.

It's a bit sadistic, but it's very well written and fits the character very well.

The protagonist is gentle and paranoid, bent on saving but ignoring his own status in the hearts of others. Only in this way does the awkward character appear flesh and blood. The author's writing style is so good, so thumbs up! 💪